Eh, you had me 110% until the cucking. Also because it sounds like Mac probably isn't going to take the potion willingly, and him losing his identity and being "mind-broken" into being a cheap toy for Cheerilee is just... yeah. Not my cuppa tea.

Hope others like it, though!

Well, I'm pumped. Seeing Cherri in a situation that isn't

!) her being a complete hackysack to fate
2) domming without turning into a murderess
3) sexying it up without involving the Crusaders.

Gotta say, this is one of the better fics Spoonfed's... well, spoonfed to us. Pulls me through towards a well-paced takeover by Cheerilee, she's saucy in a way that reminds of the old Charlotte-centric fics, and despite the slight horndog-iness of Big Mac does get a bit disjarring when the topics switch to the Crusaders, that Cherilees' influence is clearly felt on more than just Mac leaves me salivating for a sequel.

Hits all the right places, and I don't just mean the prostate of our favorite farm-stallion.

Thank's for a fantastic FIMFic, Spoonfed.

Cheerilee's developed into a full-blown Amazonian Futa Goddess

HMmm....this is certainly turning out interesting. I REALLY want to see Big Mac turn into a PROPER FemColt <3

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And thanks to you for your kind words! I'm happy that you've enjoyed the story so much.

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If people are looking for subtlety when it comes to sex, they've come to the wrong place. That's not how we do it round here, boys.

Damn, this could have been a really intresting story, but sadly there is the one black tag I don't ike. Don't worry, I didn't give you a dislike for that.

I think I will read it later, when I am in the right mod for it.

“I know you’ve noticed the changes in your body. Don’t worry, they are not permanent… unless you want them to be, of course~.” He couldn’t see her face, but he was sure that Cheerilee was sporting a wide smug grin.

I have a feeling they WILL be permanent!

Please write a sequel.

Oh love some futa on male and love buff futa so this is a wonderful combo just wish it was with a a different stallion I always think of Big mac as a dom

See now you need to make a prequel about what’s the Everfree shaman was doing And then you need to make a sequel to this where they both share their toys with each other and combine forces on a single toy and then combine forces again on the other toy. Just to satisfy all these dirty birds

No, this ain't it chief not Big Mac. Scientifically impossible.

See, now I really want to see a fallow up where cheerilie punishes Sugar Belle for stealing her mac.

I’ll make sure you get to watch me lift my top weight at some point though.”

I actually kind of want to see a sequel where Sugar Belle punishes Cheerilee for what she did.