What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Wait, how did he just not mention Griffinstone once? I'd have expected a little bit of hesitancy in just returning to live in Equestria, given that he'd gotten close to Glenda. But not even thinking about it kinda makes it seem like he doesn't care about either the nation or his friend.
Actually, a quick scan shows he did think about Griffinstone... once, and only in passing in order to say now much he wanted to stay in Equestria.
Seriously, did I miss something?
Messing with Celestia is always fun.
Isn’t Smaug the most popular dragon in fiction?
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In a previous chapter he mentions that they new queen wants to keep its reconstruction a secret
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I mean, that's fine I guess, but he hardly even spared a thought for going back. He spent months there helping the place get back on its feet, and now there isn't even an iota of hesitation in staying in Equestria? He seemed to have enough trepidation about leaving Griffonstone in the first place, so what changed to make him not even think of going back?
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Give it time. He just woke up and was reunited with the mare who first befriend him.
im glad your back
I would ask what value of this currency in his stead, because if it would be equal to five thousand Rub (my country currency) I would be rather dissapointed since to rent simple one-room flat you should pay fifteen thousand Rub/month.
And all those sex jokes. They're thousand years old, Fluttershy and Applejack see animals mating almost every day and ALL of them walk around naked all their lives. You're picturing them as if the're 14 years old naives. And don't forget that Luna was banished when she was like 140 years old.
Great to see new a chapter man.
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I would have to agree with you on your second half. Back then ponies would be fucking left and right since that's all you could really do in those times. And Applejack and Fluttershy should know how mating works at least. Twilight would also know because she has read every damn book she can. Even the sexy ones
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I'm actually curious which sex dreams are you guys referring to specifically
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Not dreams per say but think about it. When your kind dies a lot from war and starvation you have to keep the bloodline going. So popping foals out would be something that happened a lot of back then. And I'm sure Luna and Celestia had some "fun" but never gave birth because alicorn bodies
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its not a meeting without them unjustly testing someone's character after you know they save your life twice.
Its almost like they didn't see him have a kaijuu fight to save them in a selfless way.
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I'm sorry I have no idea why I put the work "dream" in there XD. I meant to say. "What sex jokes, are you guys talking about?"
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Not knowing what triple X means. And the changing his size one. Luna should have picked up on those
lol if only the rest of the girls was around when Johann was messing with Celestia
....still having the ability to change ones ''size'' would be useful regardless
Great work keep it up
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Okay first, I hope I don't sound like I'm being mean at all, I appreciate any feedback I can yet.
So the triple X, It may not seem like it but this version of Equestria doesn't know the concept of porn. Lewd and suggestive words and actions yes, but not that granted I gave nothing to show you that this one the case.
As for reference his size I had made it so that his you know what was referred to in a way that Luna wouldn't catch on.
Now I'll be honest I felt a bit rushed (not by you guys) to get this chapter done even though my heart wasn't in it. So maybe that's why the last part didn't seem as good. I'm sorry for that.
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Nah don't worry it's a good chapter. I liked it
Hang on, can Celestia still use the spell to go to the human world? I can't help but wonder if that's going to be brought up again.
Starswirld literally kicked Sirens out of his dimension to another to be someone else problem,as a trash to be cleaned by someone else
Where is interdimensional border police or something when it's needed?
Starswirl's action and beginning of this story, Celestia's and Luna's dimension traveling and the results of these things are a very good example of why something like that is necessary so things like these won't happen.
That Adult Movie theater idea was so FUNNY, I can't wait for Johann to tell both Luna and Twilight what kind of theater that Celestia went into, I bet she went back more then once too, anyway I wonder what you have planned for him and the girls next for your story.
So, what about Glenda though? I don't think he's mentioned her to the Princesses yet.
Did he forgot his best feathered waifu just because he meet two royal horned chicken and his yellowed savior
This was a funny and entertaining chapter it was fun. Can he have a herd with both the princesses ,all the main six some more,and can he visit the dragon lands and add both Smolder and Ember to it
Love this corny story. It's awesome. Write forever man. :)
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I mean all this wouldn't cause this much embarrassment, blushing and laughing. Not even close. Those all are mature mares. Even Pinkie. And Celestia wouldn't even rise a brow at most of those jokes. Even more, with the last one she would rather turn tables on him, not "her ivory white cheeks quickly turned scarlet and her mouth opened and closed like a fish out water".
What if Luna uses that memory seeing thing she can do on Celestia while she is asleep?
Yes a new chapter 😊
trollestia just got trolled
So is no one going to mention how him being a duke will change how he helps his Griffen friend?
hahahahahahahahaha
this answers a lot of questions and really sets thing up for way more story.
I have to agree with what has been said. It feels out of place for Johann to just accept without even thinking about Glenda. I hope he at least goes back to tell her what happened.
Also, I find it funny that the villain is celebrating a total loss. He talks about Celestia knowing there's someone out there that's a threat is good for him. He just gave up the element of surprise. Her being on guard is BAD for him.
I greatly loved this chapter and the humor used like this
the full scene was just glorious I loved this and rest of the chapter and I greatly look forward to more.
PS: I would recommend sticking to 1-3 stories and no more then that because you would have to work on and focus on all of them and that would burn you out fast and just make everything take longer
lol
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Thank you for saying what I was thinking.
Oh I have no doubt you will
It really is
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Just don't push the Fluttershy x Toothless Ship too hard. By this point, he's spent far more time and emotional investment with the Gryphon Queen, and would love him courting her and spending more time over there than over here with Equestria. I thought he was just going to show up, save them from the Dragon, then go on back over to Gryphonstone to stay Maybe saying high to Fluttershy and the CMC or something, but not actually STAY in Equestria. By this point, months upon months, if not a year or even more, he had spent with the Gryphons, and only spent like what, a few days, not even a week in Equestria with Fluttershy and the CMC?
Because the Princess of the Night has a fan-crush on Night Furies and a real-crush on the heroic individual that saved her and her sisters' lives, and couldn't focus on anything else well enough in the time constraints she was working under to be successful?
This story went from being really interesting and good to straight up being cringe with a few inconsistencies, what a shame.
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I think it depends on the genre and preferences of animation (cartoon or realistic)
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I feel like neither you or the reader pay any attention to previous chapters. If you paid any attention to kingdoms part 2, you would know that he mentioned that Glenda wants to keep the reconstruction of Griffonstone a secret. To prevent possible attacks from other kingdoms to take over their land.
Also do you think Celestia and Luna are stupid enough not to find it rather curious how a dragon somehow has magic proof scales or why it would attack for no reason? And the villain isn't stupid to think that he hasn't lost his chance at the element of surprise. He's just putting on a face to try and cover up for his oversight, like most villains would do. If his subordinates see him getting pissed and flustered they could lose fate in his plans.
I'm not trying to attack you guys, but I would appreciate it if you waited until you had all the information a head of time before throwing our these comments that effect my writing.
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I remember, but he still seems to not even think about Glenda. Right now, she doesn't know if he's even alive or not.
He went off to fight a massive dragon and could be dead for all she knows. Right now she would be worried sick about him, and he didn't even try to come up with an excuse to go back and let her know what's happening.
He doesn't have to tell them about Griffinstone being rebuilt. He could easily just say that he has a couple loose ends to tie up, and to let a couple friends know he's okay and would be back in a couple days.
Also, I figured he was likely putting on a show. I just find it funny he would even try. I'm not criticizing how you wrote him. I actually like him, so far. He reminds me of the villains from the old Saturday morning cartoons I grew up with. I can't help picturing him stroking a white cat in a swivel chair.
What sort of position does he have in the Griffin kingdom. If he high ranking wont it affect relationships with equestria and the Griffin kingdom. They might think she did that to stop them from becoming stronger
Oh....Laughing so hard Celestia fell into that trap nicely! 🤣
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Also, there's the matter of the illegal circus and all of what he had to do in order to get out of there in one piece.
Good chapter. I'm really hoping for a princess ship so I'll be keeping my talons crossed.