Same Unicorn, Different Manestyle

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Twilight Sparkle has always been worrying about things, and she sometimes ends up feeling stressed. One day, after looking at a mirror, she decides going to the spa sounds like a good idea.

And maybe she can also do something with her mane...

The events in this one-shot story, requested by JimmyHook19, happen before Twilight turns into an Alicorn.

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JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #1 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Brilliant =3

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Discord The Narrator #2 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · · ·

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Thanks.

JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #3 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Your welcome =3

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #4 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

"Uh... Rarity told me about her own... regimen. I... guess I could try it," she said.
"Oh, that is a marvelous choice! I assure you that you will feel truly better after that process," Aloe replied.

Hello Aloe!!!

"Besides, you are not the first pony to follow Rarity's method. Even more wanted to try it after she became more popular," Lotus added.

High Lotus!!!

"Well... Ok then, let's give it a try," Twilight said, feeling confident, as the spa ponies guided her through the different areas of the building.
First, they led her inside the steam room. She felt a bit hot in there, but it was comfortable.
"Um... What do you do for this room to be this warm?" she asked.
"Oh, we use boiling water. The steam is what fills the room," Aloe answered.
"Interesting..." Twilight said before a steam cloud engulfed her.

Indeed.

After a while, there came the mud services, some kind of bath where Twi didn't exactly feel prepared until they told her there was no problem. Aloe put two cucumber slices over Twilight's eyes and she helped her to get inside one of the two muddy pools. It actually felt cold, and she liked it.
"Heh, Pinkie Pie would probably eat the cucumber," Twilight said, laughing a bit.
"Actually, she does that everytime she comes here..." Lotus said, and the three of them shared a laugh.

It's Pinkie, don't question it!!!

Later, Lotus and Aloe gave the Unicorn a nice massage all over her body, in which she almost fell asleep.
"Heheh... I have to admit... you two are good with this."
"Oh, thank you, Twilight!" Aloe said, accepting the compliment.
Next, there was a hoof bath service. It was just a small pool with some water for the hooves, but Twilight liked it. After using it, her purple hooves felt nicely soft.
The procedure also included an iron file, which Aloe used for taking care of Twilight's horn, leaving it as soft as her hooves.
"I'm feeling really good with this," she said, making them smile.

I bet you are.

And then, they were about to finish, although there was one last thing.
"The last step before we finally end is washing your mane, Twilight," Aloe explained.
"I don't see any issue with that, so... Good!" Twilight replied.
The spa ponies put her on a chair, making her head rest on a washing basin.
"You can close your eyes while we take care of your mane," Lotus said, and Twilight nodded, closing her eyes. Just a few seconds later, she heard the faucet open as the spa ponies began to wet her mane.
"Ah... Rarity was right... This is such a nice place to come and spend some time relaxing," Twilight thought, feeling happy because of Rarity's suggestion.

Indeed it is

"Hmmmm... Let's see: everything has been cool, but I could always change anything... Like what?" she thought, finally speaking for the spa ponies, "You know what? I think it's time to change, so... show me another style!"
Nodding, Aloe and Lotus reassembled Twilight's mane, fixing it and preparing other styles. Twilight didn't like all of them, but she got surprised at other manestyles. She even looked like Rarity at one time.
"Heh... Well, um... Next style, please..." she said, blushing.
Some time later, she finally found her favourite style: her mane was tied in two pigtails behind her.
"Wow... This is amazing!" Twilight exclaimed.

I bet it is!!!

"If you want, we will make sure to save this style for future times you come here," Lotus said.
"That would make me happy. Thank you two for everything. I feel so much better right now," Twilight said, and the two ponies smiled.
"You're welcome, Twilight. We're glad to know you feel better," Aloe replied.
Twilight nodded, "I'll probably come back more times, no matter how stressed I am. Anyways, I have to go now. See you!"
And Twilight left the place as she waved at the spa ponies, who happily returned the gesture. As she walked out of the Ponyville Day Spa with her new manestyle, she had no idea that, a few months later, she would get a complete makeover that would surprise everypony, including her friends.

That was sweet!!!

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #5 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

9711388
Is the cover art a screenshot from the MLP RPG I've heard stuff about?

Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #6 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

A Spa Ponies story without the damn sex tag ?!

These non-orgy Spa Ponies stories are so rare.
Upvoted for that alone.

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Discord The Narrator #7 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Wow... Thanks!

Also, I didn't know those stories existed.

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Discord The Narrator #8 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Glad you like the story.

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #9 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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They sure do, and they’re hot!!!
9712184
Sure did !!!

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Discord The Narrator #10 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #11 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

9711817
Yes it is :3 It's a Roblox Server called..... My Little Pony 3D: Roleplay is Magic.

Fun Fact: That's also where I created My Female Bat Pony Self from on there ^^

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #12 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · · ·

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Maybe I'll try creating Stary Night in there.

JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #13 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

9712219
Noice =3

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #14 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · · ·

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We'll see what happens.

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #15 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

Fun and I like it.

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Discord The Narrator #16 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

9712345
Heh, thanks.

SparklingShield

SparklingShield #17 · Jul 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Interesting. It's too short. But fun and funny

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Discord The Narrator #18 · Jul 7th, 2019 · · ·

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Yeah, I didn't think about making a longer story for that.

By the way, glad you like it.

Comment posted by SparklingShield deleted Jul 7th, 2019

SparklingShield

SparklingShield #20 · Jul 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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No problem

Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #21 · Jul 13th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Yes indeed.
This story is very soothing

You know a story is good when you have people reading it again for enjoyment.

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Discord The Narrator #22 · Jul 13th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Heh, that's right.

Thank you.

BezierBallad

BezierBallad #23 · Aug 2nd, 2019 · 2 · ·

Oh. My. God. This cover was a screenshot of Roleplay is Magic on Roblox. I LOVED that game. And I still do.

One thing happened after another though, and I’m pretty much permanently banned from it. I still talk with some of my friends who play it. But we miss the experience.

Great job on this story by the way.

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