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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
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Hmm, it’s a good start. I think you could have given more details, but what you did have there was nice.
Not bad. You want to be careful with some of your wording when it comes to sex though. Don't thinks it's possible for a Spike this size to have his dicks reach Celestia's gullet.
And move details on Spike's current height would be great.
My guess, from reading that his face/head is at a perfect height with Celestia's flank, means he went though a grown spurt and probably stands eye to eye, or maybe a few inches taller with Luna (Spike is bipedal/Luna is four legged).
Good start, all the same. Interested in seeing how far this goes.
Thanks for this
9785844
Thanks! Yeah, description is something I've always been struggling to improve.
9785914
Yeah, wondered if the pic was too much, guess now I know!
9786035
Thank you! I'll try to describe that better in the future; Spike is pretty much eye-level with Celestia's plot.
9786162
No problem. Not used to writing Celestia (Only really used her human counterpart much in another story( but I hope I did okay!
9786406
Lucky bastard! Eye to plot all his young life. Now he gets a taste of the best one!
9786421
Exactly! Not sure how Spike controls himself!
Another sexy chapter. The ending felt like it was setting up an ending, or an epilogue. Hoping for neither in all honesty. Great job!
9812142
Thanks! Unfortunately, I don't plan for more than one more chapter unless there's some really great idea that comes to mind, as the pair finding how compatible they are seems like a good way to close it off, and I don't want to do a 'Spike makes a harem out of every mare' fic; even when people requested that I tried to make it plausible that the three I chose as the main parts of his herd (Rarity, Twilight, AJ) would believably (At least in a clop sort of way) want to be with him.
9812194
Yeah, so the way I read it was right. That's still cool. As for the harem, nah. Luna is the only one I would really add to this pair. And maybe, maybe Twilight. Only because imagining Twilight being sexed up by Celestia and Spike, would be so incredibly hot! Hell, I don't even think there's a pic of these 3 going at it!? Which is really surprising!
Great job, with what ever you decide to do with this story.
9812414
Yeah, I figured Luna or Twilight would be the most logical, but admittedly I'm not a fan of Luna. Might consider Twilight though...
9812548
Never understood in scenarios like this when Spike is having sex he starts to become larger because of greed growth, doesn't he need to start hording items for that to happen
9812619
Yeah, probably doesn't make sense canon-wise, but it's fun for clop scenarios!
I like it can't wait for next chapter
9825154
Thanks! Could be a while, swamped with projects, but there will be a new addition to the cast next chapter.
This chapter is hot, but all this talk about eggs swimming in spunk is making me think one of them is going to forget about the potion or build up a tolerance for it.
Also curious if Luna is going to give in and get rutted eventually.
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They'll take precautions, but it's quite likely Celestia and Twilight will choose to bear his offspring someday! It's possible Luna could join in their little group too, but this will all happen offscreen as I don't intend to write anymore for this story unless I have some good reason to, sorry. It was originally only intended as two parts, but decided to extend it with this last chapter since people seemed to want it, plus I thought it would be fun for Twilight to join in. Thanks for reading!
9829950
Thanks for writing it, it was super hot.
9829986
No problem, glad you liked it.
Hey do you remember Spike's pen pal?
9830228
Not sure what you're referring to, sorry?
9830259
Gabby? His Pen Pal?
Nice ending.
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Honestly, I didn't remember until you brought her up! Not really a fan of her I'll admit, she's just kinda there for me.
9830659
Thank you, wasn't entirely sure how to end it, my endings tend to be too abrupt!