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You doing alright man?
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I'm doing as well as can be expected.
nice bonus chapter, spoling your readers hm ^^
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That's the game plan
I'd say your attempt on writing smut wasn't horrible. It reminded me sex scenes in the movies. What you did here is probably one step above that, but no more. You haven't went into details on how aroused and dripping Twilight were, how Duskfall eat carpet in details and skipped Nightmare entirely. In the end you end up with slightly smutty, but mostly wholesome chapter which wasn't horrible. It just wasn't smut enough to count.
That should be vulva. Uvula is the thing in your throat.
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too many Vs and Us and my brain starts melting