• Member Since 9th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 19th, 2023

Wing Dancer


I like hanging stuff on cliffs. They dangle so nicely till the next chapter arrives.

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Today I'm going on a field trip! To the beach! Near the sea!

I'm going to have lots of fun! Why don't you come along, huh?

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Another cute story about Aeria. Cover art made by my dad.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

I'd like to thank all the people who pre-read this and helped me imptove the story to be even more enjoyable :pinkiehappy:

Thanks goes to:

Chasem121
ChibiSama12
CookieMonstar
Destructorspace
Spout
TheObserver

Feel free to read the other stories about Aeria, all of which are gathered for your reading pleasure on my profile page :pinkiesmile:

Aeria is so darn adorable :heart:

Story by Zeth?
*scrambles to computer*
Read it, I shall! :rainbowkiss:

your dad made the cover art?

Your dad is awesome.
That cover art? It's amazing.

CUTE!

Awesome! A few things I picked up on though :applejackunsure:

'Puffy was swirling in hit container' His?

'Colliseum' Just the 1 'l', like 'Coliseum'

Darn, I have to go now, but I shall finish later! Have my thumb! :twilightsheepish: :scootangel: :pinkiehappy:

Haha. Loved it. Cute.

one more adorable thumb up!

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Thanks for pointing that out!

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Thanks! I actually wish I had a filly like this. She can be a bit stubborn at times, but all in all she is a loving little creature.
I'm already sketching out the next story. This time, we will get to learn a bit more about Wing Dancer. Why is he named like that? Is his grumpyness a normal teenage thing or something more? Will Aeria ever get brushed again?!
:scootangel:

Zethariel,

You've done it again, sir! An excellent read, and the ending is just perfect. You have a gift for the sensual--I want my hair brushed now. And a nap. I have one critical comment, which I'll PM you with.

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Thanks!
Should I be afraid? :fluttercry::applecry:

No, don't be afraid :)

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Hey, Zeth posted that story.

*Obligatory scroll through comments*

Woah, this guy just dropped my name.

*Cue quick, quiet, un-manly squee*

And if you ever need me to preread/proofread/whatever, lemme know. Because the d'aaaws.

I feel like George Lukas now. Han Solo shot in self-defense-
I mean,
Aeria's dad was totally not being sexist!

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I didn't mean to drop it :applecry:
I took good care of it! I sweat! I just don't know what went wrong :fluttershyouch:
And I'm holding you to that word :pinkiehappy:

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Don't worry, I have a close full of 'em. I keep them next to the skeletons.

get it? skeletons in the closet? get i- aw, forget it.

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