Genius. Prodigy. Magus. Powerhouse. Unbalanced. Crazy. All words used to describe Twilight Sparkle at some point through her life. This is the story of her life, and of those close to her.
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Well I'm honestly astonished that that didn't permanently blind poor Twilight, such things are not for mortal eyes.
Well done by Cadence, she almost erred, trying to kill a thing of Nightmare with negative emotion, but she figured it out before it was too late. Very well done indeed.
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Glad you think so. That's the power of love!
Might not be the most insightful comment but I do hope Twilight is ok, both physically and mentally after such an experience.
Also I think this story is getting better and better as more chapters are released. Good work on that :D
Edit: added a better smiley face.
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Consider Twilight's destiny, is it really a surprise she endured what would blind any normal unicorn? Looking at an Alicorn's essence was painful for her, bou some day it's something she'll see in the mirror.
hmmmmmm.... well good job Cadence I don't got much else to say though I can say that I feel like it shouldn't have been cut up into two parts.
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Well, I cut it into two parts because I wanted to get a chapter out quickly, and I had the first part done over the night. I didn't want to make you guys wait any more, not after the already huge delays.
Very well done indeed. Can't wait for more.
I'm not crying! You're crying!
I've been dreaming of a story with this level of care put into Celestia's and Cadance's characterizations and backstories... thank you, a beautiful and mesmerizing read so far
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Well, she could have, if she was more powerful. But Love was much more efficient.
This is genuinely really fucking good :)
That was intense. Definitely waiting for the next chapter.
That...was...Awesome!
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Maybe, but I still enjoyed reading it!
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It's okay to cry, people cry.
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I'm glad you think it's so good. I really do love Cadance and Celestia, I couldn't do anything less than try my best with them.
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I try!
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Working on it!
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Well, Cadance is always useable. :)
Glad you like it.
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Thanks!
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You are quite welcome
Great job on the characterizations, exchange (between Cadance and Celestia), action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I especially liked Twilight's reflection on that picture before the attack on Celestia as well as Cadance successfully driving off said attack after a mistake (albeit one she corrected quickly enough). In the former, the reflection on Celestia's issues with the picture while being too nice to make too much effort in correcting her subjects. In the latter case, the fact that Twilight saw that essence and, while pained, WASN'T permanently blinded, was some good foreshadowing to her eventually becoming an alicorn herself.
I'll very certainly be looking forward to more of this.
Looking forward to more glad this is still on going
Wait, Twilight was raped? I don’t recall that being in the story? What chapter did that happen in? Who did it?
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It was mentioned happening a year BEFORE the events of this story. She was raped by one of her teachers (Miss Rose) and that was the reason she was being home-schooled at the start of the story (and the reason this Twilight has even worse issues than her canon counterpart). Celestia found out and punished Miss Rose and quite a few of her accomplices quite severely.
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Harmony is the key insight!
Okay I'm not crazy, the rating did rise.
Phew. That was intense. I've said this before, but I absolutely ADORE the amount of care and detail you put into the characters and descriptions. If the last part made me think of the War Doctor, this part reminds me of that scene from The Two Towers where Gandalf purges Saruman's influence from King Théoden. "Breathe the free air again, my friend."
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Yeah... too nice. Thanks for the review!
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So am I.
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I will draw you out, Nightmare. Like poison is drawn from a wound!
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In chapter 1, Celestia suspects something is odd. She starts poking into it in chapter 2, gets the Intelligence Service involved in chapter 3, and in chapter 4 IS trainee Deep Thought leaks the results to Shining Armor.
Damn, caught up again. Lol
Went back and reread some chapters to remind myself that this story is amazing before I read the few chapters that I held off on.
Yup, still an amazing story. Hope to see more soon. Thanks.
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I'm putting out another in 20 minutes. Wait a bit, and you'll get another. :)
I can't tell if this is supposed to refer to the first sunrise, or if it is a typo.
been waiting so long for these updates I even went to read on Wattpad for the remaining 10 days of last month just do waste some time nice to know I did not wait in vane (I would have waited for years for this to update cause I give my patience and that's not a joke) great chapter worth the read a bit of drama beautifully added at the rightest time and some warmth at the end its perfect (I legit have no clucking clue what I just typed. I could have just typed " basically great chapter I'm not disappointed" Lol I'm dumb basically ) 👍
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Your Lord of the Rings fanboy is showing again