The Cutie Mark Crusaders are at it again, and this time they decide to try to get their cutie marks by hunting ghosts. What could go wrong? Just about everything, of course!
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P.S. Could someone make cover art for this?
Chapters (7)
This might be a good fic to watch and see where it goes. I'm interested. Good work. Only one thing. I don't think you quite captured Apple Bloom's character as well as you could've. Other than that keep it up! I'd love to see more!
u gotta love the CMCs keep it up
like to see u continue
Ghostbusters Theme - Armcannon, featuring the legendary Pizzor
1125390 I'm glad you like it.
I'll try to have Applebloom be more in character with the next chapters.
1125483 And it shall be continued!
1126478 The drummer made that video 100000 times better.
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There's a better version floating around on Armcannon's site, but then you miss out on the living legend that is Pizzor.
How can anyone not like the CMCs?
Good writing and an entertaining start. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Awww. Rainbow Dash hurt Slender Stallion's feelings.
1153629 Well, if Slender Stallion wasn't lurking in the shadows the whole time, that scene would have been completely different. There would have been some
and 
and maybe even a little 
And he wouldn't have hurt feelings in the end. But alas, he lurked in the shadows and ended up crying.
This was another great chapter. I am looking forward to the next one.
The presence of Slender Stallion was amazing!
what could a faceless white stallion do to them? oh let me think
i laughed really hard
as your princess, i command you to WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1214927 Whoa whoa whoa, slow down there. Unless your name is Celestia, you aren't my princess! But I will be writing the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow night, so don't you worry about that
Awww poor Slender Stallion D:
I'll be your friend! D:
this is really funny
a muffin to you good sir
1224723 I'm glad you liked it
Very enjoyable chapter. I loved the anorexic stallion.. good stuff.
I think Bunny Mare is really Applejack. The accent gave it away....I think.
But poor Slender Stallion, not being appreciated XD
That was real bloody funny.
Shoot I know that Titan Station Elementary is a little creepy on the first time through... but it's not that bad... just imagine happy times.
That chapter was quite hilarious... if only they got to meet the real Slendy.
Lol.
Another lol.
1276176 I think that it was Hank Hill
Shoot, Slendy sure does cry alot.
1363621 After I finish this story, I'm going to make one that will be literally bloody funny. It's gonna be a dark comedy. Until then, enjoy the last two chapters of this story, both of which I will be making hopefully within the next week.
Hey. Nice chapter :)
1394181 Hey, thanks... Friend. Hint hint.
yay! it's here, it's here, it's here it's here it's here! dun, dun dun, dun dun dun dun, dun
1394194 I'm just as happy as you are!
1394201 it was a funny chapter
i like how they ended up dumping the ashes of a dead pony over rarity's finest fabrics... omg they were carrying around a dead pony
CUTIE MARK CRUSADER NECROMANCERS
'On a scale of one to crispy' has to be the best line so far. I busted up laughing when I read that.
1394244 Yeah, I love that line; I laughed when I thought of it.
I still can't get over Burnt Crispy. Best name ever.
1404455 Yeah, I got that name from a friend when we were playing Gears of War 3. He killed somebody with a flamethrower and then called them a burnt crispy. It gets better better; he then said that he wanted to create a cereal named "Burnt Crispies."
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If it had enough sugar coating or lots of marshmallows, I would probably buy it.
1404780 The only problem is that they would probably be burnt.
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Details, details....
1404874 You seem like the kind of guy who'd like to invest in burnt cereal with burnt marshmallows. I'd offer you part of the stock, but I'd have to set you on fire first.
*Slow clap* Well, well, well. You seem to have a knack for making a mockery of Slender Stallion. Want to join the Avengers? I liked it alot, but you had a few errors that I could probably list for you, but not at the moment.
Also, what's with Princess Luna's cameo??
Good job, sport.
1407344 The next episode for you to watch is the one about Nightmare Night, Junior!
And I would like to hear about those mistakes. Could you message them to me, please?
Lol good job, buddy.
1829014 Shit, I don't remember what chapter that was in haha care to remind me?
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I'm not going to the link. I'm guessing it was the 'Can you feel the sunshine' remix.
3136250 Oh shit, really!? I'd love to see what you come up with!
I can see how this got so many upvotes and no down votes. It's cute, an innocent creepiness, and is rather well done. I'm enjoying reading this
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Awwwww! This was good fic. I'm going onto the next part of the series.
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You never made cover art for this. Ass.
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Fuck that shit! I'ma request something else!