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CountDerpy
She/Her (Trans). Occasional Writer, Storm Chaser, SFM Artist and Former Special Events Staff at Ponyville Ciderfest. PFP by LincolnBrewsterFan.
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Hm. This just seems to be the play just with Rainbow Dash swapped out.
I think you're on the right track here. This crossover should be very interesting.
pretty much, but this is more a challenge piece for me to help get better at creating visual imagery and getting into the darker more Gothic scenery
1076243 thank you i hope it goes well
While I do enjoy the tale of Sweeney Todd that is not exactly why I am here. So forgive me if I seem a bit brash but I do hope you intend to move away from the original story enough to accurately call this your own. I look forward to reading more and wish you luck with anything you have in mind.
Sincerely;
The Fictional Critic.
Yes, I do like creating twists and a few things will defiantly be changed but i will stick somewhat to the original in the way of songs and etc>>1076292
1076305
I completely understand keeping enough the same to incorporate the songs. I just want to see some variation as well. One thing I would love to see is if you threw out the ending and kept rolling. While that would be challenging I would love to see someone work on such an open-ended concept without restraint.
Sincerely;
The Fictional Critic.
1076458 yes, well being so familiar with the play and the movie i always wonder what happened after the ending and i will probably end this one here, but keep the story going in a sequel to this one.
I love Sweeny Todd and I love Rainbow Dash! This will be amazing! SO AWESOME
1076899
yay
WIN. You so totally win!
Aww, I was hoping for a bigger chapter. Oh well still interesting to read, although I do have a few suggestions if I may. Be a bit more descriptive in the scenes as to who is talking or doing what. What you have is good but a little dry. It's like my editor tells me when I make this mistake. Don't tell us what's going on, show us. Paint a picture in our heads, make us see it. Looking forward to more.
1133646 i completely understand. I don't have an editor so its good to get this kind of feedback from my readers. I have to say that this was probably going to be my least favorite chapter. But always remember....It's mare devouring mare, my dears. And who are we to deny it in here.
so bring on every tidbit of information on what i should do to my attention and i will take it to heart ^^
Hmm, longer this time and it feels a bit different. Good work I think.
1149206 thnks!
SPECIAL THANKS TO FICTIONAL CRITIC (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Fictional%20Critic) FOR A LOT OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK!
I love this. I have never seen or heard of this Sweeny Todd(i have heard of him,but rarely)but this makes me want to learn of him...study him...
this is a very touching story,and it sends shivers all down my freaking spine
woship hiiiiiiiim
1172201 Oh the worst is yet to come....lets just say...come up for a shave and..have a little priest
Cant what for more of THIS bitch. You, sir/ma'am, are a rising arTIST!Love the adaptation!
Moar shall come from me
......and btw....stallion
if u get what i mean>>1172314
1172335 gotcha bro
1172222 just read of the damned play/movie.Holy shit,nearly shat my pants in sight of the pure gore and despair in the whole movie.
As you have once said,im running away now
1173303 hehe ifkr
1174194 Ah yes,I would enjoy a little priest,but i believe i would enjoy the friar more>:U
1174194 also,I myself thought Mrs.Lovett would have an ugly voice,but i's actualy quite pretty :o
1178208 Well when you have Johnny Depp playing Sweeney and Helena Bonham Carter playing Mrs. Lovett you know tht voices are going to be good
Great job. Wish it was a little longer, but still enjoyed it.
1190388 I'm currently working on the next chapters. This is actually the easiest of my stories to write, because i know what direction I'm going with it and how it's going to end, and I'm hopping every pony will love how I end it...in the words of the master himself.............."What A Twist!" LMFO (laughing my flank off.... for those who don't know)
>>CountDerpy Well have fun! Can't wait to see what you add to the story
1190436 Thanks!
Question. Why is Rarity the Beadle? Of all the characters in MLP FIM, why did you choose her to be the beadle? That doesn't make any sense too me. I think one of the Cloudsdale jocks would have made a good Beadle.
1462970 purely a luck of the draw thing...might consider changing it later...but also because for the first while she idolized Blue Blood....so i kinda kept that going
1178584 Looking back at this after 28 weeks, still cant believe how true this is
2288240 yeah...I'm hoping to bet u the next stuff by Saturday...also u never hot to me if u wanted to know the ending of saw so u could help on saw II!
2294249 I said yeah man
2297084ok...give me ur email via message and I will tell u the tale!
Been waiting for this chapter! Even though short, I did enjoy it. Then again, anything Sweeney Todd related I love
I'm really looking forward to the first gruesome scene 
2517802 same here....im really looking forward to the ending and the best part of the whole thing....."A Little Priest"
You are now the best person ever
2528406 u flatter me