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liked this chapter, turned out good. can't wait for more
Good chapter, hope to see more soon!
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good chapter
So much improvement.
One tiny problem tho. Tears weld up.... should read welled up.
Does anyone else think that he is spelling some words wrong on porpose?
yes im reading it yes ill have nightmares of the horrible grammar.....
chapter 3 is okay but you need to work on the grammar here try using spell check
First i see the horrible grammar, then the stupid amounts of misspellings, then after that everything looks rushed, i never asked for this...
3727762 It's sad too. This story has a ton of potential if someone would just go through it and clean up the grammar and the awkward dialogue.
It called like not liek