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Fluttershy has been trained to kill, and kill only, since childhood, she has experimented with killing. She serves Nightmare without hesitation to take out rebel contributors




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I thought I would like this, but after reading the first few paragraphs, she was just TOO evil for me.

40975 Don't worry, chapters after 1 are not that evil :flutterrage:

This is supposed to be a crossover of MLP and what?

Did you get that pic from ue40000s' DA page? Cause i know he.would want the publicity

MY ART. YOU USED IT AND DID NOT ASK ME. PREPARE TO DIE

Fluttershy is so evil its fully really, murder spree because she killed a butterfly, and unlike actual people/ponies she felt bad about it lol.

41334

Also from the name of the chapter Twilight is the Dean of the University, what you wouldnt get from the story to be honest, it could have been just a teacher or anything lol.

41336 well, i thought about that, but come on, a dean getting attacked > a teacher getting attacked

Oh, god. Why, Fluttershy, WHY??? :fluttercry:

I don't know why, but I'm actually enjoying this. Even if Fluttershy is so OOC and kills everything in her path, it seems interesting. So, tracking it is! :pinkiehappy:

Wow fluttershy is probably the worst assassin I have ever seen

MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

41932 Haha, we already sorted that out :trollestia:

GIVE US MMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Excellent premise, but lacks soul.

42068
Dat pic

Nice chapter but it has a common mistake for them all: you forget the u in you, but nice cliffhanger

FLUTTERSHY IS AWESOME:moustache:

Man, you can really crank out these chapters! :applejackunsure:

42526

You sir/ma'am, are the one that lacks a soul. :rainbowkiss:

"She's already dead!" Blueblood yelled, his machine gun overheated and the barrel melted.

When gun barrels overheat, they don't melt, the barrel gets so hot, that the metal gets soft, and it cracks/breaks open. :pinkiehappy:

43222 Actually, when an MG42, used by the german army in WWII, overheated, the barrel actually melted.

Double Tap...Important skill

god why does nobody let nightmare have a happy ending or atleast let have some sort of benevolance

43824 Well, in this story, she killed almost everypony she saw.

Spelling errors abound! Good job otherwise.:unsuresweetie:

Hmm. that is kind of weird that you had Rarity and Fluttershy switch elements in this storyline. :fluttershyouch:

Still it was an interesting story from start to finish as I do wonder what will happen next to Fluttershy now that Celestia is back.

Please do keep up the good work upon such an interesting story.

:trollestia: Time for some revenge

43987 You have no idea what her revenge is, it's the worst possible, I am serious.

MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

^I third it

Oh man fluttershy is the killer for Nightmare Moon.javascript:smilie(':yay:');javascript:smilie(':trixieshiftleft:');javascript:smilie(':flutterrage:');javascript:smilie(':pinkiecrazy:');

i kinda like fluttershy as a badflank but still THIS IS AWESOME

44852 You're gonna love the surprise at the end

44763

Sorry, I'm a gun nut and I love all aspects of them. :rainbowkiss:

you thought about getting a editor on the story ,and the next one?

i dont mind the errors and i can get the meaning right away,mostly.

but its still annoying to see characters sentences end with " , " or part of the words missing. (that one is kind of obvious isnt it? just going through your chapters one more time might fix that? lol )

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