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KillerSteel


"OH GOD, THEY'RE LAPDANCING ME!" -Steel, 2015 - Aspiring author, artist with absolutely no skill yet a lot of wants, and just your typical, all-around lover of MLP fanfiction. That's me.

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[On Hiatus so I can finish some of my other projects. Considering this is a very big story for me that's going to see a lot of sequels, it's a project I'm definitely coming back to.]

Sun, lots of sun. Celestia's blessing for all the little colts and fillies in Equestria, but not for one pegasus who finds the sun and nice weather has outstayed its welcome just a little too long. A nap taken in order to pass the boredom is interrupted by a strange visitor in black.

What once started as a day gone bad turns into a journey through Equestria's history, and a tale that many would consider fable turned reality; but perhaps it's been real all along?

[Credit to Rhanite of DeviantART for the badass cover art! Thanks man!


A/N: Welcome, one and all, to the first entry in my story arc! What's the name of this story arc?

Well, I'm sure I'll think of one. So far, I'm happy to say the title is this:

"Mira"

...The Mira Arc. Not bad.

Ahem, anyway, yes, this IS the first entry in my overarcing story, and it will be my first shot at building a living, breathing world with dynamic action and reaction.

Praise, ravage, criticise and stupify, I'm expecting and wanting it all. Enjoy!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 38 )

All comments saved for further review and dumped, as they contained spoilers.

Don't worry, Jake, I took all your words to heart. Hope you readers enjoy!

Hm.

I like where this is going. In fact, I'm almost eager to see a fifth chapter.

Great job so far.

Gleeeeee, people're reading!

Luz

Okay man, I don't have any time to read your story, but I will. I have a lot of requests to do and a huge load of homework to do too. But still, all these things ain't stopping me to read this fabulous story.

Hm... Just barely under 10k words so far...

I'll read this later.

:pinkiehappy:
Awesome but she's isn't a Vampony is she:rainbowhuh:
Coz that's been done before like ALOT!!! :pinkiehappy:

Other than that

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Rainbow's been a vampony a lot, huh? Only cases I've seen were Vinyl and Twilight.

Well, hopefully you won't mind whatever cliche I conform to in the future. I try to be original, but I don't do a lot of studying with stories on this site.


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You think it's bad now? Ohoho, just wait. I've got plans...BIG PLANS.

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No prob Steel. I've been meaning to send you a PM recently ....

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*Metal Gear Solid discovered sound*

QUICK, HAVE TO BREAK HIS NECK!

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YES I CAN! I'M STEEL SNAKE.

*Breaks 20 necks.*

SHIT.

1589308 *A horde of Sierras swarm Steel, burying him with their squid-ness*

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IT TASTES LIKE THE SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEA!!!!

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*Steel zips his lips as he moves through the squidy ick, breathing deliberately through his nose.*

1589267 you found who :rainbowhuh:

Love it can't remember the last time this updated but Plz make more :fluttercry:

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It's been quite a while, I'll admit. I do want to finish this story, it's just taking a lot of time due to school and everything.

General re-write happening. Time to improve this old work!

Rewriting, huh? Well, I'm still interested. A shame that your previous draft ended on a cliffhanger, I hope we catch up to it again.

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Oh no worries, it'll be continuing once I'm done.

I'm just converting the story over to Past Tense, and improving the language I used. This story was flawed because I started it at an earlier writing age. It'll be good once it's done!

Hopefully.

Whoa, we going to get the whole rewritten story (up to the current chapter) tonight? And if so, when can we expect a genuinely new chapter?

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Well let's see, I'm currently running low on steam for converting the story right now. I'm definitely getting it all done tonight, then I'm gonna get the rest of Chapter 5 done as well.

Apologies if I'm flooding your Favorites, but I really wanna get this done while I've got time. Expect Chapter 5 soon, and hopefully, Chapter 6 after that.

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No apologies necessary. Chapter 5's new, correct?

Well. That was depressing. Well written, but depressing. Can't wait for Chapter 6.

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Well, deaths always are depressing. Chapter 6 is on the way, though I doubt I'll be able to finish it tonight.

Hope you enjoyed it!

Deaths aren't depressing if it was Hitler dying a really funny death other wise yeah there depressing
Nicely written ok ok I'm gonna take a really BIG guess right now!
RD is going to be resurrected by Twilight but she becomes a Vampony?

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I'm not sure if I should talk about such a plot point... maybe I should leave you to think about it.

*Steel raises an eyebrow as he looks off to the side.*

:trixieshiftright: "Trixie says keep it a secret."

Steel agrees.

*They both shift their eyes off to the other side.*

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Granted point.

:trixieshiftleft: "We do have to use interesting cover art though, otherwise readers will just pass us up."

Yep.

:trixieshiftright: "... Trixie still thinks the cover should have been of Trixie."

And Steel thinks that would have been insane since Trixie isn't in the story. Yet.

:trixieshiftleft: "What do you mean 'yet'? Trixie should be in it right now!"

... You're really gonna argue with an author about his chosen plotline?

:trixieshiftright: "Yes."

Of course you are...

Have any plans to update the story soon?

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Plans? Yes. Motivation? Working on it. I've just got a lot of shit weighing me down at the moment, but given this is my flagship series (starting with this story anyway), I don't plan on ending it.

Update when possible, but sadly with college and everything, it's hard to get going without feeling I should be using my time on something else.

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