Genius. Prodigy. Magus. Powerhouse. Unbalanced. Crazy. All words used to describe Twilight Sparkle at some point through her life. This is the story of her life, and of those close to her.
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Oh, you sweet summer child.
Celestia has a mallorn in her garden. Implying alicorns are basically Vala. This pleases me greatly.
Oh. Oh no. My poor Twily...
You and me both, Shiny. I am angry beyond words right now.
Yikes. Serious yikes.
Time for blood and time for fear,
time for traitor's flesh to sear.
Mallorn tree huh, so were there elves living near Celestia's tribe? That is sort of cool.
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Well now.
Tartarus isn't enough for them.
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I would guess some more perverted things
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"Oh you sweet, innocent creature. The teachers raped them."
An interesting chapter, again I like the descriptions of how Twilight sees all the magic. Poor Twilight is going to need a lot of therapy. It is great to see Celestia doing things. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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It's almost definitely pedophilia.
uh oh
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This universe is very different from cannon so you stop that or I'll smack ya with a fish.
Burn the Flesh;
Sear the Soul;
Leave nothing of them whole.
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It seems like the Alicorns are the equine analogue to Elves. In this AU, at least.
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With these acts of depravity, she's sealed her doom
Release the Revenant, for there's one I muƨт cσиƨʋмɛ
Yeah, this most definitely requires a Dark tag now, I would think. What has previously been heavily implied is now all but confirmed; there's... yeah that's a lot.
hey uh twily i think your about to see if that leviathan can withstand your brothers assult when he is P-I-SSED
REALLY good work on this chapter. Yeah, I loved Twi's scene with her parents as she was getting ready to leave for the palace grounds (truly tender stuff) as well as Twilight and Celestia's chat about the tree and its origins. And, yeah, at least Miss Rose (and the bulk of her accomplices) are being put away for a LONG time. Though, whoa. I have to say, I can kind of understand Shiny's Big Brother Instinct reaction to the news about what happened. I wouldn't wish THAT level of wrath on anyone SHORT OF Chrysalis, but I can still understand the anger.
All in all, splendid job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places.
I went into this blind and honestly? Despite a few errors here and there It was a pleasant read. In as far as pleasant goes with the subject matter at hand anyway. I would almost question why there is no dark tag but perhaps it is less about what happened in the past and more about what will be done to help the foals out? Either way I found myself enjoying this in the first couple hours of my waking up.
On a sidenote. Shining's gonna bust some jaws. And probably be reprimanded or something for it. Can't say I blame him for wanting to though.
Keep up the good work ^^
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I suspect Tartarus is where those “disappeared” wind up, and that in this AU it is a much darker place.
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That is exactly why I chose not to place one, in addition this story will be much longer and won't be dark.
Welp they're no longer people...they're just test subject for experiments.
Illegal experiments funded in secret by the government...that's literally the only way they will contribute to society now.
So what's first...do we apply mutagenic formulas that turn them into plants...do we use them to test bioweapons that turn water in their bodies into crystals...do we experiment with literal control of their souls...so many options now that they're dead to rights.
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"He passed over Dor-nu-Fauglith like a wind amid the dust, and all that beheld his onset fled in amaze, thinking that Oromë himself was come; for a great madness of rage was upon him, so that his eyes shone like the eyes of the Valar."
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Hellfire, dark fire!
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Glad you're interested.
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Thanks! Was interesting doing his reaction, but I'll admit it wasn't terribly difficult to imagine what he would do, given the circumstances.
The city must be purged.
Was the culling of ponyholm a refrence to warcraft 3 culling of stratholm or did it come from something else?
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Figured as much. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.
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more like Allicorns are the Equestrian equivalent to elves...makes you wonder what happened...
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Yeah, a Warcraft reference.
On the one hand, Celestia having a secret police and standard operating procedure for disappearing unponies is cause for concern.
On the other hand, these wastes of carbon deserve nothing less.
The ripples here will be felt for quite some time to come, and most of the foals won't have a friendly Valar to help them through it. Still, the cancer has been excised with all due vigilance. Time to begin healing.
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Hey, that's a great idea! Feed them to a balrog!
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Morgoth?
Going to go out on a limb and guess Celestia likely didn’t count on BBBFF rage when designing those cells.
Your conversation language is so fuxking good! I could almost hear it with the nine remark. Fuck.
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Yeah Twilight had a nightmare with the distinct memories of a body draped over her back and someone licking her horn. I really hope the punishment gets at least a mention from Celestia to Shining or something.
And I am super glad the story's focus is going to be so wide past the inciting incident. I liked stories like Hard Reset for the time loop in a combat situation I got to read before I ever knew about Live Die Repeat but I infinitely loved it more for exploring the recovery of that trauma.
Also the slight hints dropped at Twilight being a decendant of Luna almost makes me want the teacher to survive long enough to meet Nightmare. Guess I'll go to o sleep dreaming of Celestia banishing the teacher to the moon but not before telling Nightmare what she did.
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Glad you like it so much! I hope those will be pleasant dreams.
I feel sorry for Deep Thought, because if Shining doesn't rein in whatever his impulse is telling him to do in time, the ensuing investigation will most certainly lead back to him. And intelligence services tend to take any sort of leaks very seriously.
I'm not a fan of sub plots but this sub plot is THICCC and I look forward to more
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Why would you say this in response to that?
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because the first part of their comment.
Yes yes yes yes new chapter!
(Reads chapter)
I wasn't ready for that. Poor twily :'(
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Yeah. Information leaks = bad.
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I feel bad for doing it, but it serves the story.
Ah, Jesus fucking christ, I think the best response to these monsters would be a literal nuclear option, so to say using them to test the exact amount of radiation required to make someone severely ill and in pain without being immediately lethal.
So we've got the busting of an high level secret pedophilia ring, and a newfound revaltion that Celestia has the power of making ponies disappear....
I'm more concern that the fact Celestia has the legal power to issue Shadow Warrants, to make ponies disappear.
But then again, they were used against pedophiles, so i'm ok with that.
Now, who wants to waterboard these pedos?
There has to be more soon. I have to find out what happens next and see things start turning around for the best.
Also, love the fact that Celestia is finally using some of her power for good. She is far to lenient/underpowered in the show itself. "Power of the Sun", able to literally melt stone she walks across when upset or angered, but just does almost nothing when the city/town/universe needs her because its "Someone else's prophecy this time".
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You're in luck, it's just being edited at the moment! Work messed with both of us on this end.
I'm glad you like Celestia doing things. That was always my biggest gripe with the show and movie. She felt less like a character that was defined and was instead a plot device who grew and shrunk in power based on the show needs.
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Jumping around in power? You mean sitting on a throne for at the least of 1k years (Going by Nightmare Moon prophecy only) can be bad for your power level even if your power level is the sun itself!? /S to the extreme.
Like seriously, I was reading about the different strengths and weaknesses of different characters across different genres/stories/universes and Celestia is the least balanced out of everyone. Able to beat Nightmare Moon without the aid of the elements of harmony, yet couldn't create a shield to protect themselves from a stone throw by Tempest, realize the royal wedding had multiple intruders, etc etc etc the list grows. Its like she literally sat on the throne since Luna was banished and did nothing but ate cake, but because shes an alicorn/demigod she didn't put on any weight but simply got weaker instead. There, is, no, logic. /rant over
Pedophile rings primarily prey on children in difficult family situations. Missing parent, poor, etc.
Here they are operating in an affluent area and the two families shown are otherwise quite stable.
Historically they don't leave victims. Instead "disposing" of the victims when they are no longer interesting.
Yet, given how entrenched the group was at all levels in the education bureaucracy, this uncharacteristic behavior makes sense. They were clearly operating for a long time, getting cocky and arrogant.
Although, after operating for so long, it is astonishing that no one in any of Equestria's law enforcement agencies noticed the patterns before five were practically dropped on Celestia's door step. If I were her, I would be very suspicious of everyone in the government at this point.
Needless to say, the story has me captivated, keep it up!
Literally me every day...
Damn, I get really uncomfortable when stories have rape in them, I just hate it so much. I even guessed that this was what the plan was when the licking thing happened in the last chapter.
Bahaha! Changelings, anyone?
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Hey hey hey, we use the term "enhanced interrogation" here.