What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Free the dragon and his tamer!!!!!
On a side note: Try to add things that will benefit Jonathan(Yes, elements from the anime series). I think that will make this story more interesting.
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I'd say on stuff to add. Add like Elemental attacks that fit a dragon from all the different kinds of dragons to Jonathan. Like Ice Breath, Lightning Breath, Poison Claws. Ooooooo!!! I can see a Ultimate attack for him is Atomic Breath.
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Also it's not Jonathan, its Johann XD
I was afraid it would be something fully sapient that was capable of begging for its life.
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Hydra... well, shit.
Blast it in the mouth, dragons are not fire proof on the inside, same can go for the hydras.
Thanks for the chapter ^_^.
It's a good thing that plasma can cauterize any wound it could cause almost instantly.
a good chapter to a good story.
things seam to be working out between ToothLess and Glenda.
as to the author not question bringing in more remember the more you bring in the more compacted your story will grow on a huge scale.
i say yes if you feel you are up to the challenge.
Damn, this is gonna be Good !
Uve done good so far dont ruin it with the anime crap.
I’ve read a story where the Hydra’s heart is in it’s tail, get rid of that first, just in case!
Sad situation to be in, but I'm glad to see he's made another friend. And even more glad to see that they've been planning. I'll be looking forward to seeing exactly how you'll have their escape go.
Also, good on Fluttershy for not giving up hope.
Outstabing as always good job :)
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Huh well that's interesting and I'll keep it in mind.
Jonathan and Glenda? Maybe?...
Forget I said anything and also nice way of putting Httyd 2 reference their
Well, shit.
Great chapter
The "person from our world thrown into another" be it by reincarnation, dimensional rift or whatever is a common device in many animes. It even has a specific name. It's called isekai. While this plot device has become rather popular recently, it's been around for decades.
Specifically on adding more stuff from "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" I don't really see it working well.
I would describe this story as an MLPFiM/HttYD isekai crossover/alternate universe. I think trying to shoehorn in any significant elements from "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime" at this point would feel rather forced and jarring. To not break the feeling of the story you would have to keep any added elements small and subtle.
It would be best to avoid incorporating any elements that are story breaking/changing.
Example: Johann/Toothless gaining the Great Sage (analyze anything skill) ability would feel story breaking. It would make every reader ask why this wasn't introduced as soon an possible in the first few chapters.
In short, be very very careful about incorporating more elements from another story/setting at this point. You've already done a good job establishing your story world, don't break it by adding things just for the sake of adding things.
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Thank you I'll keep this in mind
Man oh man, glenda and toothless huh? Love to see it xD also i really like the name noir. I think it fits him better :P
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...that doesn't explain anything.
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Thanks!
People won't notice unless they look hard.
Just finished your recent chapter, it's dope. Towards the end when the hydra was revealed, I automatically started thinking of King Ghidorah. You'll have to excuse me, I've been watching a lot of Godzilla lately lol.
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Lol you maybe more right then you could know.
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I like the story don't get me wrong, but the way the protagonist was so passionate about how nothing else but humans can talk was disappointing. Like, how is that so hard to even consider?
Why is alien life even a concept? Also, I said it almost made me stop reading. So I will continue to read, unless it becomes too irritating and cringy, which, besides this part, it hasn't shown any signs of that.
Damn fine backstory for Glenda Love the details A work well done
After the escape they might get closer. Adrenalin high have surprising high bounding value.
Might we get some epic Nightguard Spec Ops action that makes the escape possible and let Luna have her savior in hoof grasp only to have him slip away in the last stage of the search&rescue operation with Glenda on his side?!
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Thank you
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I noticed it. My attempt of reversed psychology to give it some more chapters Anyway the communication barrier makes it better for me atm. Later he probably get entchanted accessoire or a spell that fixes it. Atm it works very well for him. Glenda learn about his body language now and his personality later when they can talk. Hope his passionate night/day between this two unlucky flyers will strengthen there bond and extends to his 'first' waifu later
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I wonder if your hydras have head regrowing or rather a sharper body coordination with every destroyed head. Alternative they get more speed by losing heads wile paying of with precise movments. Hydras have to share a body there for probably every head focuses on a certain bodypart. All share muscle memory but lack of personal use. Better reaction time with less heads dominating for control but focus on gaining experiences wile learning to used previous accupied bodyparts.
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Actualy it kinda do Its stated by Luna. Our now dragon hero ruined the Assassins plan and saved the Equestria leadership. Getting killed wile going for the right thing to do. I still wonder how his soul get to Equestria...
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Pretty head on recommended direction. That background build of his two MC are detailed fitting and sounds to fit like a glove. Wile i love to see him update i rather wait 2-3 weeks for the main keypount turning event to stay high quality.
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If not for the story name this might count as main villan encounter The Steaks need to be set high. One of my comments on this chapter sure can add to it
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More like epic. Main boss encounter. Plus a chance to shine for side characters
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Huh... Neat idea. Wile i see problems with it the pros are not that bad. Like a good variantation
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Wile i like the idea and it seem to be very logical its also very disturbing. But i think we get that from the Manticore already... Lets hope for it now or later. The arena observers going to see a ones in a lifetime event no matter what it seems
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Lets leave this for a sequel. I think at this point we rather wannt to see epic combat with details to get ready for the real deep stuff later on.
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Wile B1 are comedic releaved the tention they were still deadly as fuck in numbers. Republic would probably lost without Palpetin shut down order after exterminating the leadership...
Great story so far keep it up
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No, I mean it doesn't explain the selective silence. If the goal was to kill the sisters by making them unable to hear incoming traffic, then why not make everything silent? Why go through the effort of allowing the sisters the ability to speak through the silence?
I have a question about his biology, is he going to be a 100% loyal to the movies or is he going to get some or all traits of equestrian dragons?
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He wont be completely movie accurate.
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Or ripped apart from the inside getting the 'chestbuster' titel
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Pretty sure they noticed that. Never had a exciting conversations you ignored/forget your surroundings. Pretty mutch after a cinema visit it often happens.
Are you planning on having the other dragon breeds from HTTYD incorporated into the story?
Also what do you think of mixing in some Monster Hunterâ„¢ monsters into the world for him to fight, because these monsters can't normally be tamed(it requires a specific bracelet, an egg of your choice of monster, and a ritual), they are usually very aggressive/protective or territorial/invasive.
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I'm not completely sure about the idea of adding the other dragons. I might make a poll so you the readers can vote on that idea.
As for the monster hunter monster, I'm not to sure about that.
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A bunch of stories just use it to get clicks and stuff
Very good chapter, I can't wait to see where this all gos.
I wonder if Toothless will find a way to communicate with others?