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Awe! I love this story, it’s got me super hooked. I can’t wait to read what happens next. :)
Hello Artist, it's been awhile... I never thought I be back to read one of your stories again & I gotta say... Not a bad start with this one, but I'm worried you're just gonna delete this one for no reason, so let's not talk about that...
Now while I'm not sure, if this is a sequel or spin-off to those other stories about Pri-Twi & Human Sunset, I kinda don't care cuz I just don't wanna get my hopes up, but this story probably has the best potential to be your greatest story so far...
So I'm gonna add this tracking list, but not favorite list & I'm not gonna leave a thumbs-up, til I see this story make it to the end... I hope it goes well with this one, cuz I'm not gonna lie, I miss reading your stories...
Since when is Sunny aware Twi's a princess? Cause Twi hasn't told her the truth yet, so she can't know that.
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Its a nickname.
Well, well, well. I didn't expect you to make Human Sunset a transgender. I kinda like it as it adds another reason, why she is a perfect outcast.
Although I am curious, how she managed to hide her penis during that 10 month timeskip & not accidentally have a boner in front of Pri-Twi (Princess Twilight), but that's a talk for another day
Will all the chapter titles be this long?
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Just for this story yeah
Awe! I still LOVE this!
Oh man, a lot happened in this chapter, that I don't know what event to talk about... But at least Sunset confessed her love for Twilight... Now we see how they try to keep their relationship strong.
Damn your cliffhangers! The plot was starting to thicken!
It was just getting GOOD!
Not that it wasn't already good, but figuratively speaking!
Whoever that creep is, he better think twice & knock off all this stalking cuz if not, then he gonna die to a fire-powered girl with a demon inside of her!
P.S. I'm finally gonna leave a thumbs-up & a fave to this, Artist
Hey is there a link to the old story
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Go to my profile and click on my stories. Try to find the story called "Give me your hand and save me".
nice story I cant wait to see how it goes forward and I wonder what sunset be like in pony world if twilight ever take her for a visted.......
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Flame Spark isn't actually a demon. She's like the slightly evil side of Sunset but when they started dating Princess Twilight, she's slowly started to change
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So an alter ego then. That makes more sense
Welp Twilight's busted & now job is probably on the line, so Sunset & her old gang better find that creep asap!
Also, who's the artist that made that Sunset art piece? Is there a link I can use?
Omg, what?
It's about to get wicked.
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The artist is Marenlicious
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Thx buddy
What the hell. is the stalker has a problem with twilight and sunset or it want to make their lives miserable because of their relationship
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Can't spoil anything
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FOR F*** SAKE!!!
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Whoa chill man. Don't worry in the next chapter you will all know who the stalker is
I can't believe Celestia would do all that, just to get Twilight to Equestria! Unbelievable, but at least Sunset & Twilight finally did the nasty & it was glorious! ... But was that the Pony Sunset or her alter ego that show up?
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Flame Spark
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Thx 4 the answer
What!? Why!? How could you do that!? I'm sad.... And now I'm over it, sadly however Celestia isn't over the rejection of Twilight not returning home...
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Sunset's penis isn't magic XD wat
WELL THEN TO WAR!!!!
DALEKS ATTACK!!! PROTECT THE PRINCESS AND HER MATE!!!!
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If it isn't magic, then why is it gone? It gave that extra spice in Sunset & Twilight's love life
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The penis isn't gone it's still there.... *realizes that I made Flame's sentence wrong* I'm going to change that later
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If that's the case, you may wanna fix asap than later
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Done! Thanks for noticing it btw
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Anytime
Hold on, I must’ve read that wrong. I could’ve sworn I just read the word ‘war’....
Oh shoot, I did!
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THEN WAR IT SHALL BE!
THIS IS NOT WAR!! THUS IS PEST CONTROL!!!
That is what , essentially will happen. I don't care if you have a solar deity, love wins and I think that's a confirmed fact.
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YAAAAAASSSSS
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Haaa, so even the writer of the story has admitted to it.
CELESTIA SHALL DIE AND EQUESTRIA SHALL BOW TO THE MIGHT OF MAN!!!
Just kidding. I love your work and please keep up the stupendous, amazing LEGENDARY work Artistkun.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome. Also you may want to have Flame and Sunset fight in different styles. Flame being more brutal and Sunset being a bit less but also more "take down" instead of "BURN BURN BURN, IN A RING OF FIRE!" as Flame would probably do.
Also WHO THE F DID THEY GET AN ARMY UNDERWATER AND SNEAK SAID ARMY FROM A PORTAL SIGHT TO THE BEACH? OR WAS IT A TELEPORTATION SPELL AND SEAPONY MAGICS?
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You know the latest EG Special "Spring Breakdown"?
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So Celestia marched an army tie a jungle island, went through magic quicksand, came back out, reformed rank, activate water magic and proceed to march UNDERWATER TO THE TARGET!?!?!
WHY, OH I DON'T KNOW, FLY!
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Man you are desperate for an explanation okay then. Princess Celestia used her magic to create a passage way for her army to go to the human world, she tracked down her student's magic of course before doing that.
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Plus I thought I could do a badass entrance
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Thank you and sorry for forcing out an explanation.
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It's okay
Haha I was laughing alongside sunset at that insult!
...WHAT!!!!!!!!CELESTIA REALLY?!?!?!