so... I went back to this site after couple of years, and see that so many of you amazing authors are still somehow active... damn... but I am pretty saf that this is not "the same as sfw but with extras, but rather a separate alternative chapters... I mainly read by downloading entire story and either reading or listening to it with TTS while at work, so I can't easily swap from one file to another... and would somehow need to keep a list on Which chapter as a "mature" version... anyway. I just wanted to complain.

as for the entire story, I was a big fan of the original, and this one seems even better, especially considering it breaks quite a few standard HiE aspects making it much better. it is also even more funny AND serious than the original.... I would say it is improved in all aspects. :P

thank you for still being here, and still writing great stories.

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The only real difference between them is the sex scenes, so you aren't missing anything by reading the SFW version. I felt it would be better to keep all the readers and comments mostly on the same version that way everyone can interact. I understand your complaint though.

I'm glad you're enjoying this one. I've grown a lot as an author since then and have learned how to better write a cohesive story and proper characters. There's no half-baked, abandoned story threads this time. Also, no inexplicable powers that he just has for no reason.