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AWESOME I DEMAND MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome story dude keep it up and there was (if i nay say so) alot of grammatical errors but i was able to make it around em also plz update MOAR!!!!!! and make longer chapters. thats all
quick dude i have to say something the predators wouldnt kill granny smith because 1. there is no honor in killing an old lady and predators hold a very high honor and 2. she wasnt armed
but very good story though and i look forward to reading it
lol wheres arnold swisinager when you need em GET TO DA CHOPPAH!!!!!!!!!!!
if you want i can edit the story for you
Back at chapter 1 i think the 3 days later thing can be from the predetors side or the alens tell me what u think ok
still lovin the story and i love how u put in the predator who helped derpy u gotta hav so its a more over 2 v 1 with the humans and preds vs aliens cuz the preds hunt for the challenge and the humans to survive but same for predators they r fighting for survival (im ranting in confusing way arent i?)
DEATH SO MUCH DEATH :D
can you have the pedetors team up with the humans and ponys that might be cool
907040 we'll see maby i will and maby i wont BUT................ you just have to wait and see
907232ok oh and im making my first fic can you tell me if did good for my first one or not
the tital is Cheifs stay in Equestria
Loving this so far. But maybe you should consider getting an editor? I know that some people are very picky about grammar and spelling. Other than that, you're doing just fine.
Ha, this has better ratings than your last book. Gona get reading now. Let you know what I think
You asked in the last chapter who we would like to see go... What about trixie? Make it slow and painfull please
i think you should have the pony found on the air field be rainbow dash, she sees a jet take off and takes it as a race. she breaks the sound barrier causing the sonic rainboom, when that happens the jet that she was "Racing" goes out of control luckly it was a very old version of the F-11 and it crashes. the pilot bails and the parachute doesn't deploy so rainbow catches him, saving his life. carry on with your imagination my friend.
917700 and that right there is good but I'm gonna need some help with the air force stuff. Like what type of jet has a two seater (you can probely guess what I have in mind. Now I'm gonna continue with what you said and there is gonna be a war against the Russians and America. Rainbow dash is gonna be on the US side. That's all I'm gonna tell you my friend
.........for now
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a two seater jet...... i think its a SR-15 or something. or if you play black ops "Black Bird" then there is also F-35 is also a two seater. OH! MiG-35 is also good. but its up to you.
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Northrop F-5 is also a spectacular two-seat jet. expensive too.
Lol. "trioxide" might wanna fix that.
ohhh! another idea! have the elite pred. bring trixie back to the tree house with twilight and the others, shes in tears and they somewhat accept her but the ponies reject her but the two humans help her to recovery with the help of read heart. theeennn you can carry on from there
922877 lol I didn't think he was gonna actually hav trixie be murdered by the aliens lol and the slow and painful part lol
You're a great writer, I can tell, but daaaaamn there are tons of grammar and spelling errors. You got Microsoft word? If so, use that instead. It is great for picking up those errors.
956249 ni i don't sorry. Like i said before this is only me second fic and im still tyring to get better at writeing. Along with other things that are happeneding in my life. So sorry i dont have microsoft word
907565 yeah sure sorry for the long response all u have to do is send me the link bt PM and i'll read it. Good luck to u my friend.
hey, if you want to. i could possibly make you clop scene. give me some materials to work with, and i got it. PM me when you have the time, and want me to get started.
AWESOME i like it that some of the preds teamed up with the humans and the ponies (also next victims: gilda and the flim flam brothers) plz?
yes yeS YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
and also ur welcome for encouraging you i really enjoyed this fic but is it over? i hope it aint but if it is allow me to congratulate you and say a job well done
964780 well we got one more chapter to go AND you can keep an eye on my profile you'll see that im about to have ANOTHER fic up soon. Hopefully by the end of this week. So keep and eye out.
OH and its gonna have human again with romance sorry i just like to write that stuff
964795 awesome after this next fic ill tell you my idea for a fic
2 letters D.S.
good way to end this fic ill be sure to read the deleted scene (giggity) and yea
Just to let everypony know, i am the one making the deleted scene but its not going to be a separate page, or book, novel? what ever. it will be posted on here by the amazing "PonyLover" just wanted to put that out there.
HMMMMMM maybe... maybe (fathers? da fuq?)
YYYYYEEEEEESSSSSSS
if thats ok with u that is
1116220ok now wht was tht fic idea u have?
1127799 try out a dead space fic where either isaac goes to equestria or one of the mane 6 goes into dead space
somehow incorporate this song in one of your fics i feel it would be awesome
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3aF9AJm0RFc&list=PL20F2023FDB825DAB&index=58&feature=plpp_video
shes gonna freak when she hears the full story on how aliens and predators
EPIC
wow shit about to go down
Lol Zecora would annoy the shit outa me anyway. She isn't even that interesting of a character. And how about one with twilight? She seems to get ignored when it comes to romance
1129862 hmmmmmmm yeah sure why not? Now i'm only gonna do Twilight becasue in another fic "A cantor lot tales" She seem WAY out of charecter.....just got an idea......hmmmmm
Well looks like I just rocked the vote
dude this is heavy I LOVE IT
ILL SAY AGAIN FOR THE THIRD TIME
SEQUEL
uhh, you do know you put 'ass' instead 'add' right?