What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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I'll be honest. This is WAY BETTER than the one you previously wrote. This introduction 2.0 chapter feels more lively. Great job, now waiting for what happened next (a.k.a. the next chapter).
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Thanks if your interested I could use some proof readers
That's some minor changes you put in there, but at least he has some friends. I think there going to be more backstories than originally plan now.
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I could. I'll see what I can do. Although I tell you that I will probably a bit late because I still in collage. And probably miss some mistake here and there. Will that be a problem?
Awww I actually thought it was another chapter at first.
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Well I'm not sure how long it will take to write the next chapter, so no thats not a problem. And what I mean proofreader I mean the story itself not for grammer
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I'm sorry 😓
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Oh. Well, if that won't be a problem, I can be your proofreader for this story. This is my first time become a proofreader actually if you accept it.
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Don't pity me I'm just gonna go to my corner filled with dragon plushies and weep softly until one day CH2 will be bestowed unto us the common folk.
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Lmao
You mean Obsessed. Abscessed means... Well. just look up pictures of abscesses on on Google images.
I think you mean "at least."
So, the sisters put up some kind of noise-cancelling privacy spell? It's one thing for a hero to die saving someone and end up Isekai-ed by sacrifice. I've never actually seen it be the fault of the rescuee that the protagonist died. That's pretty new. For that amount of blame on Celestia's and Luna's part, they better not only reincarnate him as a dragon in Equestria, but also do everything they can to get him on his feet, with starting money, citizenship, training on how to BE a dragon, and maybe a freakin' award for saving their lives.
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Thanks.
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And about question while that was a good guess that isn't the correct answer. If you check again you'll noticed that Johann and the area around then was effected. Which means someone else was the cause. The question is who?
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Does that sound wrong or something? Just curious.
Oh man, I can't wait to see what happens next, also is the Equestria going to be like in the show or will it be an Anthro Equestria?
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I'm happy you enjoy what I have so far, and it will be like the show. Also dont forget to check out the recent chapter to Equestrian Titan
I am intrigued, tracking.
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Yeah, that makes sense. A noise cancelling spell would probably be a thin bubble that you only hear what's said inside the bubble, and everyone on the outside hears everything on the outside only.
Okay, so they aren't to blame. I still hope they meet up on the other side and give Johan some help and honors. But I won't be upset if he ends up somewhere they can't find him at first.
I didn't read this yet but I wanted to be that guy that points out that the name is based off of an anime called "that time I got reincarnated as a slime" wich is a great anime and props for watching it author
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Fun fact about that. You see last week my dad had bought me the 3rd how to train your dragon movie. I already had the previous two and decided to have a movie marathon. By the time I had finished it was about 2 hours before I needed to go to sleep. Then I remembered that a friend of mine had suggested the anime called "That Time I got Reincarnated as a Slime" on funamation. I had watched the first 3 episodes before going to bed.
And on that night I had a dream that merged the two series and when I woke up I started to write it all down before it could slip my mind.
Good work keep it up
*reads description*
♪Let's Beyblade!!!♪
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Hmm... an intriguing start. It needs a bit of editing, but it's still intriguing.
Tracked.
they're
they're
their
One momment of silence to pay our respects
Aaaaand he's ded
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I'll fix that. Thank you .
Dude, please. If that was how Hollywood worked, the theaters would be empty right now.
There will be a surprise sequel, a remake, a reboot, or a spinoff at some point in the future. That's something that's as certain as death and taxes.
Even if we are potentially on the brink of a post-scarcity economic revolution due to advances in automation and manufacturing and may very well become functionally immortal through digital technology in the not-too-far-distant future... that just makes it a more apt comparison. Since, you know, Hollywood could fall into the ocean any day now.
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You do know I meant of the series right? Or did I not say it like that ?
Other than my inner proofreader having a seizure several times throughout the chapter, not a horrible start I suppose.
Seriously though, if my mind wasn't already used to it, I wouldn't have been able to finish.
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Yeah I'm sorry I'm trying to find reliable proof readers
I don't think it's over for How to Train Your Dragon
There is still the whole planet and possible future.
Also a movie from perspective of dragon from this universe would be interesting.
A movie about a light and night fury fusion even more
I think they named the fusions Night lights
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I hope so.
The sisters were snooping in other worlds? They should take more precaution to their alien surrounding otherwise things like this will happen again.
Am I the only one that sees this as a thwarted assassination attempt on the Princesses lives? No car is that quiet, not even Electric cars or hybrids are that quite.
>>Gnarl
No you are not, my dear Minion Master, no you are not. However *glare* the fact that you are here makes me suspicious. Did your precious 'Master' have anything to do with this? *begins producing a decent amount of Dark Aura*
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his voice was also silent.
I think you are correct.
Well, if that wasn't an assassination I don't what is. Nice to know the Princesses use their great powers to sneak out and watch movies.
Oh hey, it's Truck-san!
I'll be honest, I read this the first time it was posted and left me with a poor impression as it was a barely readable mess. I decided to give it a second chance after I saw it got edited and saw it remain in the featured box for several days. Goes to show what a difference proofreading and proper editing make.
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Yes I would like to apologize for how I didn't put much thought into that. I hope you will find my story much more to your liking.
Okay, I've really liked this introductory chapter. The guy seems likeable and not Mary Sue-ish, and I find myself curious as to how this story will go. Though I do find something a bit dubious... I'm guessing the sisters turned him into a dragon to save his life, but once he's stable why can't they just change him back and send him home? I'll be looking forward to finding out that answer.
Also, I felt like I should point out a typo in your story summary:
like a ragdolling in - like a ragdoll in
Gotta wonder why everything except the sisters was silent?
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Simpel, someone try to X both sisters Moonbutt and Sunbutt but our heroic human give that villants plan a boot to the head. R.I.P.
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My guess is a soul lock/soul transfer. His body is beyond repair so they pay there depth by giving him a new one.
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Dont know why but your comment was a gut buster... I always enjoy good laugther
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Nobody expected a magic assasination in a magic empty world...
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Im a german but i can offer basic google doc edit for 2-3 hour ths or next weekend if your in need
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Let raise a drink to him for his heroism. ... ok lets go back to work the lunchbreak is almost over
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By Lunas moony flanks! Your Avatar is Glorious
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Ouch... That harsh humor... You should feel bad for that... *high five for a good joke*
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Nooo... Please no antro... Less exotic
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Details. They make the differents
Hmmm that was pretty well detailed for how he got hit and how his skin rippled like it did. Makes one think on how ya managed to get it down so well.
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I unfortunately had experience a similar event, but not as painful.
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You sir have earned a like and I will be following this story
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Thanks😁
This is shockingly similar to a motorcycle accident. Even had a description of what we call road rash.