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Try to guess this reference kids
One showing later...
"Excuse me, the shows over."
"...I'm stuck in the chair."
A very high society kinky kind of story. I loved it.
Gara, will you teach me your ways
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Oh the depraved thoughts that too much money can bear.
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That's my secret cap, i'm always horny.
You write some mean doms
Damn
I love it
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i have a type :p
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Nice
Sweet
Holy shit. That was incredible. Everything I ever wanted out of a dynamic like this. The competition, the exhibitionism, the atmosphere and wonderful use of the performance on the stage in the sex scene. I would buy a book with stories like this without hesitation.
I haven't started reading yet, will here in a few minutes, but the cover art appears to be backward for the pairing? I'm guessing that the cover art was made specifically for the story? If so, the collar and key are quite backward. Owners hold the property's keys. But maybe there's a thing in the story I need to read for additional context..
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Cover art was actually not made for the fic, I just chose it because it fit the general theme and I really liked it. Plus, Cadance might be collared but she totally looks like she's in control.
Man this was soooo good, makes me wanna see more from this trio, or many a story of Shining and his group maybe
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. Cadance's mean streak makes my inner sadist sing a happy song.
this was great!
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The Critic
It stinks!
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Got it, good night folks!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Teasing Rarity about having her blow the waitstaff or get rutted in public is a fantastic touch, though it makes me wish there was a second chapter where such things actually happened.
-There’s a really nice dynamic between the two competing subs and the way Cadance treats them.
-A very nice contrast between propriety and debauchery, especially when they were in the crowd and talking to other ponies.
-On the first read-through, I thought it had perfect grammar, but I did notice some typos on the second reading, which puts a limit on the prose quality score:
out her dress..her spell endedin a heartbeatRarity gladded accepted it-Good use of tone throughout the story, keeping it proper and restrained.
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Cracks began to form, and every passing second saw them grow into fissures. Rarity’s voice faltered, her concentration broke, and her sentences died partway through.-- It would have been nice to actually see this, rather than just being told it was happening.-It’s a nice touch that Cadance saves them from embarrassment in the end. It shows that she really cares.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 89/100
Allure: 98/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 97/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 463/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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Eeee thank you for the review and honestly while such a scene would've been nice i don't think i could've done it justice with the 3000-ish words i have left.
Hello again Ms. Author! Having just arrived from Depravity For Brunch, I must say that this was an incredibly fun read, definitely in keeping with the aforementioned. The pretense of how this relationship came to be doesn't particularly matter, and that's ok. The dialogue was natural and humorous. Next step? A multi-chapter long weekend of shenanigans.
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Glad i finally linked you too the right one XD.
And maybe we will see something longer. I do have this nasty habit of leaving room for sequels.