What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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"She said through gritted teeth" yeah, yeah, inside beak.
"guy behind me is Toothless" - not Noir?
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Oh crap I messed up XD
I like your story there good!
i like this version of the story i just hop that Glenda can pull it all together.
Hmmm, let Toothless wander outside Equestria might be a good idea.
Yay! They are starting the fixing up of the kingdom.
... Maybe it's just the times, but I'm instantly suspicious of any leader who wants their nation to be great again. Which is a shame, because I like Glenda.
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Often times the best intentions create the worst of circumstances
Or maybe she really is hungry for power, who knows, but something tells me that might not be the case here
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I can appreciate being suspicious of leaders who want their nation to be great again, as we should be.
But we all have to admit there is a HUGE difference between a leader who tells the people they can be great again only by demonizing everyone else and then sending that nation's people out to conquer other lands and resources in order to make them great as opposed to a leader who tells the people they can be great again by letting them know they can simply exercise their own entrepreneurial spirit and then enacting policies that make those individual aspirations possible.
The latter certainly beats wannabe leaders who tell their people "you didn't build that" and "you owe the state ALL your ingenuity, industry, and income to pay for the privilege of living in your country"--THOSE types of wannabe leaders are more like the former. Glenda looks like she might be in the former category.
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Yeah, I know all that. "Make X Great Again" is about is old as politics, and certainly as old as the concept of "yesterday". There's nothing wrong with it on the face of it.
As I said, it's probably just the times.
I hope she leads them to greatness by rebuilding, not waging war.
Thos was good, I don't know why she was trying to pull him up all of a sudden but besides that loved this and I look forward to more
Oh and I swear if the Griffin kingdom gets taken down by Gilda
Great chapter cant wait for moreand glenda and toothless i ship them
That cliche as hell... Its easy to make sighn language to buy more rope because you found it
Nevermind...
Chapter well worth waiting. Cant wait to see Luna and Celestia see the new Queen. See that the Griffons Kingdome will be a Ally ones more when its recovered. AND MOST IMPORTANT who her *ahem* Mate - is...
Welp, it is time for Noir to become the God-King of Griffonstone with him at Glenda's side.
This was a epically heart warning/pumping chapter I'm so happy for Glenda and Toothless finding the Ideal and bringing this kingdom together. I hope Glenda,Gilda and Gabby make a flake/harum with Toothless.
This was a great chapter, I even like how you had Gabby make a cameo in the story! Do you think Gallus will make a cameo too?
Other than that I hope Griffinstone will be restored to its former glory!
Nice Speech!!!!!
Make Gryphons Great Again, bahaha!
Heh, I wonder how Celestia and Luna will react to finding out that the throne of Griffonstone is filled once again, and on top of that, just who lays at its side.
That was a bit too easy. Recovering something like that should take more than an hours work
So, no Cutiemap inspired friendship quest required. Hmmm....
Death to all
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Chu do da do in wow..... WOW! OwO
Finnaly i havent found a decent displaced in a while everyones alwase stickin close to the main 6, rewritin the story only with the addition. You my sir have made this great i had my doubts in the beginning thinking it was one of the same but you proved me wrong excited to see where it goes next
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Well I'm glad you like it, and I'm currently working on another.
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That's my opinion as well, was expecting a bit of an arc with finding it, not just an afternoon in the fields.
will we see Gallus in the next chapter?
Give me more please. Your king demands it that he be provided with more awesome chapters to this story! Anywho great chapter as always and hope to see more VERY soon you have my attention like a lot because I always enjoy reading a story where a Kingdom is built from nothing or is brought back to what it once was. Hmmmm wonder how the world will react to the griffon kingdom coming back as a super power and how Tia and Lulu will react seeing noir as he is next to the new queen of the griffon kingdom. Also I get the feeling romance will bloom between the two. Anywho I lay in wait to see more soon.
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To be fair Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Gilda did find the idol in the same amount of time.
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Thank for your kind words my king*bows*
And I'll do my best to make the next chapter as entertaining as this one.
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True, but I had hoped that the error of the narrative would be corrected. It always begged the question if all the griffins were so lazy/incompetent that no one checked for it all.
10109348 Lol also sweet can’t wait
well time to make griffonstone great again.
Ok but when's my boi gonna reunite with Shy Pone
Yes, President Glenda Triumph.
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You get a hundred points for guessing the reference.
Should be Noir and not Toothless here. The dalmatians only know him as Noir.
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Lol my bad
GRIFFONSTONE, F**K YEAH!!!🎶
FROM THE ASHES WE RISE AGAIN LIKE THE MIGHTY BIRD OF FIRE!!!!!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😈
And so, the mighty white pegasus was left weeping tears of pride at the sound of hundreds of voices crying out in his sacred battlecry.
Make
Griffinstone
Great
Again
...damn, doesn't have the same ring to it
Honestly the portrayal of Griffons in MLP really ticked me off. I mean, yeah it was only the one city and who knows how many others there are, but the way it was portrayed made it seem like the Griffons were a dying race, without any ruling class or anything. Leaderless. I mean, there didn’t seem to be anyone in charge, they all didn’t seem to do anything, their food seemed barely edible, so on so forth.
So it really bothered me to see them portrayed as such. Griffons in mythology are majestic creatures. To have them laid low and portrayed as so greedy they’d legitimately sell their own mother, all because they lost some worthless idol is just wrong.
I much prefer portrayals in fanfics where they actually have a kingdom, where they’re a militaristic country with cities and rulers and so on so forth, because it better portrays them as what they are, not a rundown race.
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Honestly, Griffinstone felt more like one of those towns where The US sent their Japanese citizens during WWII, and I'm not even sure that it could be considered griffin territory, which makes having them be ambassadorial in the latter seasons make zero sense.
I see that Gabby's channeling her inner Rainbow Dash / Derpy.
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It's all these ponies coming into our country, committing crimes, then paying off any witnesses! I will build a 20 ft wall along the border. That's my first step to Make Griffinstone Great Again (TM).
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Surprisingly this is canon