What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Nice
The anticipation is getting to me!ðĪŠ
Looking forward to the escape.
And the meeting with the princesses is also something I am anticipating.
Great story so far.
Me hope a kind of miracle happens. The one that only I know, which if gassed correct, me reply.
why the sex tag?
There might be sex in the story or implied sexual activety
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Yes sex will happen in this story but when I cant say.
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damn may have to pass on this then. I hate clop fics lol (no offense intended)
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I think the true question here is, will this be integral to the plot of the story or just another piece that happens to keep the story rolling and will it become a main focus to drive the story forward.
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Well it won't be the main focus and you could skip over the chapter
ok, Ghidorah is appearing soon nice!
I hope Luna comes in full battlearmor to slay the Hydra before it can finish of our Dragon. Her Luna Guard with polished deadly hoofclaws holding the arena guard bussy/dealing with em. Celestia taking care of the arena personell/ guards outside and secure the ring leader. Wile her royal guard show that outside rare exceptions like world ending Villains they are the 'royal guards' for a reason!
I like what you doing with the story so far the main question right now is to keep this chapter going what would be the abilities of the Hydra you've already ruled out cut off one head two more grows but there are still other possibilities for it you cheated could have a different attribute to them but that choice is up to you
Our Griffon companion can give Celestia a wake up call about the Slavery in her own borders financed by the wealthy and suffered by the poor and forgotten. Manhattan has homeless mares? Slave em to become arena massacre attraction. Simpel monster fodder.
Maybe calling out a major name of the Nobility by accident?
Having Celestia calling him to daycourt. Confront him/her with it in a sweet and terriying calm matter that chills everyone to the bone.
Just to go supernova on him. Maybe cinge hes mane without causing damage...
To see the always kind and generous leader of Equestria triggered beyond there wildest nightmares.
Just for Luna to come in the room perfectly calm. Looking at the scared shitless nobels that know they shouldnt dare so mutch as breath out of order. Nonchalant walk to her sister wile in supernova mode and standing there without a care in the world to show off that if she would get to release her anger even the darkest Villain would freeze in fear.
The former smug slave supporter now spilling all beans in front of him/her maybe offering to point out a pony in the observation seats to offer him any kind of showing leniency.
When Celestia slowly returns to her normal self she would take a deep breath an than told him/her in her coldest voice: you will answer any question, revealing all accomplice he/she has and will be striped of rank and riches (since hes/shes singel without foals) and after helping bring chaos to the black market HE/SHE will receive protection against his former partners in crime. Nothing more. Unless he wannt to be publicly be send to the SUN and be namely mentioned in History books alongside Sombra etc. for enslaving fellow ponys and be FOREVER branded in ponys history.
Maybe a remark from Luna that the moon vacation time enforced on her would be not nearly as agony inducing as what a Sun vacation would do to anyone mortal or imortal.
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Nice! Can you give us a exampel for a skillset?
Like i did just now about what might happen next?
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Some people don't mind being remembered for theit horrible acts as long as they ARE remembered. Also I doubth either of them have power nesessary to send others to Moon or Sun. How could Sun even be worse to non immortal? Being vaporized by flames sounds less painfull than asphyxiation in the coldness of moon. Come to think of it there are suprisingly few stories that adress hunger NMM suffered during her forced stay at her object of pride.
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True. But mostly a psycho/ Sociopath are like that. I guess canterlot elite would do it because there better than others and would never get catched. Like i say: by accident his/her name got heard by a slave with no hope to escape. Celestia going supernova on him/her knowing he is guilty of support but only learns he/she is a main key pony when he/she droped this piece out in total panic. He/she lived a easy and rich overflowing lifestyles. Confronted with death or worse he/she jumps at any straw to get out of it in any way.
Second part. Maybe the biggest bluff ever? Maybe they can travel there but cant bind any powerful beings there... How should he know he dies instantly if it works like a normal sun. Noone doubts Lunas words for truth in this situation and will never have a chance to fact check it.
In the described situation i see that kind of outcome
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Did i hit the guess correct? If not give us a detailed example by comment Buddy
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Hint; communication.
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To shallow without a context = not useable
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When was this ever a clop fic? You could always you know, skip that part or the chapter
Damn I'm happy that your still working on this story, I really liked the preview please keep the good work going bud
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With us giving our support in the comments and maybe a inspired idea of some of his readers it should be fine
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YES! this is gonna be hype!
I can't wait to see the full chapter. My mouth is already watering at what awaits our faithful hero.
No matter how many or how few heads the hydra has, it's only got one spine and one heart in the body....
The only question is what's the best way to get to them? Johann's has photon torpedoes. If he can't blast and claw his way through the scales, then the only option will be to shoot down it's throats.
Of course, this fucker's going to be just as intelligent as Johann--and probably saw how Johann won his last fight, so the hydra's not going to give him an easy target by opening any of its mouths....
Which leaves Johann just a bunch of small targets available: it's eyes. And Johann is going to have to make those torpedoes count, if he's got the same limitations as the movie's dragons (six-shots per day)... and that means Johann's going to have to take the hydra's eyes out with his claws.
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Don't worry I already have a game plan. But I love your ideas ð
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I recall there being suggestion about multi elemental claws and breath and I personally dislike idea of suddenly developing any. But it could be possble to enchant some kind of metallic claw attachment if someone would really want to make them more dangerous than they already are. I am pretty sure there is name to what I am thinking but can't find any.
This is a great start to the chapter. Every good escape plan needs a wrench in the works, and this appears to be a whole box of them. ð Really enjoying the universe so far, and looking forward to the chapter!
This has my heart pumping I hope that they get away.
I have a feeling the princesses will make it in time. I mean, they abandoned diplomatic mission bc Twilight mentioned him in a letter.
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I randomly decided to reread this story out of nowhere. Not knowing that the first time I read it was January, 2021. It is now January, 2023. Such a weird coincidence I never thought would happen.
Time to shine for Royal guards and sisters alike.