Genius. Prodigy. Magus. Powerhouse. Unbalanced. Crazy. All words used to describe Twilight Sparkle at some point through her life. This is the story of her life, and of those close to her.
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There were prisoners? Surprising…
Counting mass graves Celestia?
The purpose of law is threefold, to discourage the wicked, bring justice for the innocent, and safeguard the nation. An evil man may fear the headman's axe if not his own conscience, a cheated widow may find restitution before a judge, and the rabid may be removed from the good folk they would terrorize.
Therefore those who plotted evil things ought to be punished in equal measure to their deeds, those who knew better should be made to repay the damage they caused or allowed to happen, and those who were simply deceived should be granted mercy. Though, they should still be watched, for a time, as liars have ever been able to weep in contrition when necessary.
Well you're more discrete than Zeus at least...
Well that was a whole bit of gloominess, sleep deprivation's a heck of a drug. So, does Celestia know there's a war on? Probably want to bring that to her attention sooner rather than later...
I absolutely love these updates. Don't worry about the dialogue, after the last chapter it fits wonderfully. A bit of peace before things start going foul again. Thank you.
Geez, finally some sweet Twilestia here!
To be honest i much prefer dialogue it is much more valuable than what some call 'action'.
Thank you.
I like current and past Celestia, it gives her dephth, and makes her a bit uncomprehensible, but what would one expect from a millenium old near deity?
Can't wait to see Luna restored.
Also, twilight put it in the best way, weird but your choice. And from me understandable to have a relationship with the one person able to be there for you.
Thank you! I would have been a bit upset if you had time skipped, or gone to the war instead of immediately followed up on this. Now to finish reading this chapter.
ALL the therapy hugs.
Did not see the sibling incest coming but guess it kinda makes sense in a weird way. Celestia is finally opening up to twilight and got to admit the Momlestia moments are nice
Very little can say that other reviewers haven't already said better, but the point still applies that the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all quite well done. Greatly enjoyed the heart-warming moments with Twilight and Celestia as well as Celestia admitting that while the majority of her subjects do a respectable job keeping their darker impulses under control the majority of the time, everybody has their dark sides and ALSO admitting to some of the nastier responsibilities that come with the job and power. And, yeah, she did have a point about how Luna was the only individual who was truly always there for her growing up, so while I'm still not much for incest, I can at least respect your right to your own beliefs and understand how the relationship could reach that level.
Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.
I'll admit I was hoping to see a bit more of Celestia and Cadance fighting against the coup, but this was a good talk. I didn't mind all the dialog. It was well written.
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Geez, I hope not. Incest is one thing. Grooming and pedophilia quite another. As the story itself has recognized.
Also, death to the imperialist dogs, etc., etc., obligatory sloganeering is obligatory.
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I think it's impossible to be less discrete than Zeus, pal.
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Glad you liked it, I'm always nervous about this stuff. Should probably get over it by now, though, which how much you guys seem to enjoy the story.
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I think he's referring to Twilestia in the group's sense, where the two are just close (Momlestia, etc). In either case, Twilight is much too young to be pursuing anyone romantically. I'm glad both of you liked the chapter!
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Glad you liked the chapter, then.
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Yeah, Celestia still has a few depths left, but learning more about the alicorns is part of the story. Glad you liked the chapter!
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Well... I admit I almost had this chapter open with a different scene, but decided against it. That one is now in the next.
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Big hug energy.
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Momlestia is powerful energy. On the other hand, I'm always surprised when people miss hints I leave around - I thought I made it too obvious.
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Glad you like the story still! Can't wait for your next comment. As for the relationship, it is meant to be a weird thing that is mostly because of their unique circumstances.
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There won't be any more fighting for the Coup. As Celestia said, the fighting died down the moment she emerged. There will be more aftermath of it, though.
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Celestia is a bit of a beast, yeah. Glad you took the effort to do the math, even if it might be wrong. Pegasi are pretty resistant to high g-force, but alicorns take it to the next level.
I noticed a couple of minor typos in this chapter:
In any case, I love this story and I so badly want to give a hug to Twilight and to make sure that the ponies who did such things are put out of their misery. I may not be a perfect human being, but if I EVER hurt a child like this I wouldn't be able to live with myself. The very fact that I am even able to conceive of the notion that I could possibly lose control of myself and give in to the dark side as it were scares the bejeebers out of me.