I haven't read this fic, and I probably never will. I just want you to know, when I saw the picture, and read the first sentence of the description, I thought, "Man driving home in the dark and rain hits Princess Celestia with his car." I know that's not your story, but I somewhat wish it was.

do you think you could remove all those messages in this fic, there really annoying now that its complete.

2457110 Ok thanks for telling me that I was goanna get around to it but forgot.

If you're still looking for a proof reader, I'd gladly fill that position because the errors are really bothering me ^^;

2983513 wow thanks abunch. Your comments are the ones that I hope to find in all of my stories.

so many grammar errors and when he just out of the blue started talking about war....just no.

going to finish the chapter but good god that's a really bad start. is English your primary language and did you have an editor check your story first before uploading it? i hope it gets better...

3847294 I wrote that comment a couple of months ago. Why'd you even reply to it? Matter of fact, why would you go though the comment section and reply to older comments?

The grammar and phrasing is just terrible, the execution of it is poor. no subtlety whatsoever...god no subtlety
the part with the pregnant mom and her filly was touching and heartbreaking. i liked it either way

stayclassy

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meine freund you have made a Wunderbar story, and don't let anyone tell you other wise.

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Socially akward? Join the fucking club.

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...How does the guy have to explain war to them?

Not gonna lie, this was probably written by a middle schooler.