• Member Since 18th Jan, 2012
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Dusk Jumper


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Derpy allows a mysterious power to entice her into wishing for a world where Twilight Sparkle never came to Ponyville. Trapped in a dystopian Equestria, she discovers how far each pony has fallen without the Magic of Friendship, and must embark on a lonely quest to set things aright.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )

Dis confoozed me. Why did Derpy hate Twilight in the first place?
Maybe I just missed an entire paragraph or something.

Oh wait... derp, ignore my last comment. This story could be awesome! Tracking.

Oh wait... derp, ignore my last comment. This story could be awesome! Tracking.

Nice concept, I'll be back to read after I finish working.

Hey guys, sorry for the long wait. Real life happened and I also wasn't quite sure where I wanted to go with this chapter. Today's episode really put it in focus.

Next chapter should be much more prompt. Thanks for reading!

Welp... this was disturbing.

But what can I say - I never get tired of fics with this premise, and this one's got the cleanest writing style I've seen so far.

Keep it up.

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