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PiMan

PiMan #1 · Apr 8th, 2021 · 5 · · Epilogue ·

I feel like someone should comment on this story and I've decided it will be me.
The 17:27 rating I currently see on this story is about right, or maybe just a little too negative. It's not total trash by any means, but the chapters are too short and some of the dialogue is a bit rough.
If you're looking for a quick fuck between Twilight the human and Spike the dog, this story may float your boat.

PegPony

PegPony #2 · Apr 9th, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·

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Thank you for your feedback! I will attempt to make sure that I work on those flaws in future stories :)

Julius

Julius #3 · Jun 14th, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·

man this last chap turned very dark quickly

PegPony

PegPony #4 · Jun 14th, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·

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Yeah, it does turn dark rather fast, I just felt like it was right for the story :)

That One Brony Dude

That One Brony Dude #5 · Jun 24th, 2021 · 1 · · Epilogue ·

What she did next had even more malicious intent, she briefly returned to Equestria and with some hard work and a little bit of magic, she had manipulated the video of her and Spike together in such a way that the video made it look like it was Sunset Shimmer in her place with some other random dog that nobody would be able to track down. She then returned to Canterlot High and posted the video on every social media site she could find using an anonymous account and even e-mailed the video to every police station within five miles of Canterlot High with an anonymous e-mail address.

That... seems like a pretty tech-savy thing to do for someone who had only just discovered the existence of computers.

Twilight learned fast when she was pissed off.

Honestly, IDK how pissed she was, as nobody can learn the basics of computing that quickly, especially on their own. I dare anyone to try to teach their stereotypical Baby-Boomer (grand)parents¹ how to create anonymous social media accounts and fake email accounts in less than a day. It can't be done!

¹Yes I know, some Boomers are indeed tech-savy. However, for the purpose of this comment, they don't count. Emphasis should be placed on the "stereotypical" part of that sentence.

PegPony

PegPony #6 · Jun 24th, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·

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I admit that for the sake of the story I did somewhat gloss over the fact that Twilight was able to handle technology so quickly and so effectively as to ruin Sunset Shimmer's life, I'm afraid I have no other excuse than to simply say that I'm terrible when it comes to pacing! Sorry!

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