[2nd Person story involving you and Octavia.] You're a pretty talented piano player, trained by your perfectionist of a father. The issue is that you grew up hating what you do so well. Octavia becomes rather fond of your talent and tries to show you there is something special in what you do. Your past might be a road block to your happy future though and it seems Octavia is willing to help you overcome it.
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nice story
MOAR
Another one of Octavia and me
color me pleased as punch
Damn it all, people keep doing Octavia 2nd person Romances! It's going to make the one I'm doing seem corny and boring as hell! Oh, nice job btw, so have a thumb.
So far I like it. Personally, I'd have the story progress a little bit slower, but that may not (and probably would not) suit your style. Though you can always give it a try. I like longer, slower-paced stories, but hey, you don't have to care about what I like or not. :D Let's see what next chapter brings.
Like it so far. For some reason i always like stories with Tavi in them. I will be watching this one for sure.
Another one of THESE? Oh for god's sake.
One of these times I'm going to give one of these a try, and if it ends up being schlocky feel-good wish fulfillment like I have always suspected these things of being, it will be the last time.
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Nah man, write your story, which will probably do pretty damn good, and thanks for the praise.
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When I do a slow paced scene I draw it out to a point where you just get horribly bored, at least I do anyway. However, it doesn't mean I'm willing to give it a go.
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Honestly, I don't have much experience writing 2nd person stories. For that reason, I can't say if this is a great style to dwindle in. However, I can say its a interesting new experience for me.
Second paragraph: "Dad, on the other hoof..."
Third paragraph: "You, on the other hand..."
You can't have both, man!
Okay, this is a pretty great story, and Octavia is by far my favorite back ground pony.
You should probably reread the entire thing over again and fix those little mistakes that make me want to rip off my left testicle, it being my least favorite of the two.
I think this is going to be a good read!
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Ah shit. The lore of ponies forbid the sudden growth of fingers. I'll fix that up.
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Is this "You" a pony ?
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Indeed "you" are. There is no Human tag on this after all.
My mind would be yelling "someone help me!"
What I would say in that situation:
Could you kindly stop doing that.
What I would think in that situation:
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I would be like :duh fuq are you doing, get off me.
I would be like :duh fuq are you doing, get off me.
"Um, excuse me, your leg seems to be in constant contact with me."
Also, 1030858 , that made me lolz.
Ain't it just luck that I was on around 1:15am EST so I could be one of the first ones to read the new chapter? xD
Also, I hope it works out with....er..."me" and Octavia, and also "my" dad. LOL.
1065402 I know really, hooray for insomnia.
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Insomnia and a lot of caffeine...I'm a robot who runs on highly caffeinated beverages rather then batteries.
1065519 I fucking love coffee, I can't run without a cup of coffee.
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Coffee is alright, I just never built a taste for it. Tea on the other hand is rather nice. Darn thing as more caffeine in it then coffee. Might explain I write into this late of night.
Two chapters? Bad ass!
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Let's see if my mind can agree with three...
Why am I getting a bad feeling now
Anyways good story
1067966 I shall slowly coax your subconscious into writing a third one.... :P
Never seen drunk Octavia before. Its funny and adorable at the same time.
Drunk Octavia is best drunk pony.
Can't wait for the next chapter as always. :D
I could imagen he was like. "HELL YEAH"
Not sure aspirins would help during a hangover. Great story so far tho.
*SUCCESSSTALLION*
Been a very long time since I wrote something this long before. If this is somewhat dragged out at some points, forgive me. Anyway, enjoy the read!
1100674 What is with you and French kissing ponies?
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Uh, I can't say for sure really. Perhaps I just find it very intimate or something along those lines. Not really much else I can say on the subject.
Oh hell yes! This story is amazing as ever.
Those last three lines were just filled with emotion. I felt as if i was him.
Melody is just evil. No worst than evil, she is a jerk.
Another great chapter. Keep 'em comming!
One thought came to mind: Play like crazy
Get him to play the Death Waltz.
Make him play Death Waltz or "UN Owns Her?". Maybe Night of Nights would be good.
Do you still update this fic?
I hope so. It's darn good!
I JUST FOLLOW THE CROWD
Excellent chapter! I actually put this story on my back burner for reading because it was incomplete and all that, now I see why that was a good idea. This story is great, and that you stopped RIGHT at the climactic part... Ooh I am angry now. Sir, you must return to writing this story! Finish it for your fans! You have at minimum, two chapters left! You are so close to having a finished, GOOD, story!!
good story indeed, though I hope you plan to finish it sometime.
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One day...
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Then I shall wait for that day.....
I don't know why, but every time I read an Octavia 2nd-person fic, I can't help but read in a British accent.
Sooooo...you alive there pal?