What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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This Zebra princess is one fascinating character.
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I really like Zaya! That mysteriousness she carries with herself is fascinating! Coupled with her rather peppy side, her design you showed us a while ago... All combines into a great character!
Eh, I guess that's a reasonable amount of flirting for people who've had, I assume, about 2 or 3 conversations. Not that I have much experience in judging when to flirt
Excellent work love this chapter can’t wait to see what happens next
Lol!🙈
Unknown to the dragon male with a human soul, this was the day his hord of mates started!
Dun duun duuun!
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I can see it now, he brings about world peace by marrying all the various nations princesses and daughters.
Wonderful content, can’t wait for more.
Thats gonna be one hay of a Wonky Hippozonky?
Dragon with a harem? Alright you had my attention before but now you REALLY have my attention…
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A dragon zebra would be a Debra. That’s right, all Debra’s are part dragon.
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Given thats my dads second wife...
Who is younger than I am.
looks like I was wrong about that preview, but overall I Loved this chapter!
And not only that, but the gorgeous Zebra princess was here to, Ialsodoshipityes!
Me *wants the harem to happen*
Noir *conflicted an not ready for a herd*
O///0 FRIKKIN TEASING ZEBRA!
Great chapter bud!
Noir : Two princesses Alicorn, one queen Griffon and one princess Zebra. Is there anyone I miss ?
Torch : Greeting, this is my daughter Ember.
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Oof
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oh gods hes taking over the known world with such ease that nobody is resisting!!
Well, that's not how I expected this chapter to end.
A most excellent chapter.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Next time in:
The Time I was Reincarnated as a Dragon
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Okay then stop reading and go read something else
Something tells me that Noir the Night Fury is gonna finally meet Dragon Lord Torch at the summit for the first time. I wonder if his daughter Ember will be with him and they both finally meet the Dragon that brought down Mantle.
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I agree
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Discord ultimately acts for the best intention of chaos, and more importantly, as referenced there may be multiple(?) diety-class entities like Discord out and about in diff dimensions/universes, hence why he HAD to call in that favor, since TECHNICALLY Joh isn't a regular denizen of his dimension/plane of reality. It'd be like walking over the fence to your neighbor's yard, and suddenly rearranging and re-planting all of their flowers. In the case of Joh/Noir - it'd be plain rude, and might start a fight to suddenly change him into a Kaiju... That, or it might piss off the godlike being for just 'cramping their style'. Discord is the literal manifestation of Chaos, not giant Kaiju.
But more importantly; as to why discord couldn't just transform the enemy, he said it himself. 'That wouldn't be very chaotic, would it?'. At the end of the day, Discord struggles even existing normally without causing spontaneous chaos in another dimension (the fluttershy/discord episodes highlight this the best). Interfering and creating order from the highest pinnacle of Chaos achievable (mass panic, emergency evacuation without too many deaths) would be inoptimal, and perhaps literally impossible for Discord. Making Noir huge, and having him fight the Dragon was the most chaotic, but safe way to resolve the battle for both sides, while still indeed leaving lots of chaos about for months to come (rebuilding efforts/etc)
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This doesn't have any smut scenes as far as I'm aware yet, just crude references.
While I do partly agree with the Godzilla thing being a tad cringe, I explained better as to why it overall was a good thing story-wise to still keep the stakes in place, while not introducing 'too many' godly elements from Discord - plus, it posed a really important factor to show the sheer difference between Alicorns and some other creatures like colossal (antimagic tbf) dragons and Discord. Good for in-universe powerscaling, and it didn't come for free. More importantly shows the difference between the 'Antagonist/Villain' (unnamed pony#2483) and the 'Heroes'. Yes, the Dragon had magic immunity (BUT!! Just on its scales. As referenced, you could still just crush its heart with Telekinesis-), but Celestia was tainted by a thousand years of peace - and Luna, well. Probably doesn't want to fall to her darker side again, and probably avoids lethal intent while fighting. They aren't willing to kill willy-nilly, hence why they get curbstomped and almost assassinated by the Antagonist... Because they're not on their guard - plus, they might be powerful, but unwillingness to use that power to its fullest is their weakness.
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Commenting like this is extremely cringe, and isn't 'useful' criticism. You could have much more easily went
'Hey, this seems kinda tropey and deviates from the beginning of the storyline (which I personally found quite lovely), and I believe that such a move diverted from the original 'enjoyment' that such scenes gave (e.g the parallel between your story and how Toothless was found in HTTYD, and Noir and Flutters). I think making Noir able to speak, while not the worst of things, it removed one of the major components that I believe made watching Noir's interaction with their surroundings feel... more true to how Toothless was in the show/movies, which was an intelligent but mostly nonverbal creature, meaning that there was a series of hijinks (like toothless drawing in the sand with a log); with said Hijinks no longer able to occur, lest Noir willingly not speak and fool newcomers. It's not the worst of tropes (a random magical solution). Though, it could be improved upon and go into more depth into how it works, or make it have some form of requirement or limitation (e.g needs to be refreshed every month), which would make future kidnappings or trappings of Noir actually have gravitas in terms of him losing the ability to speak and perhaps other things as a result of the spell being unable to be refreshed. Not the worst trope to slip up on, but I'd find it rather odd if a solution was never found either way. It works for the story, thats what matters. It's a minor nitpick.' - Which I believe illustrates your point far nicer, and far more constructively.
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You're genuinely the least helpful person I have seen. Being the element of kindness =/= element of literal astral Empathy. Its implied that she has heightened emotional senses for animals, yes - but that isn't explicitly said to transfer to things like Dragons/Diamond Dogs (non-ponies). More importantly, this entire comment is invalid, period.
If you actually go ahead and look at the HTTYD Universe, there are MANY ways to injure a Dragon to prevent it from being able to spit fire - but the most logical reasoning going off of later chapters (even though its never said), is that Noir was reincarnated(improperly) and had to slowly eat, and grow to the point where they could once again spit plasma (plus, incomplete body). Some Dragons in HTTYD use gas, others use a liquid like a flamethrower, and some use a reaction chamber in their throats to burn a highly flammable oxidizer with a powerful fuel to generate intense heat, etc etc.
There are a LOT of reasons that could be extrapolated. But yeah.
d u m m y
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Get this man a TRUE.
It's honestly so simple for people to just... not read the story if they dislike it, but instead they have to be obscenely toxic towards the creator, which only discourages and disheartens newer and less experienced writers, thus overall decreasing the volume (and overall eventual quality) of stories.
You're doing great.
rofl looks like we got a dragon with a lot of lady killer swag
AAAA IM LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
also DAYUM Noir be havin that rizzler energy without even TRYING
Haven't seen or heard anything from you now in awhile, you doing alright?
Nice, a logical reason for someone to be in a harem.
Lol, but it will be one heck of a way to go!
....now my brain is trying to figure out body types for the potential candidates.
Glenda im seeing as maybe an warrior princess type build? Maybe an Amazonian one?
Honestly not enough information on Zaya to tell what type of build at this time.
Honorary mention of celestia being a THICC motherly build and Luna being an athletic one. (Because even though celly has a bf i still ship!)
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Alternate motherly candidate Chrysalis (shapeshifting in the very good use and she is almost definitely at least a mother to some of the changelings)