Very nice. Ponies and Humans are different. No way around that, so work though it!

Great job! On the explanation and the delivery!

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Yay! Big thanks!

Very nice and unexpectedly sweet!

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Thank you very much! I usually try for "sweet."

It was impossible to try to explain monogamy to a pony. She slept with one or another of her friends a few times a week, and some random stallion at least once a month.

But there was a simple way to tell who a mare was in love with.

If she spent her estrus cycle with you, well, that's how a pony showed you that she loved you.

This. I like this. Not sure how to explain it, but it just sounds right.

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Big thanks! I appreciate the words!

Great story I would love to see a sequel to this

Not a fan of the polyamory or the 'human' teasing, but this was hot and sweet. Also, I'd try using the Greek myth of soulmates to explain monogamy.

Great story!

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Big thanks! I appreciate the read and comments.

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You’re welcome!

That was pretty good. Any chance of getting that threesome with Dash and Ratify?

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Maybe, but I just wrote a RariShy threesome and I'm afraid my writing might be repetitive...

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Fair enough, you don't have to rust to it. But think you could do a story with Pinkie at some point?

This looks a lot like JUDY'S outfit!

Rarity probably visited ZT for inspiration!

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Ha! Yes!

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I guess? I don't know the rules, honestly. I suppose you could DM Pabbles in derpi too.

Something that never ceases to amaze me is just how quietly a pony can move, when she's determined to sneak up on you. How can hooves on a hardwood floor be so silent? It's uncanny.

Hooves. How do they work!?

"Rarity's a genius." Human and pony fashions almost never translate back and forth—but that clothes horse is the one who has the skill to make it work.

Lewd skirts?

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I actually was thinking about that one, yes.

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Cool.

You could make a whole world out of this. ANOTHER!

Yeah, but the flight suits are anti-sexy

Clearly we look at different fan art.

Sweet Celestia! That was hot as fuck!!

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Thanks!

Quite enjoyable! (I meant reading it. Obviously they enjoyed it.)

Makes sense that Equestria would have such polygamous practices. I thoroughly enjoyed this little story. Not just the sex, but the rather well-done characters and personalities of them. You've created a rather enjoyable and quite believable little world here. But you do realize what this means, right?

You HAVE TO make a sequel or continue this little story!! Make it a 'Slice of Life' story! Something! I wanna see how their relationship develops from here!!

I did a pushup, releasing her tail from under me, and wriggled up until I was looming over her, my hands on either side of her shoulders.

Was it a cock pushup?

Holy buck is this wrong, but holy hell is it sexy! I also like how you deviated from the traditional second-person storytelling and told this in the first person. Very creative.

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Thanks!

This is an example of why I write clop: "All the stuff in the new column isn't to my taste, so I have to do it myself." I loathe second person.

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I personally enjoy reading second person stories, because it lets you use your imagination to create an image of what all is happening, but I don’t judge. One person’s turn-ons may be another person’s turn-offs

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