What happens when a young adult goes out of his way to save two of Equestria's princesses disguised as humans from being hit by a car at the cost of his own life? He gets reincarnated in Equestria as a dragon!
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Aaw. Don't you worry, he'll come back to haunt you I'm sure.
Wow. First time I have seen 52 readers at the same time!
I really hate bigotry
Interesting. We got civilized gem canines, and a racist puppetmasterish villain in the shadows... keep it up
Another great chapter, can't wait for more.
Poor princesses, they just want to PROTECC Johann.
Shock and surprise, you mean leaving Steel Horn alive had consequences, who could have ever seen that coming ?
That can be interpreted in so many ways
hehe liked the 101 dalmatian bit and of course the two chefs wth the spaghetti thats im guessing was inspired from the Lady and the Tramp ^_^
tho shame there wasnt a kiss between Noir (Johann) and Glenda with the spaghetti lol
Nice
The term happy hunting is used in Warframe. And when I saw it here I thought. "Time to bullet jump and nuke waves of aliens" then I realized. I'm in a pony world right now
I know it is Fluttershy were talking about but what is so embarassing to be embrased by royalty?
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Huh. I just realized I have never been this early when new chapter comes. First time for being first to comment too.
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Whoops it was so suppose to be embraced
I see that reference and it is genius and painful at the same time.
I recognize those references and they hurt. Yeah, Celly took too long. >:(
The name is Pongo," Is this a reference to 101 dalmatians. I wonder if they have 101 kids some time in the future. Fun fact pongo and perdita have 15 pups in the movie.
Hey, Noir, what's wrong? Are you seeing spots or something?!" I'm seeing spots 101 pookie dots
who as been quiet
She was was donned
Besides, I want to bring those who have put that poor boy in such a horrible place and end this barbaric operation. - bring to what exactly?
She said in a sweet, motherly tone." - extra quotes
reassured to Noir - to?
I gladly take it - not took?
We both wait until we heard - not waited?
Great chapter! Was lots of fun to read. Looking forward when the girls find out their dragon friend survived.
Love that reference^^
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Well, they have 101 rooms at least^^
In theory at least it's possible for him to speak eventually. His vocal range is a soft murmur to a really loud roar so that's not a problem. Meowth learned to speak as a human with some difficulty to impress a Skitty I think, and humans make a habit of teaching birds, cats, and dogs to speak like us so the jaw structure or even whether they have lips or not isn't a factor that'd lock him out of speech. And, he was a human and toothless can do charades and draw so the species is intelligent enough. It'd just take a lot of time and effort learning the specifics of how to keep his vocal pattern steady and how to move his tongue.
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First meowth was actually trying to impress another meowth.(I love the show and remember that episode)
Second later in future chapters I will explain why he cant talk so no spoilers 😋
And the true villain shows his face... Truck-kun! How could you!!
Saint Bernard’s Hospital. Heh.
Fitting name for a dog hospital. Rescue dogs bred by the St. Bernard Hospice.
That takes care of the Minotaur and our Dragon still has his morals. Very nice!
This Gem Canines are the first story that makes there Race look noble in the best way. Im in awe. Never even come to me if it wasnt a displaced or exil!
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He isn't the villain here though. He does what he does best, sending humans to worlds that need him/her.
Let’s see...
Racist? Pony? Wants the princesses out of the way so he can rule Equestria?
It’s Prince BlueBalls...
...I mean, BlueBlood...
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Why do you think we're feeling so betrayed? After years of faithful service, murdering helpless people left and right, for him to turn around and do something so horrible as attempt murder?!? Despicable!
Love it keep up the good work:) love the direction this is going
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Even so, omnivorous animals must have a balance diet. Being omnivorous doesn’t mean that you can survive eating exclusively vegetation or meat.
awesome chapter.
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You know something that might interest you then is the story The Epic of a Diamond Dog I found it good
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Link?
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I'm using my phone so I can paste a link though it should be easy to find I mean you can literally copy the text and paste it in the search bar
This was epic especially the Lady and the tramp and the 101dalmatian references. I also liked that the Gem Canines I love them. I really hope the princesses and the girls find out he's alive soon them morning him is heart Breaking. I also hope he stops the villains.
Just got to read all of this chapter, and I LOVE it, I really loved the fact you made the Gem canines good and all, also
Fuck you blueballs!
CUTE DRAGON TOOTHLESS MOMENTS??????!
10046949 Could be Cozy Glow. Even though she’s a pegasus, she’s managed to pull off unicorn-style magic in the show.
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At least not healthy...
Villains' plans always amuse me.
This villain had access to a world with weapons beyond his imagination, still does probably (since he must have gotten there somehow in the first place), and what weapon is his choice?
Not a city-destroying nuclear bomb.
Not one of the many forms of explosives that can deal devastating blows to anything.
Not the ranged projectile-launchers which can kill anything in the blink of an eye.
He chose a car. A fucking car.
To kill what are pretty much known as gods on their world.
A car.
And from the looks of things, this villain hasn't even kept any weaponry or anything from the Human world, even though it would greatly aid him...
Apart from that little nitpick, I continue to enjoy the story.
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I will plan in future chapters to explain, but if you remember from the previous I believe I mention that ponies who go to our world had reduced magic even for alicorns who's body were more vulnerable. Also given the spell he maid and that you would either need to steal a gun or explosives, or purchase which is hard without an ID, his options were limited. I'm not saying this nitpick is bad, it's a good point but to better understand you would need to think real deep on it. Also I'm glad your enjoying yourself.
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Or a teamup if them both and them using codenames to conceal their identities
Disney reference in something that is based off of a DreamWorks movie series. Awesome.
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Wait the villain also is a unicorn. Right? It just might be Sombra.
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It was a truck.
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Boops him.
"You could have just smacked me! Did you seriously have to bite me?"
Why did I type that?
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And, by definition, a truck is a car.
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The story still said truck. That's why I said what I said.
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Eh, I'm not going to argue semantics.
I just chose "car" because to me most vehicles (other than semis) I call cars (due to it's definition, mostly).
Are you almost done with the next chapter?
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As of now I'm currently taking a little bit of a breather,to help me stay focused and not to rush to it. What I'm currently doing is writing out the outline for the story before I decide to write it.
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Oh good idea. Have you ever heard of wattpad?
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No what is it?
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It's an app that is like this fanfiction.net. You can even put a YouTube video and a picture at the start of each part. I know this because I have been using it to make a story on there. It might not be as good a story as yours, but I really am trying. Oh and also, you have to make an account so that you can read the stories.
I had mutch fun reading this. Lots of referenses and qouts.
I love it and will look forward to next chapter.