Genius. Prodigy. Magus. Powerhouse. Unbalanced. Crazy. All words used to describe Twilight Sparkle at some point through her life. This is the story of her life, and of those close to her.
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I can appreciate how pragmatic you are writing Celestia in this story. Feels like a character that actually does have thousands of years in experience.
This story is one of so very few that makes such a full Equestria. There is a history written not to fill a page but to decorate the story as a whole, from start to finish. It makes me feel like there is an entire side to this story written in notes, details, and outlines that make up another living breathing world. Be proud Urist, you've succeeded in a place many authors don't even realize exist.
So now comes the fallout. Nice to see everypony coming together to help.
I wonder if we will see Rising again? With his training he might have survived. How will he take Gray's death? Will he change his mind about joining the Royal Guard and stay with the Watch? He was the one to raise the alarm and prevent a surprise attack, will they make him a figurehead hero? Paraded around getting metals, doing interviews, and dragged to noble parties? That seems like a surefire way to give someone survivors guilt, or make it unbearable.
Thanks for these quick updates. They really brighten my day!
Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Admittedly, there is not much I can say that other reviewers haven't already said better, but all the same definitely loved seeing Night Light helping out in the aftermath of that short attempted coup (as that would be the reality of mortals trying to go up against admittedly benevolent but still extremely powerful demigods, regardless of what Batman or Lex Luthor would want to think) as well as Velvet being upset by Night Light sneaking off TO help out. Also greatly appreciated Cadance's reassurance of Equestria in general over the radio, including Applejack, Granny Smith and Apple Bloom's reaction to the broadcast.
At any rate, definitely looking forward to more of this.
I hadn't quite put it together until recently, but Rainbow's mom is about to have a very bad time. Are we going to learn how bad soon? Or will it be awhile before we get back to Rainbow?
Chapters like this make me really wish I could upvote multiple times.
Damn, you're pumpin through these chapters and I like it
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I chuckled to myself at the idea of Night Light petitioning her to destroy the storm so the Observatory could be open. Glad you thought it was funny, too.
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Fairly on point with a good bit of this. I'm glad you, and others, have a good grasp of the political situations involved in the story.
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That was the goal, yeah. Praglestia? Pragmastia? Doesn't really have a good name, though.
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You make me blush, man - comments like this always feel like too much. I'm just grateful people seem to like the story and try not to let my ego grow.
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You'll see the fate of Rising eventually.
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Good to see you're back! Yeah alot of stuff happened, and a bit more involving all this is coming. Glad you enjoyed the speech and the Night Light section.
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You know I was seriously wondering if anyone had even made the connection between that Rainbow section and the names that kept getting mentioned. I was a bit worried that it hadn't been linked at all, because no one mentioned it. You'll see more of Rainbow soon, though.
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Thanks!
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Yeah, I'm quite enjoying a more regular writing schedule. Helps me unload some of these ideas in my head, and it feels good to write something people enjoy. Also, I'm not sure between Twilight and Luna either (In reference to your profile), although Celestia is pretty far up there for me as well. I feel like Moonbutt has a better butt, might swing it. Glad you enjoyed!
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I, too, call upon the god of the sun for things such as this.
As soon as a saw a bunch of military officers from different branches meeting in a rich aristocrat's parlor I knew it was a coup. I just got distracted by all the awesome of Cadance and Celestia kicking ass and didn't quite put together that the coup failing disastrously was going to be bad for Rainbow's family until recently.
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Moonbutt best butt :lunaemotethatstilldoesntexistforsomereason:
I wonder when there will be news on Pinkie, I'm interested in seeing how you will deal with the Pink 4th-Wall-Breaking Party Pony that moves on cartoon physics since your story have quite the serious tone.
Love how the Equestrian national anthem is a modified Americe the Beautiful. The "sea to shining sea" bit fits almost too well for this expansionist/imperialist equestia. Also, Celestia's theme as the leader espousing harmony and peace while being more than a little imperialistic feels eerily similar to Cold War America espousing democracy and freedom while propping up dictators to stop communism
Strange to see that I was 6 chapters behind.
I fixed that now.
This is a story that I have read from the start 2 or 3 times.
Hard to wait for the next bit but I will be waiting.
Keep up the amazing work.
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Well, to be fair, most of the more modern Batman stories are usually pretty serious, but the Joker does do some occasionally fourth wall breaking all the same. I have a hunch that the "fourth wall breaks" will be something reserved for comic relief moments and, even then, something only Pinkie, Cheese Sandwich and Discord will do (albeit SPARRINGLY), which makes sense as Pinkie is, by and large, a female good guy version of the Joker.
I don't think anyone commented on this yet, but where did you get that awesome cover art?
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I'd say she's more of a harmless version of Deadpool but that is my personal belief, and based on the story so far Discord is probably not his canon cheery-prankster Q-like self, more like an evil god of madness with way too much power and y'know eternal life.
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Funny you guys mention Pinkie...
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I think I found it ages ago by googling 'Twilight Sparkle Coffee'. In any case, if you mouse over the art there is a link to the source on derpi.
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Good to see you're back and still enjoying. I'm impressed you've managed to get through this three times!
Hey, if it makes you feel better, the anthem that AJ and Rara sang has almost the exact same structure.