Nobody's home; go away.
When Pinkie Pie realizes that her "other self" is impossible to stop, she leaves Ponyville to ensure that nopony will be in danger.
There is no specific order for which chapters will follow Pinkie Pie and which ones will follow her friends.
This is my first attempt at a serious story; feedback is welcome from anybody.
This is also probably the most depressing thing I have ever done... Challenge accepted.
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Good.... Goodd.....
I looked back.
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Ohhh I like! It reminds me so much of my first story as well, very interesting
1651656 Get out
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1652473 Holy crap, you're right!
1651630 You're too nice
SADFIC! Just read it a second time. Crryyyy.
1788572 Just read what a second time? The whole thing?
wow, really good! now this and the lady and the DJ concludes i shall read all your stories, and sandshifts too.
2058663 Thanks
"quick pule" One typo. Think that is the only one. Good job! Liked the new chapter. The voice seems way more cynically humorous. Digging it
2072044 Thanks for the heads up! And yeah, I decided to give the "darkness" more of a personality.
2072052 Also. Was there a significance to the food? I felt like it had a sinister meaning, and was hoping you would elaborate on it if that were the case.
2072067 You just gave me a great idea for the next chapter.
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always happy to helppp
whoo! another chapter!
yeaaaaaaaaaaaa buddy!
2080057 Did you like it?
2080752 well, it had a unexpected ending, i thought at first, "evil" pinkie pie was using pinkie sence but it started to give it away when she said she was here before
2072052 at that point, it really gave it away, but still really good!
Remember to show emotional states, don't just say she was sad, describe her frowning.
2073252 I forgot what the idea you gave me was
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nooooo!
Something about the food, or the significance of it??
2597705 I... I don't know...
2598497 HOW'D IT GET BURNED?!
2734471 You're gonna die, boy!
2734515 Last time I read this story, then~!
THINK OUT OF THE BOX PINKIE. JUKE IT MENTALLY!MAKE IT THINK YOU'RE GOING ONE WAY AND DO SOMETHING ELSE!
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You do realize that anything you tell Pinkie Pie, I hear as well? And Pinkie Pie tricking me? Ha! In her dreams! Speaking of dreams, I hope to see you soon...
Calm down, Pinkie! I was just playing around. I'm sure Oti knew that...
I don't understand that ending? Did they die? What happened?
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I never finished this story
6562198 WHAT? WHY?!
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I lost interest and motivation in writing stories a while ago
6562957 NO! Why did you lose motivation
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I don't know; I just stopped wanting to write stories.
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