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Complexity and simplicity. I am a jack of all trades. All I ask for is an upvote and comment. Maybe a watch to?
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He raped?
Okay, a decent concept so far. My only gripe is the indecisive choice of when to use Japanese and when to use English. Other than that it's pretty solid, aside from a few grammatical slip ups.
Niiiiice!
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I believe so, yes. He did fuck a ton of women while the Crusaders were traveling. And I believe not all of that sex was consensual.
MORE I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
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And more you shall get!
DIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
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As for the writing, it's good enough so far. You should reread it and check the spelling and grammar of your work though, since there are a few noticeable errors. It's not that big of a deal, though. As for the plot, it seems interesting. A classic isekai plot where it looks like we'll be seeing a heroic DIO for once. Sure, probably an anti-hero, but still a hero nonetheless. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
MORE! I NEED MORE!
It was really dio all along
You were expecting a regular fic about ponies but it was me DIO!!!
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I meant reunite
waiting for the next chapter is terrible :)
I wondered why you didn't make him a fruit vampire ?? he would have strength, regeneration, and reflection like a vampire, but the sun would do him nothing and he would have to eat apples. :D
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Eh. I go tother stuff you can read if you want. An undertale cover, a Hellsing crossover, and chronicles of light, my main story series.
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This is only the first chapter. Maybe he is a fruit vampire?
will there ever be another chapter?
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Yes. There will
Make more
Faving and Tracking. Looking forward to more! I love the Over Heaven color scheme you picked for his new body, and if I'm not wrong, Heritage for the Future colors for The World's new body, right?
Wasn't aware of this when I started writing my own "Dio's Bizarre Adventure", but, I'll change the title before I actually publish it so we don't have any issues down the line.
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Eh. IDK what those were. In my head, I just went with what colors best suited DIO. And a fusion of the manga and David Productions THE WORLD.
has it taken quite a long time since the first chapter, will chapter 2 ever be ?? please release date.
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Sorry. IRL stuff has gotten in the way. But yes. It will come. I promise. Maybe this Saturday if I can get my act together.
Not tomorrow. I mean the Saturday after
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I'm very happy to hear that, I'm waiting for Dio to use the road roller and do KONO DIO DA !! to someone: D and don't forget to add the menacing effect of XD
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.....
Aight. He'll use the it was I dio quote. And.....idk...throw a train on someone. But idk how to do the menacing thing in story
for tomorrow !!! yeah here you have a fighting theme
ME(0:11) :
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I'm literally in the middle of writing the next chapter.
MOAR!! I NEED MOAR!!!
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I'm working on it
good songs for waiting for the next chapter
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I'm working on it. Discord meets DIO
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Hope it was worth the wait ;)
Well that is one way to leave a cliffhanger.
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Well, what jojo story doesn't leave you on a cliff hanger on the first chapter to make you want more?
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Well can't argue with that logic.
ME : -_- >>>>>
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Was it worth the wait?
STANDO POWAH