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KidatHeart5


I'm a writer, artist, and animation buff. I'm hoping to make my mark in the world by doing what I love most. My favorite characters are Discord, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle.

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This story is a sequel to Crown of Winter


The 7th installment of the RCF series. Based on “Snow White”. Everypony loves Princess Flurry Heart…except for her sister, Princess Skyla. Skyla’s jealousy soon makes her the target of a sinister foe. Can Flurry Heart and her cousins wield a powerful relic to save her sister, or risk losing her forever? Co-written with CartoonNerd12.

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I thought I saw Zootopia in there. :twilightsmile:

7846343 Thanks for faving my story! :pinkiehappy:I wasn't able to comment on your homepage, so I thought I'd do it here.

7846343 I was unable to PM this to you, so I'll do it here.
My sister told me you sent her another oneshot, but I would like to discuss the appearance of Love Tap's parents with you. I imagine Bright Star as a pony version of Queen Idun (Elsa and Anna's mother). I see her with a white coat, dark mane, and blue eyes. Do you have a different idea for Bright Star's look? My sister definitely does. I'm also planning to create a oneshot in which Snow Pea sees her deceased great-grandmother. I want to explain Bright Star's origins in the oneshot, so do you want me to send my ideas to you to see what you think?

Comment posted by KidatHeart5 deleted Jan 8th, 2017

7846343 Sorry! PM acted wonky again! :twilightblush: Here's what I wanted to say:

I put that Love Tap took her beauty after her mother, but I guess there's more than one way to interpret that line without ruining your idea.

Actually, I do have an interpretation. Let's say that Love Tap did take after her mom, but only in beauty. You didn't say anything about her appearance. Love Tap could look as beautiful as her mother.

I imagine Lincoln Log to look mostly like the weaver that was pictured in MLP issue #42, where Rarity and Pinkie Pie are trying to recreate "The Princess's New Dress". If you haven't seen it, go to the 2:00 mark on the video.

I kinda see Lincoln Log like that, only without the beard and the - well - scraggly clothes.

In terms of Love Tap taking after her parents, I would think that her coat is a mix of her mom's white coat and her dad's dark yellow one. She would inherit Bright Star's blue eyes and her mane would be a mix of her parents' mane colors. Love Tap could also inherit the way her mother looked, so that's what Lincoln Log could mean by taking her beauty after her mother.

If it's a bit much for you, I apologize. I just wanted to specify what I thought. Do you have a different idea of what Lincoln Log looks like?

I hope to hear from you soon!

KidatHeart5:heart:

P.S. Thanks for the password!

:pinkiegasp: LE GASP! It's the pony of shadow. Ooooooh-eeeeeee-oooooooh! :applejackconfused:

Refresh my memory if you've already told me, but what's the RCF series?

7853425 The "Royal Canterlot Family" series. It starts with CartoonNerd12's The Midnight Dance.

:ajsmug: Hmm... My guess is, Skyla may become this shadow pony because of her jealousy :pinkiegasp:. Why else would she have the vision since she isn't an alicorn.
Good job so far! I love it! Cant wait to see what happens!:twilightsmile: :heart:

Oh gee. Um, I don't mean to be one of those fans, but CN12 sure is taking her time finishing The Quest for Family. :fluttershysad:

7862779 I've been having a hard time finishing the last chapter, the plot for it is sounds too boring so I'm trying to liven it up a bit. I hope to finish it but it might take a bit longer.

7865241 Oh. Don't worry I understand. Besides, a lot of the old fairytales can be a bit lacking in the action department. :twistnerd:

Did you hear? Did you hear? Did you, did you hear?

Flurry Heart has her own tag now. :rainbowkiss::yay:

7869967 Thanks for telling me this!:pinkiehappy:

So Flurry either doesn't like or doesn't notice attention while Skyla craves for more? Okay then.

Wait a minute. I think I get it. Flurry Heart doesn't want attention just for the sake of having it. She wants to actually earn it by doing something worthwhile, except she keeps thinking that other ponies deserve it more than she does because she has a hard time seeing herself as special. I can relate to that.:twilightsmile:

Just reread my last comment and pondered it for a while. It looks like Skyla and Flurry Heart have the same problem but don't know it. The problem isn't the attention or lack thereof or what they do with it. The problem is that both the girls don't know their own worth. Skyla keeps comparing herself with other ponies, namely her sister, and feels the need to seek validation by getting attention from others. Flurry, on the other hand, doesn't understand/appreciate the attention she receives because her lack of purpose keep her from seeing her own worth and uniqueness.

Some stories just make me really philosophical, and this one is turning out to be one of them. :twilightsheepish: Great job. :yay:

I know this is my fourth comment already, but this scene was just too funny. I had to draw attention to it.

Discord fretted, “I’m going to be a grandfather! I’m going to be a grandfather! I’m too young to be a grandfather!” He then growled angrily, “That changeling Scumball! He did this to her! He’s going to make my daughter suffer through every downside of pregnancy!”
He wailed in sorrow, “Why, Screwball?! Why?! You’re my little girl! You shouldn’t be pregnant so soon!” He then said excitedly, “I’m going to be a grandpa! Yes! Take that, Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich!”
He began to dance as he sang, “I’m gonna be a grandpa! I’m gonna be a grandpa!

Man, Discord, last time I checked it was supposed to be Screwball that was the pregnant one, not you. :rainbowlaugh: Bad joke time: Discord is pregnant with emotion. :rainbowlaugh: I regret nothing.

I know Thunderellas song!! I loved that movie as a kid!!

Okay, a few things. First, the group dynamics of the two sisters plus Blaze and Nova. From what I've seen so far, it seems like Flurry and Nova are BFFs with each other while Blaze and Skyla are more of the loners of the group. Blaze is the cool, aloof, and grumpy loner whereas Skyla is the high-strung, overly serious, somewhat supercilous loner. Blaze also seems like he's the most emotionally out of touch of the group, but I think Blaze is the way he is because he's the only boy in the group. Skyla, on the other hand, is like that one 12-year-old that's still stuck sitting at the kids' table. Poor filly is trying way to hard to prove that she's mature. :unsuresweetie:

Secondly, for a filly who has trouble understanding her own worth, Flurry Heart is really good at putting value into others. I'm surprised that she hasn't gotten a Crusader's cutie mark yet. :raritywink:

7860286 Hey, wanna start an emoji betting pool? One trollestia emoji and one mustache!Spike emoji says that the main villain is trapped in a magic mirror.

Dang! Blaze is so abrasive. He's also probably still bitter about what happened in the last chapter. No wonder the door wouldn't open for him. Flurry, however, is almost unbearably sweet and understanding. At the very least, she's definitely got thicker skin than Blaze does and is less likely to hold grudges.

Okay, there's a lot of build up for one hey of an explosion. :derpyderp2: However, I'm having trouble seeing how all the pieces fit together. :applejackunsure:

How old are Celestia and Sombra's grand children again? And I mean... All of them!!!
Please, I just need some orientation here!! HAHAHaha

You ship Flurry and Thorax? :pinkiegasp: That's so (long pause) ADORABLE!!! :rainbowkiss::scootangel:

7962099 *Takes a deep breath* Screwball and Apple Jewel are 20, Gemstone and Starling are 19, Dignity, Fire Spark, Whirl Wind are 26, Cotton is 25, Skater and Roller Blade are 19, Snow Pea's 18, Apple Butter's 17, and Little Button is 16, and finally, Blaze is 13.

7968054 So, I'm guessing Nova is 13, Skyla is either 19 or 20, and Flurry is 16-ish, right?

7968054 oks, thanks for that. And how old are Skyla, Flurry Heart and Nova?
And now that we're at it... how old are Celestia's daughters? and son in law's? Not Discord of course... because he must be like 2 or 1000 years old! hahaha

Zesty scoffed again, “Is this what it’s about? You think your own sister is going to become greater than you will ever be? You heirs with siblings think all the same, and I will give you the same advice given to them, Crown Princess Skyla. You are not to let your sister claim the glory you deserve. You are the heir to the Crystal throne. You shan’t let it slip away from you.”

:pinkiegasp:
(takes out a rolled up newspaper) No, no, no,no, no! Bad Zesty! Bad! :flutterrage:

My big boom senses are tingling.

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Nova is 13, Skyla is 18, and Flurry is 14

7968388 Huh, so how old is the marrying age in this AU? I know I said that Flurry and Thorax as a ship is adorable, but now that I know that she's younger than 16, I'm a little weirded out. :applejackunsure:

7968399 All in good time. All in good time, don't worry.

7968399 Everything will work out in the end, you'll see. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I've obviously been living in modernity for way too long. :rainbowlaugh:

Zesty is actually Chrysalis in disguise, isn't she? At the very least, she's kind of shaping up to be the villain. :fluttershyouch:

7973300 I hope that's the case, because I personally can't take Zesty seriously as a villain.

7968431 I just read the next chapter. :ajbemused: Looks like it's time for the big guns. (pulls out a giant spray bottle full of 10% vinegar solution)

Oh for Faust's sake!!!! Skyla, YOUR'E the evil pony!!!! You will become once you judge the wrong way your sister!!!! I can't wait to see her transformation!!!

Keep writing!!! I love these stories!!!

Sooooo...How are they going to get Skyla back from the moon? :applejackunsure: Oooh, are they going track down Zesty and give her an interrogation, an old-fashioned, intense, good-cop-bad-cop interrogation? :pinkiehappy: Make sure they bring spray bottles and newspaper. :rainbowlaugh:

If Princess Skyla was voiced, what would she sound like?

I...called it. I can't believe I actually called it! I was not expecting to get that twist right at all. :rainbowlaugh:

“No! I’m never going back! I can’t go back! What if I’m a threat to everyone?! I should run now, before I hurt other ponies!”

I'm kind of surprised that Snow Pea didn't try to talk her out of this. :applejackunsure: She, of all ponies, should know how Flurry feels.

7990229 In truth I was shocked too that you got it right away, we worked so hard to make sure Zesty would never be suspected because the reason she was chosen was yes, to be added into RCF series but because it would have been easy for Chrysalis to impersonate her! After all Changelings (at least the bad ones) are not known to be subtle at least this way it would be easy for Chrysalis to be herself without giving away her true identity!

7990336 Let's just say she didn't get the chance to.

Oh my gosh. :pinkiegasp: She found him. :pinkiehappy:

Do you mind explaining to me who is Mischief?!?!?! And why he has alters? It's not that I haven't read your other stories or CN's either but I'm kind a LOT lost here!!!!

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