- Member Since 7th Feb, 2017
- offline last seen 3 hours ago
doomie-22
Just a guy who likes writing and reading some pony fanfiction.
doomie-22
Joined 7th Feb, 2017 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- doomie-22 · 3.2k words · 78 17 · 2.3k views
- PegPony · 2.2k words · 81 30 · 2.5k views
- Autumnblazelover61 · 4.6k words · 28 35 · 1.4k views
- PegPony · 30k words · 24 17 · 1k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 4.6k words · 3.6k views
- PegPony · 5.8k words · 74 33 · 2k views
- styx · 18k words · 99 18 · 2.6k views
- MoonaKnight13 · 5.6k words · 71 17 · 4.9k views
Featured In63
Clopfics11,567 stories ·15,816 members
The Writers' Group56,563 stories ·9,303 members
Rainbow Dash7,265 stories ·4,146 members
Applejack2,130 stories ·1,770 members
Cutie Mark Crusaders4,489 stories ·1,748 members
Twilight is Best Pony6,396 stories ·3,071 members
Twilight Sparkle12,305 stories ·4,760 members
- Struggling Authors25,207 stories ·3,673 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.216 seconds
Total duration
615 users online
978,259 hits today, 2,454,720 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
You rock
10317432 Thank you.
This was delightfully and relentlessly lewd, though I must critique that there wasn't much sense of character in the dialogue for most of it, like some of the word usage by Rainbow, Rarity, and others felt either too interchangeable or outright OOC (such as Rainbow saying "fabulous", she'd be more likely to say "rockin'" or "awesome" or just "great"), and also that some of the story felt redundant (loving/lovingly was used twice for example) and rather contradictory (Applejack seems to switch her opinion from one to the other in one passage...that for some reason I can't find right now. Whenever I read this again and find it I'll fix it...), and lastly, the more lewd behavior is given no real explanation or support from the narrative on what or why the characters are acting this way so suddenly, and no, them just being horny is not enough without giving something on how they are feeling personally in my book. A bit disappointing to me, but this is still, as I said above, impressive in its relentless and delightful lewdness, just in my opinion it needed a bit more "oomph" in certain areas to make it have more substance to go with the flash
10317713 Thank you.
10317762
You're welcome...interesting choice of response to my long-winded mix of critique and compliment
10317780 Fixed.
10317807
Do you mean the stuff I said, as in the story? It looks like you removed a bunch of stuff too, and I never said you needed to do that...
10317885
Good idea
10317916 I know.
10317885 I like the way you think.
10317920 Agreed!
10317969
Okay...
and all those who downvote your fics they don't know what a good fic is there just haters ignore them
10318000
10318009
What?
10318010 Let them have their opinion. No skin off my nose.
10318011
Ok
Woah. There's actually more characters having a role in this despite what the tags and description says.
10318025 Originally, yes, but that content has been exited out.
please make a bonus chapter with big mac and spike and applebloom
I did not expect this story to get so hot, good on you man. Loved ever word of this 🤩👌
10324803 Thank you.
10322292 I might just make that its own separate story.
Are changelings involved? Because Rainbow suddenly is Applejack, and then Twilight.
Also, the description does not match the story (who won the strength test?).
10401731 What are you talking about?
Also, if you've seen the episode, then you should know that Applejack won the strength test.
10401897
From the story description:
From the story:
Glancing down, he noticed that Rainbow had stopped licking and kissing his cock to instead pay attention to his balls, which, despite his small size, were impressively large. He was impressed to find that Applejack was able to get both of them inside her mouth. [...]
Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash resumed giving his shaft kisses and licks. Opening her eyes and noticing that Twilight had moved, she took the opportunity to resume her blowjob before Twilight had joined them.
10403192 Thank you.
Remember when Spike needed the CMC's help of taking care of the Mane 6's pets?
10404270 Yeah, what about it?
10404576
Ever wonder how he has to make up to them to keep quiet so he didn't get in trouble about his gem obsession cake?
10405128 Oh, I see where you're going with this.
10405174
It'll be their personal Love House Time.
10405257 How would you fit that into the episode, though?
10405380
Actually this'll be later on.
I don't understand how this fic has a considerable amount of dislikes when it's this great. K really loved it!
Yeah, might be my Spike bias speaking but him getting the fuck in some tight ponuts is everything to me. I also love that fact that he has balls, I always appreciate it when artists or fic makers give dragons or lizards balls, it's just hotter than them not having them. And that also leads me to believe Spike has a humanoid dick in this which I also love, that's my canon penis look for him, as weird as that sounds lol. And finally, that he seems hung in the fic. I just can't be convinced that he's not, he'll always be a shortstack stud in my mind.
So yeah, there's more I love about this story but if I said it all I'd be here making a novel. So just know that it was a great read! I think I'll keep an eye out for your other lewd fics down the line. I hope you especially do more with Spike!
10414431 Thank you.
This one was really hot, nice.
10428142 Thank you.
That cover is stretching the limits of sfw into a very fine film
11051216 It's actually a screencap from "Fall Weather Friends."