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DAT PLOT
Hey, what is a hispital bed?
You weren't kidding when you said unedited.
1241809 its a bed that has his spit all over it
9/10 pargraphs had spelling errors and names not being capitalized. Vader is most displeased by thi-
Vader please. Was still good to read- *choking*
Learn thy place newb.
2613923 that's enough Vader we still have the death star plans to go over, let him go.
i dont really care for spelling issues aslong as its a good story :) keep up the good work lad!
if i could make a suggestion that would make the story much MUCH better than it is now...
go over it. please.
your story has alot of really good potential but the spelling errors as well as repetitive word usage and grammer errors are dragging it all down. if you could get someone be it yourself or someone else to go over it to fix even just half of these mistakes your story would be marginally better.
just my opinion though <3