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This story is a sequel to A Compass to the Soul


“Eyes are windows to the soul”

Since the start of a new era between ponies and creatures alike in Equestira, Rainbow Dash and Soarin have been working extra hard as privateers for the Navy while unrest happens everywhere else in the world. Scootaloo has been happy living with her adoptive parents until one day long-lost relatives of hers have found her and demands for her return much to the dismay of the Dash family. Scootaloo herself doesn’t want to go but doesn’t have a choice. Will she be able to escape this fate and stay with the family she has gained?



Cover Art was done by Phantom-Dragon.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 26 )

Yaaaa Its here the squeal. But I got to be honest I didn't think it would be out so soon. That you would work on one of your other stories first.

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I'm waiting for the rest of Season 9 to see what else happens. With this story I already have a set plan and don't need to worry about Season 9 getting in the way and plus you cannot rush creativity or else you're going end up with a very bad story.

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Well Its good to know your not one of the fans that will give up after season 9 ends Like I said in the comments on anther story (though I can't remember what one) LONG LIVE THE FANDOM, LONG LIVE THE FANDOM!

:pinkiegasp: Are Scoots and Rumble going to be forced apart in this story? The prologue seems to imply this. :fluttershyouch:

On a ship called the S.S SoarinDash

Really, girl? Really? :ajbemused:

How young is the marrying age in this AU? :applejackunsure: I'm just asking because a really heartbreaking idea just popped into my head.

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Well in old times it was at least fourteen I think before went up to sixteen. It's definitely around that age.

Comment posted by MrBroniac deleted Jun 27th, 2019

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Heartbreaking idea suddenly becomes more possible. :fluttershbad:

:pinkiegasp: Scootaloo, young filly, go to your room!:ajbemused: Rumble, might I have a few words with you? But first just let me get my friend, Twelve Gauge.
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Really, girl? Really?

:ajbemused:Well subtly was not been Cartoon's strongest suit.:twilightsheepish:

Wait... what about Auntie Lofty...
Well, that escalated.

Why do I expect an 'abduction' with the use of the Washouts (including Lightning Dust)... I am too much of a sucker for redemption arch for most villains, aren't I?

Me at second paragraph: Heartbreaking idea is about to happen, isn't it? :pinkiegasp:

Me at end: Heartbreaking idea is totally happening. :raritycry:

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Assuming that what they are saying about Scootaloo's aunts is true, it wouldn't have been legal during this time period.

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That assumes they are an actual couple, they could be two ... there is no better way to put it... old maids cohabitating.

Well I hope there plan works If not then well lets just say I will be sharpening a spear a both ends:pinkiecrazy:. Also great chapter can't wait to see more.

So why doesn't this story have cover art?

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It's coming, the artist has to finish it.

Okay, girl, knowing you and judging by the story's description, there's no way that it can be that easy. :ajbemused: Oh well, at least that heartbreaking idea that I had didn't actually happen. :twilightsmile: Unless...:pinkiegasp: No, no, no. Stop thinking. Stop thinking. :fluttershyouch:

Hmm... and here I was expecting Rumble to break Lightning Dust out and make a deal with her to 'abduct' Scootaloo for Gold Digger and the young couple would elope...
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Why do I get the feeling I spoke too soon?

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I will say this, Lightning Dust won't be appearing in the story.

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😶 and yet I must scream...

I see you have a cover art now does that mean we can expect an update soon?

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That what I noticed too. I hope it means an update soon.

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