What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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The only time it can't is when plot demands it and even then they can only depower him so much
I'll never understand why the wings aren't gone after more than they are
Nice update!
Wretch. Retch is something different. (Its when your body tries to puke - successfully or not.) Because English is dumb.
And woo, that's one way to come back from the dead.
excellent purely excellent
Is coward all you can say? Pitiful lackwit, with a vocabulary like that, it's a wonder how you would presume to be Dragon Lord. What an imbecile.
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going to assume dragon wings can take a beating, regenerate, or get stronger the more fights the dragon has been in. With the amount of fights toothless has been in, his wings can take a lot of abuse and anything short of tearing them off completely is the only thing that would disable them.
excellent use of Discord ex machina, he turned a good boss fight into an epic boss fight.
Also kinda quick to write someone off as dead Twilight, hope this was just a spur of the moment kind of thing.
Fluttershy friend has returned
Honestly. I didn't like this chapter very much.
Awesome chapter. Also used to watch that cartoon-(american)version of the King of Monsters, when it was playing in the morning years ago.
Honestly, not believable. So much drama for one dragon and not even remembering scorched streets of ponies. Smell of burned flesh would be completely invisible in burning streets. Delivering much stronger attack while pummeled and injured than whyle fresh. Etc, ets...
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You want realism in a world of dragons,gryphons and small magical horses?
Did you forget about one of the most important weakness from the first movie? Cause it's basically a guarantee victory if he used that tactic.
I wonder what will happen next
Great work keep it up
Dragon into kaiju...onna admit that took me off guard
more pls love the story when is the next chapter ?? .
Nice
This was pretty good, bit put off on how toothless goes to ponyville and Waste available time even tho he knows if he hurries he can always come back to ponyville, that Luna and Celestia would know to go for the dragons weak points like underbelly, wings, and eyes but still pretty good
Great chapter
Nice.
next time use the big G not the knock off
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Nice chapter
I await for more!
This is such an action packed Awesome emotional chapter
Still waiting for Pacific Rim three Ha ha ha
Awwww, i was enjoying the mute main character
Though ngl it kind of ruins one of the things that makes this character unique
He does the first half of the Dead Red Death manoeuvre where he disappeared, but then doesn’t go for the wings and try the “fire in the mouth” tactic?
It’s almost as if he didn’t pay attention to the movie. /s
We need more this is just too good not to Reed plz update again soon
Nice!!!!!
Okay, lets break this down a bit.
-Apparently it takes months to hold a ceremony for a friend.
-Said friend the dragon can cover massive distances in hours when he never bothered to in the months he lived in gryphon lands. Or, ya know, paid a courier to deliver a letter to let the ponies know he's alive. Even if it took a month to arrive, it still would have been there before this chapter.
-There are apparently only two spell casters in the land. After trying once each to blast the dragon, they gave up. Obviously Celestia never fought anything resistant to magic and weak points like eyes, wings, the mouth and so on are worth ignoring.
-No one tried hitting it with a rock, spear, sword, axe, pillar, Pinkie and so on while they stood there in a burning city with injured ponies and did nothing until Toothy was already down.
-Discord can stop time but not this train wreck. Edit: I know he's the 4th wall breaker but he's so casual about it here it's off putting.
-The kaiju fight felt like it was inserted from another story. It did nothing but take up space. It wasn't a tense thing like the hydra, it wasn't interesting and it wasn't funny.
The chapters prior to the gryphon kingdom were good. The kingdom ones were....okay. This one went straight into manga land.
(The first part of the dragon fight was good. )
Attention everybody
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Thank you for that, I forgot how much I love team four star.
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Let's see If I can awnser your questions.
1 The memorial took some months because they wanted to properly remember after unveiling the statue.
2 Yes Toothless could have covered a long distance in a short time, but if you read the last chapter you would have seen that he was having a hard time deciding to leave Glenda to restore Griffonstone. And again if you read the last chapter you would have known they had to keep the reconstruction of Griffonstone a secret, so no he couldn't say anything, or get a courier to send a message
3 it's been well over thousands of years since the princesses fought anyone, and they would mostly rely on magic. Plus the dragon was magic proof, and had thick ass scales, what physical attacks could two alicorns do. (Twilight wouldn't be much help there btw.)
4 They already tried using boulders and that barely did anything to the dragon, so what are pony size swords and spears gonna do, give him an itch?
5. Discord. Where would be the fun if he just snapped his fingers and ended it all? There is a reason they haven't done that in the show. Plus discord is barely reformed, do you really think he would have just ended with no hassle?
6. I'm not sure what you mean by it being from another story but whatever. The tense part was the first half when toothless was at a disadvantage, and it wasn't meant to be funny.
7 I don't know what you mean by manga land.
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I can't believe we won't get anymore dbza 😭
Can’t tell if ya really mean the fact your putting this story on hold after next chap or if your just pulling an April’s fools.
Too bad I couldn't get popcorn for this epic fight scene.
Did you use Hero Forge to make the statue?
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Nope, i found it online
10/10 its good
I really adore the way you portray Celestia and Luna in this story, willing to fight off an evil threat to protect their kingdom. That's exactly how they should be.
First half of the fight was amazing, a sort of David vs Goliath thing, I don't know why you decided to give him a kaiju form pretty much out of nowhere. I like your writing, and I know this is your story so you can do whatever, but I really did not like this turn of events.
Of course they didn't listen
Yeah that protection you've been given doesn't work so well against non-magical attacks does it
OMG this was beyond awesomely epic it had my heart pumping like a drum ,it had me on the edge through it all . and it also epic he can finely talk!!!!
Wow, what an amazing return for our favorite dragon!
OK, this has been said a lot, but the Kaiju part felt really... forced. Like, as you were writing the big bad evil dragon, you realized that you couldn't really think of a way to beat it that satisfied you, so you just threw in a discord and something that you thought would please the crowd, which... i mean, Kaiju battles please about 50% of the crowd, and bore the other 50%, as has been shown in the comment section. It almost seems like this is one of those omake chapters that people do in some Fimfics. I would have been ok with a new breath weapon, especially if it allowed him to work with the princesses to bring the dragon down, or even with a scene for scene redo of the finale of How to Train Your Dragon, with the big guy blowing himself up by falling into the ground. The giant monster throwdown just seems to be a big departure from your usual style of writing. I still enjoy this story, and will continue to read it, because I like the main character, but I hope that with future BBEGs you will return to the tactical quick thinking that Toothless/Noir has been exhibiting throughout the story.
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It's the April Fools chapter.
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you sure? Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see a quality fight to the end of the chapter, but he did the whole april fools hiatus blog post thing, and people don't usually double down on the tomfoolery like that. also, considering half the commentors actually liked the kaiju fight... Idunno. I like my april fools chapters separate from the rest of the story, so maybe I'm just being grumpy about it.
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Random, gratuitous, inexplicable violence, Deus Ex Discordia, and a Big Bad more dangerous than most Two-Parter villains pulled out of a plothole big enough to swallow Dashie's ego all at the same time, only for the crisis be ended immediately without any kind of suspense?
It's either an April Fools chapter, or the writer was totally sloshed and didn't realize just what kind of mess they were making.
And it was posted on April Fool's day. So...