Genius. Prodigy. Magus. Powerhouse. Unbalanced. Crazy. All words used to describe Twilight Sparkle at some point through her life. This is the story of her life, and of those close to her.
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Dang more and more it seems that Princess Cadance really messed up. She is getting a real lesson on one of the fundamental points of government. Just because it can do something, doesn't mean it should. she should have done nothing but get information and building a power base. Now she is stuck supporting what looks like a tyrant.
As for Shinning, he is doing the whole hurry up and wait. Too bad now he and what looks like Rarity are going to see what the fires of war really look like.
Looks like Afghanistan now.
REALLY good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, I love Shining's reflections on the boredom thus far (don't knock it, Shiny. Soon enough, you're going to be WISHING for the "'boring'" again) as well as the reflections on the cats he and the other ponies are going to be fighting soon enough AND his interactions with some of the other troops (particularly that Sergeant and Gale Force). Yeah, this IS going to get really ugly pretty darn soon.
At any rate, VERY certainly looking forward to more of this, once again.
Well.
Aha, a look at the front,
I don't know if it is going to help or really really hurt Cadance to get this viewpoint. Probably hurt, but maybe it'll help her stand up for herself more.
Shiny, you're going to be willing to trade every single one of those bits and your Mom's cakes for that boredom you're so tired of, very soon.
Poor Rarity, she got shafted big time.
Oof, this is gonna get real ugly real fast. Shiny's gonna be begging for boredom in short order.
Clearly Basalt is from Rockville if he's a Pie, guessing a Cousin of Pinkie's too. One wonders if one of the half trained academy unicorns Shining will be forced to baby sit will be Rarity, for her just being deployed will be a harrowing process, even if she never has to fight. People always like to say war is hell, but forget that includes the dull day to day stuff, physical discomfort, and just missing home too. Never been a solider but talk to them and the slog is something they remember as being almost as bad as combat.
I wonder if Abyassia exists in this universe, and if it does is it near the other feline countries? Or part of one? What kind of relationship should the 4 legged felines have with the two leggers, raceisum maybe? Being able to stand and move on two legs is more of an evolutinary advantage then you'd think.
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agreed.
Highly doubt it will happen but I kinda want Twilight to try dream magic again, just so she can talk with her brother. Assuming this goes as bad as it's been foreshadowed I'm sure Shining Armour would love the visit in the next few weeks or months.
Doesn't matter what universe or species, soldiers are soldiers.
Methinks that Cadence oughtn't be playing silly games with a fake name, she should know better than to try to build a relationship on misdirection. In any case, I foresee fairly good odds that Shining and Rarity find love on the battlefield.
I wonder what Sergeant Pie thinks of those odds...
This! is taking an interesting turn. Not sure if Shining has the gut to take that offer, but it sure as hell locks tempting :D
Let's see some carnage, property damage and burned EVERYTHING!
Rarity is going to stitch everything into place! As often as it takes!
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A very good point! I hope her decision hasn't been too unbelievable given the circumstances and her inexperience. The next chapter is out of the pan, my friend.
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Glad you liked it so much. Working on the next one!
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I don't doubt he would. Rarity really did get the short end of that stick.
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You know its a bad day in hell when you wish to sit around and do nothing.
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Two-legged cats do exist, and I will get the chance to get into them later on. Will be fun. Agree on the boredom and slog wearing on soldiers.
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Glad you like it. He'd probably tell you [redacted].
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Wouldn't you take it? If you're talking about banging a qt thestral girl.
Rarity the Waricorn.
At least that's what I'm hoping for.
Pony Vietnam. Lovely.
I can already tell Rarity is going to be a hell of a War Unicorn, if only out of pure spite and determination to get that Beauty Store.
I am very impressed with the intricate world building, and in the differing fates of characters we know so well.
I was interested in the way you portrayed the alicorn's 'true selves' and to contemplate what this might mean for Twilight in the far future.
I'm having a grand time. I was very happy to see so many updates, this story is fantastic.
This chapter soldifies your story’s place in my favourites. It’s elegant and intricate with the world building, and not to “in your face” with the world building, and quite seemless in transistions and descriptions
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Glad you think so. She is certainly going to become something.
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It certainly has a few implications, doesn't it? I'm glad you enjoy the worldbuilding, I think about it alot.
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You guys make me blush, really - I love getting feedback like this.
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Thanks! I spend alot of time thinking about the world and, recently, working on the map. Really, though, I can't believe people like the story that much. It's weird for me.
Shining, you poor, poor fool.
Just started reading, and holy shit is this well written. The only thing that only slightly puts me off the is the tense shifting, but other than that, genuinely good!