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Holy f. I'm sorry to hear that. Take all the time to rest dude.
This chapter is fine I think. Could it have been extended by 1k~2k details of bonus stuff or when she got back maybe. Not really a lot. To add since you covered Dusk thoughts on Rainbow.The other girls world is really the only part that feels “forced” I guess. Something extra but, not all that needed or vital beside being filler I guess.
Mostly curious if Dusk plans to be alone during that time or if any of her friends or family will be around. Kinda expecting for Harmonia to be present to possibly talk Dusk out of doing this one more time or watching as she potentially just hurts herself. Imagine it’s the same plan when Tom and Twilight we’re going to separate but, not sure how she’s going to again fully beside some ritual. I think I f that was the ending of this chapter it would have been more satisfying. Maybe that was the next chapter? The setup and how it’s going down.
Side note take a few weeks off if you must: I can’t say I know what you’re going through but I do wish all of you well. For what it’s worth I hope everyone is fine and you have my sympathy.
Thats terrible to hear man, i hope you're feeling better soon
First, one minor correction to get out of the way.
Should be "tarry".
As much as I've enjoyed Duskfall as a character and will hate to see her go, I hope that she's able to bring Twilight and Tom both back safely. And I look forward to seeing how the next story goes from there.
Lastly and most importantly, I hope you're okay and that you and your family are safe. I also hope your brother gets some help.
Hey don't worry about the timing, take all the time you need to pull yourself together. We're patient, we can wait for as long as you need to recuperate.
Dude. It's ok. Just take as long as ya need.
Good chapter
Fuck bro. I only kinda know how that feels cause my cousins live with us for awhile and tried to stab each other, but being held hostage..... shit man take your time. Is he dead? The cops should have tried to go nonlethal. Sorry if that's insensitive.
Oh man... good luck.
I still want to see more Harmonia!
*Needs.
You know, I'd like to see a fic where Princess Twilight does actually get to respond to Sunset's messages, and helps her with the Friendship Games - whilst the actual human Twilight is still a Prepper. Would the royal's presence change anything, other than shocking Crystal Prep and Twilight? Would the Princess be able to get through to her human self about her magic-sucking device, and prevent Midnight?
Just one of a few fic ideas I haven't been able to get rid of, along with an actual "New Game +" Xenoblade Chronicles 2 save where the five player characters and their Blade partners remember the events of the game, but the villains (Torna and Indol) don't, so the good guys have to work to prevent any storyline deaths whilst also stopping the bad guys. Because the player characters retain their memories, Rex would need to go collect the sleeping Pyra from the Ancient Ship (and meet Nia this way too), but would then already have access to the full power of the Aegis and the Catalyst Scimitar.
Take as much time as you need.
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He's fine, for a given value of fine. He's currently in a police psychiatric hospital awaiting the results of some psychoanalyzing.
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Sounds like you'd be a fan of the Infinite Loops Project. https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops
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Thank you, everyone. Your support means more than I can adequately describe.
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Next chapter is going to open with Duskfall alone in the throne room of the abandoned Castle of the Two Sisters. Everything that comes after is pretty heavy into the spoilers and this is one of the times I need to keep it a secret.
Then there'll be at least one epilogue chapter in a similar vein to what I did in A Human, a Pony Princess, and a Mistake.
I'm currently awaiting cover art for Book 3, but given it's the holiday season, it's probably going to be awhile on that front.
Thank you for your concern. Everyone's in one piece, but we're all still kinda shook up. It's not every day the police take down your baby brother in your own home.
I hope they can help your brother im sorry you had to go through that ill keep you and your family in my prayers as idk if theres anything i can physically do to help.
Sorry to hear about that happening to you.just relax as much as you can. Also can i send a quick pm of a guess of what happens to dusk/twilight/tom?
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Sure, go right ahead. I can't promise truthful answers tho~
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Your thoughts and prayers are enough
I hope things get better for you soon. That must be hard to deal with.
im sorry to hear about your brother i hope he gets the help he needs
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It's the break from all previously made assumptions about how far my youngest brother would go that is the most jarring. I knew he was a selfish narcissist with an unhealthy temper, but there was a line I just assumed he'd never cross. Clearly I was wrong.
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He's currently in a psyche ward and they're trying to "diagnose" him. Who knows what'll come of it.
Truth be told I am guessing that due to how much memories dusk has that she will get her own body if you brings back Twilight and Tom Heck in the early part i was thinking with only a couple months worth of memories she would be and infant that was a combination of Tom new Body and Twilights Designs
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All will be told in due time
To think Sunset could the type of lady that Duskfall like...
Also, I think Dusk is forgetting something, she know that in the future she will sign a contract, if she don't exist then she can't sign the contract
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True, but just because she can sign a contract in the future doesn't mean that the terms of that contract don't specify that part of its terms of fulfillment is her no longer existing. Even if the Winter Solstice Ritual fails (which it won't) Duskfall would have just continued on looking for a way to bring back Tom and Twilight with the assumption that it would be her end.
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U do realize u kinda spoiled ur own story a lol bit right?
Do you think your going to do a third story about this? I would love to see tom in a new body learning about the new body. see how twilight reacts too all the stuff that happen when they was gone.
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I'm aware. For whatever mentally deficient reason, I have a thing about letting my readers know the broad strokes of what's going to happen, but keeping the details a secret. The Devil's in the detail, after all. I like getting guesses as to how something is going to happen. Then laughing manically when those guesses are close, yet still utterly wrong. The only time I break this habit is for real show stopper moments, like the end of last book.
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I've only said I'm going to do a book 3 80 bajillion times
There might even be a book 4, depending on how things pan out.
Of course, all my clever points were spent in the title of the 1st book and I went into clever debt when coming up for the title to this book. So I have no idea how I'm going to afford a decent title for books 3 and 4.
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Ok I thought they shot him for a minute. But yea man take your time.
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Lol i understand perfectly
I noticed u did not say how it wouldnt fail just that it wouldnt ;P i was just sayin it for those reading that have the same thought processes.
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No, they had tasers on them, but wound up just taking him down with some good, old fashioned CQC.
Well, this happened.
The scariest beasts hide in the hearts of the closest people or how does this saying going...
I wish you and your family well. Things'll never be the same, but they'll get better. I doubt you want our pity, though. I sympathize you, but fortunately can't fully relate nor I wish anyone to be able to since this only comes from personal experience no one should go through.
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I personally love MLP Loops. Haven't seen latest 20 or so chapters and not sure how to return there. Too long to read from the beginning all over again to get to the latest few chapters, there's no reason to considering chapters are mostly standalone, but at the same time I'd love to do exactly this.
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The DDLC, RWBY, Pokemon, Sly Cooper, and MLP loops are the ones I focus on.
I'm really sorry to hear you and your family had to go through that.
I like how she nipped that in the bud in no time flat considering how bad it could have gotten and twilight in the comic was lazy. Your friend is practically next door and you instead of going to her and actually being there for her you give a cheesy lesson on hate by telling about the windgos. That didn't really help because if the cmcs hadn't confess they would still believe that she was guilty. They might have decided that she lied to twilight and they weren't ever friends.