• Member Since 24th Mar, 2012
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shirotora


I'm just a simple, southern man that loves ponies, Star Wars, ridiculousness, and adorable things. I'm also an ex-Navy nuclear machinists mate, and life long martial artist.

Comments ( 17 )

You miss-spelled the title XD "Choaric Harmony" not trying to be a dick, just helping.

^^;; It's alright. Everyone makes mistakes.

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Such things happen to everyone, even experienced writers.

Damn that was easy for Shiro. This version of Equestria is pretty loose. Not as loose as a full on 'Sexquestria', but still.

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It makes sense for a race that is only fertile twice a year. Sex is only taboo among humans because of the risk of pregnancy. Religions, too, only consider it taboo for this reason.

It's awesome his first mare and he gets to bang RD

This was a sweet and spicy chapter.

This was a beautifully sweet heart touching spicy chapter.

Wait, so if you put 2 random ponies into a closed up bedroom together, what are the chances they will start having sex within the next hour or two?

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Not good. They'd be too worried about the weird hairless ape holding them prisoner :rainbowwild:

This wasa epically sweet and beyond spicy heart warming chapter. I hope they keep a open relationship.

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Actually, as I know christians wasn't overly concerned with sex for quite a while. It became a taboo when connection were made with STD's. Or was that specifically catholics? I don't really remember. Considering they had no idea how to cure them (and we still can only slowdown AIDS) that was a necessity and it did help to prevent full scale pandemics.

so... I went back to this site after couple of years, and see that so many of you amazing authors are still somehow active... damn... but I am pretty saf that this is not "the same as sfw but with extras, but rather a separate alternative chapters... I mainly read by downloading entire story and either reading or listening to it with TTS while at work, so I can't easily swap from one file to another... and would somehow need to keep a list on Which chapter as a "mature" version... anyway. I just wanted to complain.



as for the entire story, I was a big fan of the original, and this one seems even better, especially considering it breaks quite a few standard HiE aspects making it much better. it is also even more funny AND serious than the original.... I would say it is improved in all aspects. :P

thank you for still being here, and still writing great stories.

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The only real difference between them is the sex scenes, so you aren't missing anything by reading the SFW version. I felt it would be better to keep all the readers and comments mostly on the same version that way everyone can interact. I understand your complaint though.

I'm glad you're enjoying this one. I've grown a lot as an author since then and have learned how to better write a cohesive story and proper characters. There's no half-baked, abandoned story threads this time. Also, no inexplicable powers that he just has for no reason.

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