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Just a little comment.
When you were talking about Dash attacking Ajax, you said she put her fists in front of her face.
It should be hooves
Other than that good work. Definitely tracking this.
ANTHRO
jk
I like what I see so far.
faving it
Another warhammer 40k fic
i am a major 40k fan i hope you continue this i amd likeing and tracking btw is the halo skulls your own chapter?
Damn! Nice work, I know a small bit of the Space Marines. But I got to say this sounds great. Looking forward to future chapters. And I like that the pony universe are anthros, makes more sense.
That was pretty friggin awesome.
Keep going, this has caught my interest.
Anthro? Ah, I was wondering about the hands. I like anthro as much as I like quadruped.
Never really knew much about Space marines comparatively, but I think your version makes 'em more... human.
Here's hoping Dashie gets out alright. Well written, enjoyed the pace, couldn't see grammatical mistakes so as with all good stories; faved.
never was a warhammer fan that stuff costed to much
but ill give this story a read
wow im supprised at how good that was
well i once again cant wait for the next chapter
424050 Indeedo, Halo Skulls are founded from the Ultramarines.
423794 Anthro characters, hands work better in this universe.
well that was fast
425265 Did first 2 chapters weeks ago. 3rd will be finished in a day or so.
425269
i see well thats good news then
As a brony and a Warhammer fan i can only give this exellent fic two thumbs up!
It is wery well written and had me inching towards the end of my seat the whole time, i can't wait for the future chapters.
Another chapter so soon? Excellent work dear sir.
425240 nice looking forward to more of this
425245
Ah, I see. Sorry about the confusion there.
...Odd I would have made more sense to me if Ajax had went with his armor on or outright refused to go. But that's just me. A Space Marine without his armor sounds alien to me.
427999 Space marines without armour are described as wearing tabards and robes. And it isn't unheard of for a space marine to yield every once in a while.
It just seems odd to me. But it's still makes laugh at the idea of those guards trying something against a Space Marine. Because they'd have as much affect as a BB Gun shooting a U.S. Soldier in full gear. XD
Oh this was interesting. But I got to say I love that you have thrown Captain Titus into this. I really like him.
432851 A good few characters will make an appearance. And considering the horus heresy never took place in this universe, who can tell who's going to show up.
oh shit the Emperor might make an appearance.
This is so freakin badass
sweet Titus is in the story. oh and question: is Proteus the space marine that turned Titus in to the Inquisition for "heresy"? i just cant remember exactly. anyway great chapter, keep up the good work, and i cant wait for the next one haha!
425245
Ewww, anthro.
I'll never understand why people make them anthro, kind of ruins the story. I read for the ponies.
celestia has hands?
433620 No, that would be Leandros. Proteus is the space marine in the 'movie' Ultramarines.
434064 Story would have been ruined if they were quadriped. Tried it and couldn't take it seriously enough. I was considering changing it back but it would seem people enjoy the anthro approach.
434131 All pony characters are anthro, it better compliments their interaction with the space marines and other species that may enter the picture.
434688
Then you might as well have made your own species up and made a war-hammer fic, whats a pony fic without the pony?
Look at the other warhammer fics here to see how to write them as quads.
434820 Technically the only warhammer element in the universe it is set in are the space marines, everything else is customized. I'm sorry you don't find the anthro aspect of the story appealing, but this is my story and I will write it my own way.
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Ah thanks for the correction dude. Oh and the dude from the Ultramarines movie? Dayum I didn't expect him to get a reference in this story but then again I also didn't expect Titus to be there as well haha!
I started reading, the beginning was good, but then I looked at the comments and saw ANTHRO.
Why?
Edit: F*ck it, I'm reading anyways!
Tracked
435651 The only reason I made the pony characters anthro is because of the way they interact with marines and other species. Hooves are just very impractical, especially when I'm using an element of reality when it comes to physics. Short version : Hooves can't hold guns :/
I have no idea what everyone's problem is with anthro. They're still the same characters, same setting, same everything except for the fact that they walk upright and have hands. Hands are so much better, anyway.
*pause*
Throne! What's wrong with you people?! Are you all just misanthropic or something? Can't take a little wibbly-wobbly digits? You must all be strapped on tight to the furry-hater bandwagon. I really cannot conceive of a justifiable reason for this immature prejudice.
Also, the story is good, albeit completely lacking any proofreading and editing. Spelling mistakes, capitalization errors, and grammatical botches abound. Your vocabulary is excellent, though. You've captured a significant amount of the 40K feel, along with the MLP vibe mixed in. I'll read the rest and track this.
442531 Thank you for your support, and I will look into the proof reading. Did not organize a proof reader as the last one took far to long.
I LOVE THIS STORY
its very unique
never seen an anthro-pony warhammer crossover 
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Remember, the Blood Angels have your back on this one...
Excellent story. And thanks to the Emperor. Finally someone thought anthro ponies into this dark and cruel universe fits much better than those four-legged ponies.
WWAAAAAAAAAAAGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
orks? damn shit is getting real and we need a "Dis gun b gud gif right here!"
Orcs! FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....
Greenskins
Wow. This is a blast from the past. Pre-read this a couple of months ago on /fic/ and ran into it here entirely by chance.
(Yeah, I bitched about the anthro even then. Kinda odd to get lumped onto the "furry-hate" wagon for it, though. Is the only true furry the furry with hands?)
Reading...
Come on boyz lets zog us some humies
shits about to get real
lez do dis!
In the 40k universe, the greenskins are known as "Orks" in that very spelling to help differentiate between the J. R. R. Tolkien orcs.
Also, you seem to be abusing the period key on your keyboard. Three dots is enough to show a short pause in dialogue or a trail-off. Any more is just overkill. You really don't need to emphasize it that much. On a short side note:
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AIMIN'?! WOTS DAT?!?!