What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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I forgot she was scared of dragons.
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Now, if "Toothless" had been a baby night fury?>)
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There is a story on fimfictition like that. Its completed. Just looking HTTYD stories and look for the one with Fluttershy holding toothless in her mouth with Twilight and Spike in the same picture.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/22441/fluttershys-animal-adventures
Here you go
I believe the word you were looking for is either dilate or its antonym contract.
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Thanks.
Awesome
Adding to library now. Night furies are awesome!!
Great chapter
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thanks...
I am already loving it and I hope you continue
I hope when the Princisters get involved, they recognize the type of Dragon Johann is and remember it from the movie. And react accordingly.
great story so far! I've been hoping for a new toothless story for a good long while and I really like where this is going. I can't wait to read more.
And aside from the a couple typos here and there its got nice pacing. I wonder what the rest of the girls will think about this...or if fluttershy will even get the chance to tell them before she decides to go off and search for him or something fun :P
we shall see...
can't wait for the next update! gets a like and add to library from me for sure!
Cute, but I'm pretty sure you meant "nimble fingers" there.
To move.
Silly and innocent typos aside, not a bad start. Tracked for sure.
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I really appreciate that. Also I'm looking for people to talk to about where I want this story to go. If your interested maybe you could hear me out and give me some feed back.
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Thanks for that, to be honest I write all my stories on my phone so some words get autocorrect without me knowing.
Hey, I just checked the home page and it looks like your story has been featured. Congrats.
Oh boy, this sounds interesting, is the gore and death tag only for when the MC dies at the beginning? or is it going to be constant on the story? I tend to run away from those tags.
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I'll never tell 😋
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Awesome thanks for telling me !!!
Ahh bugger all. I don't know who your proofreader or editor is, but please fire them and get a new one.
Duplicate thoughts like this have occurred twice now which is utterly unacceptable. Your grammar isn't horrible but your punctuation has given my eyes cancer.
Seriously take another look through this. As it sits, this reads more like a first or second draft than a ready to be published chapter.
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Yeah unfortunately I'm not great at English. I have a learning disability and sometimes second guess myself. And while I like to find a good editor that will meet your guys expectations it's not that easy. My current editor Master sword is a good friend. But other then him I don't know else who is better qualified.
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Would you happen to know anyone reliable enough to do so?
Hell ya man it's a good start! The biggest thing that I noticed was
I would say that as. I had been hit by a truck and was bleeding to death on the ground. To me this sounds smother then the way you have it worded.
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I see your point thanks. I'm not gonna lie I need better proof reader and to improve myself
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The proofreader Group
A group I manage on the side, though regrettably neglected as of late. We've got a nifty little side site or you can follow the instructions on the front page. We do alittle editing work while providing ideas on how you can improve the overall story.
Looking for Editors
These guys focus entirely on grammar and such. They have a forum post on how to use their services.
If neither of those work on finding someone to help, try using Gdocs. It'll help with grammar and spelling errors by default as well as letting you and an unlimited amount of people work on the same document, be it by direct editing or suggestions.
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Thanks I'll give them a look soon.
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You just missed my main point, I think.
more pls
Not bad. Needs editing and the dialogue is a little clunky, but worth a follow.
I love this story so far. Any of the other dragons from HTTYD will make an appearance?
loving this so far. especially he and shy's first meeting. xD priceless...
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I hope you enjoy it. I'm gonna try my best to make it great.
Forgot about Fluttershy's fear of dragons.
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She'll warm up to him, give it time. it took time for Hiccup to warm up to Toothless
You have my interest.
Let's see where this goes.
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Asked the human turned dragon
You really need to stop doing that, it's not healthy
A really fun idea for sure, but so far not my favorite cup of tea. I’ll track it and come back to it! Once this story has some meat on its bones I’ll change my mind. Thanks for writing.
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im down, just send me a PM or we could do discord as well which is usually easier :P
Can't Fluttershy what he screamed? Or her ability has limit on a dragon? Wait, I thought dragons in Equestria can talk normally, right? Why couldn't he?
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All in due time my friend
For some reason *cough*MLP*cough*, I decided that I want to learn the gaits of ponies (well, horses), and I did.
That would be a trot.
Oof.
Let's just hope your tail is okay.
I have a good feeling about this story
This almost made me want to stop reading.
yes,yes,yes tons of yes's
Chara(me) out of nowhere=P my tern bish
You have earned yourself a watcher. Keep it up. This is good so far. I cant wait to read more
A. Sex tag?
And B. Good draggo
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Hehe