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I'll withhold the urge to inform them about CIF3, then.
You could say that Rainbow spends most of her time high as a kite...if not higher...
You're also supposed to put a collar on your puppy, along with a leash when you take it out for a walk...
Oof. That auhors note. Hope it works out well for you.
Not to mention that it's 2020, with a whole bunch of employment options rendered unworkable due to the pandemic. And, er, your mental issues...yeah.
Anyway, those five factors all debunk that "lazy layabout" insult.
...Can I say how much I appreciate your stories, and, er, you? You spend your time writing fantastic stories, for free, for complete strangers. Now that's generosity, right there.
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Some words are just more damaging to certain people. I've been called lazy by teachers and family basically my whole life, in part due to my mental illness. Even when I put forth my best effort. It was especially bad in my English classes. English was easily my worst subject in school and my father and teachers both made me feel like I wasn't trying at all when I could only scape a 65% on a spelling test, even if I had spent hours studying. It wasn't until I started writing semi-seriously at 16 instead of as just a hobby that I developed hundreds of mnemonic devices just to remember how to spell something as simple as friend. Grammar was much the same.
It wasn't until my mental illness was diagnosed that my dad started to back off, but the teachers never did.
My little brother knows being called lazy is a very sore subject for me. Yet he did so anyway. I wrote the author's note a couple of hours after the incident, so maybe I was being somewhat misleading when I said his claiming that I was responsible for his mutt was what made me really angry. To be more accurate, it's what's caused me to stay angry.
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Kinky.
Okay i can’t help but picture Lightning Bliss when i see that description
Personal space is definitely a luxury these days
Ah, a reference that I'm proud to have gotten. What else should one expect from an Andalite... if I spelled that correctly?
Attempt to describe taste, and you'll garner their curiosity. Let them experience the sensation, and they'll attempt to devour... pretty much everything.
great chapter~ i also can't wait how they deal with mr racist.. [neighsay]
Also your brother sucks. Please double down with your dad so he won't 'change his mind' or something if brothers try to guilt them about you. Ask him plainly "is this my dog?" if they say no "Not my dog, not my responsibility"
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Same here. For those who don’t know, Lightning Bliss is a Bronx reviewer/analyst on YouTube.
Your bro sounds like a spoiled brat, but I ain’t here for the drama. I’m glad you’re doing well in times like these. Looking into Dusk’s personal business is like reading Rarity’s diary and no one should look into either one. Besides, Dusk’s personal business ain’t hurting anyone.
Yo don't murder him. Just do to him what he is doing to you. Make him do your chores bro
With the speed and quality of your writing, you could very easily become a professional writer, I believe. Even before that, setting up a Ko-fi could gather a not-insignificant amount of income.
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Bliss was definitely where I got the idea for her size from. I thought it would be cute to have a mini Alicorn. The rainbow mane was just a facet of Harmonia seeming to love rainbows and crystals.
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One of my eventual goals is to become a published author, and I have an idea, but every time I sit down to try and write it, I just get a terrible case of writer's block. I know how I want it to start, I know how I want it to end, but all the important middle bits are just out of my reach.
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If I tried to force my chores on him, we'd never get anything done. I can just imagine the dishes piled high in the sink now! The horror! The horror!
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It's time for a food battle! Harmonia vs. Kriby! BEGIN!
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I definitely took Bliss's size as an inspiration. The rainbow mane was because rainbows seem to be on of Harmonia's things alongside crystals. I tried to write the description with enough differences to Bliss, but even in my head Harmonia and Bliss look like they could be cousins, if not siblings.
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It's a fine line to tread. What if Dusk had been practicing necromancy? It's one thing to keep a private diary, it's another for a powerful Alicorn to completely lock out everything and everyone with powerful enchantments. Especially when that Alicorn might not be as stable as she wants others to believe she is.
But this is where the trust comes in. Luna, for all her worries, did not attempt to break down the wards. She asked Dusk directly if Dusk was doing something illegal. Even then, Dusk felt like her privacy was being invaded, which it was to a certain extent. So yeah, tricky stuff all around.
Good chapter, end felt alittle rushed but good overall.
Your brother seems like a test, I'd tell him to piss off personally
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Yeah, I'm not 100% sure why Dusk just had a meltdown. I expected her to get annoyed and snarky, but then she just ran off to her room to cry. I think the pressure is starting to get to her. Might have to move something I had planned up in the timeline before she goes from bad to worse.
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I guess that makes more sense. I guess its name doesn't cover unrelative dimensions in space, eh?
After I read that I realized Harmonia is a nice name.
I would love to see a fan art of her.
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Observers perspective, I'm with you. If it were my Brother... can't tell. My siblings are much nicer than that. I'd probably deck anyone who wasn't my family who said that though. Family makes things go all wibbly-wobbly though. Either way, hope it resolves cleanly between them.
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I'd like to see fan art too, but my art skill is limited to wobbly stick figures.
Love the Animorphs reference thrown in there!
*Munch-Munch*
"Spike! Stop eating the castle! Ящер хренов…"
You owe your entitled brother nothing Author.
Honestly just for his comments I would stop watching the dog completely and call animal control if he neglects the dog.
I feel you even if it was a thieving little sister instead. Bottling my emotions to not smack her left me with very unhealthy mental habits for a long time.
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Plus the fact that they were thinking something bad doesn't say much about trust.
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Unless they had a good reason to believe that something bad was going on then they should have butt out. So she made extra sure they couldn't get in. That isn't illegal.
All I could think of was this….
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