What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Hey, welcome back : ) and with such a cliffhanger too : )
wat
good story thou, wonder what will happen🤔
Ooo yeahhh ! They are taiming his Dragon tonight 👍
ABSOLUTLY PRICELESS 👏
Huh... I expected the difference between dragons to come up like that. Didn't see it being fixed like that...
Sooo... What do Diamonds and Rubis etc. taste like?
How do they effect him? Or do they are more like candy or vitamin supliments like one uses after a work out?
I wonder what our Griffon Hen is doing. Hope she don't worry herself sick...
As a Duke he be a good Ambassador perhaps?
should the dragon feel lucky? or should i feel sorry for the poor guy?
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Yes
At least Johann won't be bored over another Twilight lecture.
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.............. in the immortelle words of Porky Pig 'that's all folks!' (gets the heck out of dodge)
He seriously needs to go back or at least write back to Gilda.
Twilight basically said “now that you know how to open a door and walk through it, let’s teach you to quantum tunnel by running at an indestructible wall and hoping the virtually 0 probability is kind and lets you phase directly through it. I’ve gotten the process to be somewhat reliable!” And then rammed face first into the wall and fell unconscious.
That ending.......... Sunbutt and Moonbutt want that dragon snu-snu lmao
NOPE *goes orbital* not dealing with horny alicorns
What a way to end a chapter!
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Definitely, I ship those two
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Her name was actually Glenda
I was to the point thinking this story was dead and lo and behold a chapter update! Thank you! And damn son... what a chapter...
Yes I'm so glad this back. Also when will he reunite with Glenda?
Why did you say which consoles? That'll probably date the story when in a few years new ones come out. I'm also not sure the permanent connection to earth and whatnot, is a good idea. It might stunt ponyland's technological understanding and production, when they just steal from earth.
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I agree! It feels like she's been forgotten....
I can understand Celestia's reasoning but this feels like a perversion of what a night fury is. I was willing to accept the ability to talk as that doesn't harm much, but now with the adding of magic, altering of the diet and Faust knows what else it feels wrong. Like there should be so many complications involved that they would be better off leaving him as he is. Also, there is no reason for him to learn magic (especially from Equestrians) his (if any) would be incompatible with their methods anyway. He is not a pony. Perhaps he was intended to be, but he is not and Celestia needs to accept that.
The entire first half of this chapter can be skipped at no cost to the story but with great preservation to suspension of disbelief.
He should have made her promise to help him prank the nobles at the next grand galloping gala.
This story is absolutely full of meaningless fluff and info dumps. You seem to have removed all the challenges that made this interesting, spaced the comedy way too close together, forgotten wherever the polt is supposed to go, and are now just barely trying to keep this alive.
That bit at the end with the princesses. I smell a trap.
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good use of foreshadowing here
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It seems like he forgotten the griffins as a whole
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Nope
Did it not work out between Celestia an silver who ever? If that’s the case alrighty then if not. Me thinks changelings, heat, or a very very terrible prank by them. Anyways glad to see this again an can’t wait for more!
Uuuuh welcome back?
I am amazed that Twilight hasn't used this internet connection to learn more about Johann's world. I heard PS4 can play YouTube and that's tons of information await to be watched.
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the PS2 can play DvDs, so i'm not surprised about what the PS4 can do tbh,
Oh boy ! Feels like a long time ago since I binge-read the whole story, and now there's more of it. And with such a cliffhanger... what will our dragon do in this situation ?
I recommend DS dodges through the nearest illusory wall.
or is it a good growing feeling?
a amazing chapter i love it.
Gamer Luna is canon in this one. Whooop!
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*Glenda
I like where this is going~ UwU
OH SHIT! ITS TIME!
Here's hoping for LunaxNoir pairing!
OMG gamer Lunq is canon I really hope her and Noir join in a herd and hopefully Twilight,Fluttershy and hopefully most of if not all the other main six join. This was a blast and beyond.
While it's good to see this back, I feel like this chapter has been written backwards. We have very little in the present moment (Johann studying with Twilight, getting the letter, and going to castle) and four or five big flashbacks of events we skipped. I would have liked more if we saw all those scenes in order as they happened, even with big jumps in time between them, then ending with [studying, letter, castle]. Heck, they could have worked well as individual short chapters. A few lighthearted "filler episodes" to develop his relationships with various ponies and act as a buffer to the next big arc.
In short, I think rearranging the scenes chronologically would help the chapter flow much better.
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Clearly you didn't pay attention to the chapter where he receives his voice.
He unfortunately can't go back due to his body being mangled and destroyed in the accident.
His soul was plucked from his dying body and transferred to a new body made by the princesses in Equestria in a rushed effort to save his life.
Another reason he can't go back is because he is already classified as dead, meaning his life is over in his world.
If you are gonna try and poke fun at my work have the common decency to know the facts.
As for your second question about how she is "somehow found a way to keep a portal going with an ethernet". At what point did I say she did that?
This is a world filled with magic and stuff not truly meant to take seriously.
If you want serious and accurate go read a history book.
I'm not here to entertain everyone, those who enjoy I'm happy to please. Those who take things too seriously I could careless what they say.
Soldier, you have a choice to make.
You can choose to turn around go back home and forget what you just saw, no judgment and no shame to you.
Or... Or you can do what probably no living creature had ever done in the all history of Equestria.
Will it be painful ? Maybe
Will it make all your body scream to let it be given the sweet release of death After three hours ? Most likely.
Will the scientifics from the futur have a really hard time to find out why the skeleton of a dragon was found witch half his body destroy, a cigar in his claws and a smile on his face ? That's a high probability.
But let me tell you something. You don't look a gift horse in the mouth, you look at the flank. So go get them tiger.
Did heat season just hit or did they team up to prank him hard?
Oh my gosh this is great. Gamer loona is always a treat. Also naw she totally into you bro.
....i wonder when the gryphon queen is going to show back up? Because I smell DRAMA.