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Remove the italic symbol and try italicize it again, and you forgot the (') at the end of the sentence. But anyways good chapter and Can't wait for the sequel.
Awww man. Sad that it ended. But I knew it would come sooner or later
Yay.
horay another HumanxCelestia Fic
I was expecting more of a "final battle" than that, what with all the prep and posturing, by the time the fight came around I was expecting something like the lord of the rings or 300.
Oh well they cant all be perfect.
If you change anything I would put a real battle in there instead of that rushed ending.
For all of you raging, me and Jerry are working on the first chapter of The Blackbell Chronicles as I speak. Be patient.
very good story.
kind of sad.
i want to read the battle and see how they got blackbell back :3
2193681 hehe I was the guy who gave him that ending. I told him to go for a The Most Dangerous Game type ending where there is lots of build up, but the final fight is left to your imagination.
i laguhed i cryed and 3 times i died .
i could feel the love they had deep inside.
there love so strong was not denied.
so strong so pure it must endure
it melted my heart thats for sure!
never stop writing your work touches souls a precious gift you have
thank you
respectfully
Belgan
very nice
that's the way twilight ended but you made it better