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Foals have been disappearing from Starlight's village, and nopony knows why or where they have been taken. After one search party member returns with news of an alleged stranger and a monster in the cave where cutie marks are stored, Starlight decides to investigate. Puzzled by the strange occurrences around the place, she wanders into the tunnels of the cave system. Little did she know the caverns hide more than she thought.
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everfree helped a lot with editing and helping me form the idea for the story.
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Comments ( 5 )

there are some grammar issue, but it is my first story. so please don't be so heavy on it, i know and i will improve as i work on more chapters.

When I read your story I was lost out of my world this is unbelievable truly a work of art

thank you, but it's not art yet as it's not complete and it will need some polishing. I have a lot to work on so stay tuned as I work on this more

Just so amazing 😍❤️

I love feedback everyone, tell me what you think of it and any problems so I can fix them. this can be great if I hear what you all think of it

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