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My primary function is failure.


Twilight Sparkle, Apprentice to the Crown, has everything under control. With a sphere of knowledge ever-expanding and a range of powers ever-widening, her world seems smaller and smaller with every passing day. That is, until the day a terrifying vision of the future leaves her convinced that someday very soon, she will take the life of a dearest friend.

Rainbow Dash, the newest recruit of the Wonderbolts, lives in a world without limits. Made of blistering speed and unfettered nerve, she blows past every obstacle that dares to stand in her way. However, when the flight team's training regimen pushes her too far, Rainbow does something she never wanted to find herself capable of.

The Elements of Magic and Loyalty reunite in Ponyville. One must know the answers while the other just wants to run away, but both are on a collision course with a renegade mage desperate to save her imperiled sister, caring little for the consequences of her actions. As the Harmony Storm descends on unsuspecting Ponyville, the fabric that binds Equestria together comes undone, forcing the Elements of Harmony into a race against time if they hope to save themselves, their loved ones, and even the town they hold so dear.

Can Twilight discover the truth behind the Storm before her tragic destiny comes to pass? Will Rainbow surrender to reckless anger if it means the salvation of the innocent? Eyes in the shadows look on all the while, hoping to see the outcome of events set in motion 1500 years ago . . .

From the author of Lost Legacies comes a feature-length prequel made for newcomers and veterans alike.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Cool, but... LL seems abandoned for, like... ever? Can we finish, or at least have progress before the prequel hits?

I'm sorry, that probably sounds mean. That is not my intent. Merely... politely suggesting priorities?:twilightsheepish:

Like, I want to read this... but I more want to know what happens next in LL. I have a fear of getting involved in a story that gets abandoned.

I understand your concerns, but trust me, this is a necessary part of the main story. The original plan called for it to be published after Ep.13. Decided to move it up to kick off the main story's renewal. In other words, don't worry about LL continuing; LLZ is how it continues, but LLZ could also be read first. :rainbowdetermined2:


Hokay, boss! Reading now!

So... we can or can not expect LL to update sometime soon?

This story is about the length of three episodes of LL. Ep. 8 will follow immediately after.

You have no idea how happy I am to see you back Akiba! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Wade #7 · Nov 4th, 2013 · · · Z ·

Really enjoying it, so far. The writing is great, and the mystery is mighty intriguing. More than anything, I wonder what the multicolored storm in the flashback was.

A little nitpick: Dash probably wouldn't have felt the way she did, with the intensity she did, if she knew it was just a training exercise.

Noticed some double punctuation typos on this line:

revealing itself as an armed pegasus stallion turned living projectile.. Rainbow had prepared herself for this and thought she knew what to expect,, but the

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

As George Takei would say "Oh, MYYYYYYYY!!!!!" It would appear that whatever organization that eventually declares a grey Pegasus pony :derpyderp1: an equine of interest is out and about.

Wade #9 · Nov 6th, 2013 · · · I ·

Is a changeling, and isn't a changeling...

Wonder if it really didn't know about changelings, or if it was just playing the part.

Wow! This is amazing! love your portrayal of the Elements,onward to more reading!:rainbowkiss:

Wade #11 · Nov 15th, 2013 · · · II ·

Wonder how the Elements went from raw Heart's Prism to the semi-intelligent machines we see in LL.

Also: yesss more Rarity!

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