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Vis-a-Viscera


Now witness the power of this filly armed and operational battlestation.

Comments ( 13 )

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Better late than never! :rainbowlaugh:

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What the lewd shark said.

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It's the Nightmare Night Before Christmas

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There's a certain Blink-182 song I just thought of that fits pretty well

We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
Where you can always find me
And we'll have Halloween on Christmas
And in the night, we'll wish this never ends
We'll wish this never ends

:rainbowlaugh:

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The head force master from harry potter, obviously

A tissue, tissue... I need a tissue. :moustache:

PHR

This is the most shameless, most cartoonishly over-the-top sex-fic I've ever read.

Then again, this is Surprise -- everypony's favourite Pinkie-1.0 -- we're taking about, so cartoonishness is perhaps expected. And much like her under Posey's audacious advances, I find myself similarly, irresistibly charmed. :heart:

You're quite charming in your writing style and wit too, I must say. "This mare is full of surprises, and Surprise was full of her"? Sweet Celestia's almighty tits, you deserve an upvote and a bookmark and a follow just for that. Well bucking done. 👏

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I'll take that as a compliment alongside Vis, considering I was responsible for a good portion - though not all - of the sex scenes for this fic! :twilightblush: Including that line you like so much - I had it in mind the whole time I was writing the scenes, just waiting for the right moment to use it~ :raritywink: (Though Vis did tweak it to make it a cleverer two-line delivery, 'cause it was a little on-the-nose as a one-liner.)

Hey, this story is quite amazing! (and according to the narration she is actually telling the story to us, cool~)
It's awesome that something so intense can be crammed in such a short story, and it's like I can feel the surprise as well just by reading the words~
And I love the witty background information every now and then, what a nice tale~

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