What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Excellent chapter. Fly Noir, FLY!! And most definitely don't forget the griffons.
Nice
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Who needs an ID to get weapons?
You see how much gold is in one of those bit coins?
Or those high quality gems that literally are grown by ponies in rock farms??
Not to mention the higher quality stuff that dragons like to snack on???
And even if you're looking to commit crimes through buying weapons--you're NOT likely going to show ID anyhow.
There is a picture that would perfectly for this but my internet is slow atm
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I actually saw that picture and wrote this line to commemorate that
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Indeed
I was glad to help. I'm also lucky.
Cause I'm seventh.
What was the name for the other diamond dogs?
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Gem canines
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Thanks.
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Would it be alright for me to use the Gem canines for my story?
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Sure I would be honored
Kitchen.
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Awesome! I'll be sure to credit you in the author note when i write the chapter.
Great work keep it up
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Lol thanks
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Thanks
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Np.
I heard that the kitten is gonna need some more supplies soon... - kitten?
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Lol it was supposed to be kitchen XD
Damn, I wish this chapter was longer and had the flight and interaction between Noir and the ponies!
Ah well, guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter then :(
Good work!
Fly like the wind, bullseye!
Now to wait a whole another month. Great chapter
The suspense is killing me. Will Noir make it to Canterlot in time, will he be able to defeat this new foe, tune in next to find out on Dragonball Z. Duuu di duu duu du duu di duuuu du di du di duuu di di duu di di duu di di duuuuuuuuuuu du du duu.
New Griffonstone kingdom? This looks interesting. Maybe Noir can help them develop with his human knowledge?
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You misspelled banana, and also spice is just a chemical in the seeds that stimulates your pain receptors, making your brain think the food is too hot.
he wouldnt have felt any pain if he didnt chew it , so it would make sense for him to still get affected. Though i dont see how he can get slashed and bones broken and yet a little pain in the mouth is too much for him lmao
Wow I can't wait to find out what happens next
...On one hand, I can see why they might panic, a dragon of that size should always be taken seriously. But on the other hand, they don't know that the dragon is planning to attack. For all they know it could be doing anything from sightseeing to visiting the Princesses on a diplomatic mission. I'll be curious to see how you handle things once he meets back up with the ponies. Also, Fluttershy is gonna be so happy.
Lastly, wow. Glenda finally went for it! Woo, congrats girl!
This is going to be epic! Noir roar echong from the distance. Shooting warning shots on a high speed flyby if hes not fast enough to get before the dragon.
Or he gets in the memorial place wile Luna and Celestia are going trough there speech. Not more than a few minutes of tears of joy before he can warn em and they scramble to prepare.
Is it the red Dragon Fluttershy 'stare' into submission or a different one? When will the dragon migration start?
Glenda x Noir i ship it
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Have you not heard of the special Banna fruit? Many mistake it as being the humble Banana, but nay! It is a different breed of fruit entirely, the likes of which we have not encountered before on earth!
And hey, maybe some people just can't handle spicy foods, since she would've likely cracked the seeds open to get that spicy essence, it could still affect him... especially if he wasn't expecting it.
There be that romance I knew was in there! Can’t wait for more keep up the awesome work!
This was a awesomely chill chapter time skip I hope he can be the embassy of both kingdom so he can keep visiting and living Ind both kingdoms.
i love this story when is the next chapter?
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I'm working on it now. If I lucky maybe two weeks
Hmm. I can see an issue with Noir trying to relay the warning. Why wouldn't Glenda take a moment to write up a quick message for Noir to carry to Equestria?
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I was more commenting on the odd structure of the sentence. Saying the princesses are "6 foot at most" puts them no taller than 6 feet. Though I think the author was meaning "6 foot at least", which puts their height at 6 feet and can be taller.
The only problem I can see here is that Noir has no way to warn Equestria. He can't speak. Glenda should have sent a letter with him.
this is going to be quite a entrance he makes .
I like this story waiting for more chapters
Ooh, now it's gonna get interesting!
I feel I need to point a few things out here.
The story isn't bad, I love it to bits and I am still interested in it and what happens in the future. But it feels a little rushed.
I can understand wanting to churn out chapters and to progress the story on further, but don't forget to slow down a little and write things out and make sure you're adding in all you want to add in. This has been mostly relevant with a few of the last chapters.
Its just something I noticed and wanted to point out. I could be wrong of course, but I still feel it worth pointing out even if I am.
Thanks for the chapter! I eagerly await for more!
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Kitten would be the name of the cook.
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.....Read the line more carefully.
beautiful I love it so far keep up the AWESOME work I believe in this story!!!
When is the next chapter coming out?
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It could take two to three weeks.
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It still could be.
I can’t wait to see what happens next, this is such a good story