Aww, I was hoping for a bigger chapter. Oh well still interesting to read, although I do have a few suggestions if I may. Be a bit more descriptive in the scenes as to who is talking or doing what. What you have is good but a little dry. It's like my editor tells me when I make this mistake. Don't tell us what's going on, show us. Paint a picture in our heads, make us see it. Looking forward to more.

1133646 i completely understand. I don't have an editor so its good to get this kind of feedback from my readers. I have to say that this was probably going to be my least favorite chapter. But always remember....It's mare devouring mare, my dears. And who are we to deny it in here. so bring on every tidbit of information on what i should do to my attention and i will take it to heart ^^

Hmm, longer this time and it feels a bit different. Good work I think.

1149206 thnks!

SPECIAL THANKS TO FICTIONAL CRITIC (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Fictional%20Critic) FOR A LOT OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK!

1172201 Oh the worst is yet to come....lets just say...come up for a shave and..have a little priest

Cant what for more of THIS bitch. You, sir/ma'am, are a rising arTIST!Love the adaptation!

KEEP IT COMING!

Moar shall come from me ......and btw....stallion
if u get what i mean>>1172314

1172335 gotcha bro

1172222 just read of the damned play/movie.Holy shit,nearly shat my pants in sight of the pure gore and despair in the whole movie.

As you have once said,im running away now

1173303 hehe ifkr

1174194 Ah yes,I would enjoy a little priest,but i believe i would enjoy the friar more>:U

1174194 also,I myself thought Mrs.Lovett would have an ugly voice,but i's actualy quite pretty :o

1178208 Well when you have Johnny Depp playing Sweeney and Helena Bonham Carter playing Mrs. Lovett you know tht voices are going to be good

Great job. Wish it was a little longer, but still enjoyed it.

1190388 I'm currently working on the next chapters. This is actually the easiest of my stories to write, because i know what direction I'm going with it and how it's going to end, and I'm hopping every pony will love how I end it...in the words of the master himself.............."What A Twist!" LMFO (laughing my flank off.... for those who don't know)

>>CountDerpy Well have fun! Can't wait to see what you add to the story

1190436 Thanks!

1462970 purely a luck of the draw thing...might consider changing it later...but also because for the first while she idolized Blue Blood....so i kinda kept that going

1178584 Looking back at this after 28 weeks, still cant believe how true this is

2288240 yeah...I'm hoping to bet u the next stuff by Saturday...also u never hot to me if u wanted to know the ending of saw so u could help on saw II!

2294249 I said yeah man

2297084ok...give me ur email via message and I will tell u the tale!